The Sword of the Swordsman of the Heavens

Although there are some private parts, the writing is still very exciting, especially the new rules set for each martial arts world, which is very innovative, but the correlation is not enough, such as the improvement of the upper Dantian, middle Dantian, and lower Dantian, and the definition of martial arts and combat power in each world. If the settings can be more complete, the results should be better. Five-star praise.

To put it bluntly, it would be useless if Linghu Chong befriended Tian Boguang and whoever came to clean him up! No matter what the reason is, it's all about scolding, but for this reason, Linghu Chong can't justify it no matter what he does! There is no right or wrong in other vendettas. If you come out to join the Jianghu, don't talk about what you have or don't have. As long as you don't harm the people, you kill me and I will kill you, each according to his own ability. Whoever has the bigger fist is right! But because Linghu Chong was friends with Tian Boguang, everyone had a reason to kill Linghu Chong! Not to mention Yue Buqun!

It's unwatchable when the fighting power is broken. The protagonist can fight Zhang Sanfeng. In The Legend of the Condor Heroes, even Ma Yu can hurt him. I'm really speechless. The original inconsistency about the realm of martial arts cannot withstand scrutiny. In The Condor Heroes, the protagonist should be invincible. If you don't know how to write Invincible, you can read the novels of Invincible style to learn from it, or you can ask the people of Tianlong to shoot vultures. Don't make it difficult for the protagonist to defeat a second-rate master like Chen Mei Ma. What a waste of such a good first two/stories.

Adults all look at their stance, and Linghu Chong cannot be sorry for the kindness Lao Yue and his wife gave him in raising him, no matter his stance or anything else.

Xu Xingchen is too rustic. If you don't know how to name it, just open the Ming History and find a few and combine them.

Like a teacher, like a disciple. In fact, if you look at Lao Yue's disciples, you will know that he has a clear look of stupidity. If he is so scheming and has developed his skills early, how could he have a name like Junzijian, which is so simple at first sight?

Read the comments below. These people simply don't understand Swordsman. This novel is not about the issue of chivalry or not. It is about the position of good and evil, the interests of sects, and the depravity and fall of human nature. The only person who can be called Shangxia is Lin Pingzhi in the opening scene. Yue Buqun also completely degenerated after Linghu Chong failed to hold up the mud wall and saw that the sect had no hope of revival and Songshan became aggressive. Linghu Chong's problems: 1. He kept secrets from Feng Qingyang, whom he had only met a few times, and his master and his mother who had raised her up. This was disloyal. 2. He didn't watch the younger junior sister steal Zixia's magical skill for him. He even tapped the holes of the six monkeys and left them alone on the mountain, causing them to be killed. This is unkind. 3. It was unfilial to remain indifferent when the mistress of the ruined temple was pinched and insulted. 4. He and Tian Boguang, as well as the demons behind him, called themselves brothers. This was a matter of stance. This was unjust. Linghu Chong was a thoroughly unfaithful, unfilial, unkind and unjust person, and he could not be cleansed.

I was silent after reading the first three chapters. The protagonist is from 3 to 8 years old. He has practiced martial arts for 5 years to create martial arts. His understanding of martial arts is only in these 5 years. The original martial arts with the same effect were written out by the author, and the protagonist was asked to create his own, and use the exhaustive method to create the function... It is easy for others to practice step by step and make themselves useless. If you use the exhaustive method when you don't have a golden finger, you have gone crazy in practicing Wujue. If you use the exhaustive method, you will spit out blood on your face.

What have you written in these recent posts? You are inexplicably the leader of the Ming Cult, but you also set up a charity hall to redeem your martial arts and teach Xie Xun the Nine Sun Magic Kung Fu. You are crazy. Please don't use your modern sense of inexplicable superiority to look at the ancients. Besides, do you really understand the true meaning of the law not being transmitted to the six ears and the secret of the secret book? Profound martial arts secrets are the high-precision technology of modern society. Look at any country in modern society that companies casually give people their high-precision technology? They always inexplicably laugh at the ancients for cherishing their knowledge, but they don't realize that they are the ones who don't know what they mean. They regard the martial arts secrets of the ancients that are equivalent to the core technology of modern society's companies as junk knowledge that does not produce value in modern society. That's why they feel that the ancients cherish their knowledge and spread the skills casually. They simply do not understand that the martial arts secrets of the ancients are the military technology of modern society.

To put it bluntly, there is a question that the gangsters cannot answer: if they were Linghu Chong, what would he do if Tian Boguang rapes Yi Lin? Should he die on the spot like Chi Baicheng from Taishan, or should he stand by and watch?

Without a golden finger, how can you be better than the ancient aborigines if you practice the martial arts of the ancients? Only with reasonable logic can it become a story.

But seeing that after changing the world, I immediately suppressed the protagonist's combat power, which is still a bit overwhelming. Alas, it is true. In the previous world, I could kill the undefeated protagonist of the East. In the Heaven and Dragon Sword Chronicles, the last debuff was taken out by Xie Xun. There is no way to talk about upgrading and reducing dimensions. This gold-type martial arts world has been targeted by aliens and used two-dimensional foil, right? In fact, you, the top master in the martial arts world, don't even have the power of an excavator. What kind of latitude are you talking about? . .

