Be My Eyes

Name: Be My Eyes
Author: Ji Zong

成为我的眼睛

by Ji Zong (寂总)

Status: Completed
Length: 15k Words
Genre: Light Novel
Audience: Male
Subgenre: Original Fantasy
Updated: 1y ago
Source: Qidian

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Synopsis

"The eye is a window in this room, and I once owned it. Through the window, I could see children's graffiti on the white wall, trace the dancing postures when the wind blew, and look forward to the blue sky, sea, and wilderness. "Now, the window is gone, and I am stuck in a narrow room surrounded by endless darkness, not knowing where the light is. " "On a brisk autumn morning, another window appeared in the room. There was nothing but you outside the window. Through the window, I looked at your quiet and beautiful face, and my heart was filled with joy. " "I know that this window will not exist for long. It will soon break, causing me to return to that dark world again, to the world where I can't see you slightly raising the corners of your mouth when you smile. " "You know, I'm afraid of the dark, so I wanted to ask you for a favor. " ………… "Please, be my eyes. "

Reader comments

The change in perspective of the male and female protagonists is very wonderful, giving people a bright feeling; the weather in the diary gives readers plot hints and sets the mood of the chapter. This foreshadowing is very good; at first I thought the ending was that Xihe died and Sijun got Xihe's cornea, but I didn't expect the ending to be reversed, which is very good; The ending is a bit rushed and too short; we can update some of Xihe's side stories, whether we have a new partner or still miss Si Jun, we can write about Xihe's future; also, the background setting is a bit not good, too strange, and coupled with the national sentiment, it is a bit difficult to empathize with;
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Overall it's good-looking, the description is very delicate, the plot is overall good, the relationship between the male and female protagonists is also very interesting, and the perspective switching is also very good 😍😍😍
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