Your talent is as outstanding as Zhang Sanfeng's. You have worked hard to cultivate the true energy, and you have imitated nature and combined with modern knowledge to master the true energy in detail. Linghu Chong studied the Dugu Nine Swords and also had the true energy. It's disgusting, isn't it? Dugu Nine Swords is a sword move, not a ginseng fruit flat peach. It was created by Dugu Qiubei when he was immature in the first half of his life. Even if it is magical, it will take at least several decades for Linghu Chong to reach the peak of his internal power. Even if he is the protagonist, he will have to have at least ten years to complete his internal power before he can transform his true energy, right? What is Linghu Chong's internal strength like? You don't read books, do you? He cheated, cheated, and was greedy for alcohol. Besides, his natural beauty is just a move, and there are not many shortcuts to internal strength. Linghu Chong's Dugu Nine Swords began to show its power after he learned the star-absorbing method and opened up the protagonist's halo in a short period of time. Otherwise, he would be like fighting Dongfang Bubai. Even Yue Buqun's Zixia Magic Skill for decades is not as powerful as Linghu Chong's internal strength before he learned the star-absorbing method. Isn't it interesting for you to write like this except to disgust people? Even if Yang Guo has built up his internal strength from the Ancient Tomb Sect since he was a child, and after decades of hard training in Dugu Qiufeng during the mountain torrent, his sword skills have matured and surpassed Dugu's Nine Swords epee, which has no edge, large skill, and no skill, so that he can be on par with the older generation. Linghu Chong can just cheat and practice internal strength in 1-2 years to close the gap. Are you kidding me? I have read a few chapters of You Charge, and now I feel sick and have given up the book. I can't read it anymore!

In the first chapter, he became addicted to poison, and he created his own martial arts at the age of 7 or 8? Where does the foundation come from? Do you rely on lust?

Nowadays, there are many novels written, but few feel that they are spiritual and well-structured. Martial arts have to collect stamps to acquire various magical powers. Lang Fanyun and Ling Donglai in Huang Yi's novels did not do this, but they are still one of the most powerful characters in martial arts novels. Isn't there a saying, there is no such thing as the strongest martial arts, only the strongest person. This group of people who are mindlessly chasing magic secrets are just like the villains or sidekicks who plan their whole lives for the secrets.

To create your own martial arts, you must first learn hundreds of martial arts and then improve them according to your own needs. To put it simply, it means first being complex and then simplifying, and then using one sword to create thousands of techniques. For this process, you must have incredible qualifications and more than 20 years of knowledge. To put it simply, any prodigy who can create martial arts is a top talent!

God damn martial arts and charm, why are you writing fantasy? Will adding these realms make your novel better? Just superfluous

I didn't read the book, so I just read the comments section. It's so lively! I don't understand the thinking circuit of Xi Linghu Chong. He is just a refined egoist. Does he care about other people's evaluations? Not give a damn about! It doesn't matter whether you are black or defeated! Coupled with his cold nature, he looks like a hot-blooded young man on the surface, but in fact he is a dissolute and free-spirited man. He considers himself unruly and loves freedom. He is weak-willed, has extraordinary talents, and has a sense of responsibility but not much! It's just that I don't want to be disciplined by nature, I don't want to be pressured by a boss, I'm just naturally rebellious! This kind of person can do well no matter what era he is in, and he can fly to the sky if he is in the spotlight! But it starts to fail in the middle period. If you don't go into seclusion later, you will die miserably!

I originally thought it was normal for people in Swordsman to criticize Linghu Chong and Yue Buqun. After all, there are normal people and selfish people in society, and it is understandable to agree with the characters in the story. But I never expected that in order to argue for Linghu Chong's innocence, some people even said that Linghu Chong was not a disciple of Huashan because he had no writing skills.

I think the sword is not that important, the Qi is important. If nothing else, your sword practice is superb, it is useless without internal strength, but once the internal strength arises, it is incomparable to swordsmanship, just like the commander, what can defeat the skill of three hundred swords?

I finally found this book, and then the first chapter was poisoned to me. At what age will the protagonist learn Huashan swordsmanship and basic internal skills, and then create his own martial arts? Then you should be able to calculus after kindergarten, and you should be able to solve Goldbach's conjecture after high school mathematics. Isn't the author unable to do it? 🤭

AI has a lot of polish and a lot of poisonous points. I guess the author knows it well. The article is obviously rough, but it still leaves some traces. It is not recommended to waste time on this kind of novel unless it is really boring.

I have seen many stories about astronomical characters traveling through martial arts, such as the divine eagle, the dragon, and the like, but almost all of them used the plot and characters of the original story to improve their own strength, and in the end they continued to pretend to be awesome and ascended to other worlds. But this is the first time I have seen this kind of book. The main character has a bottleneck in swordsmanship in Huashan Mountain and then goes down the mountain. Although this part of the plot is about seeing various martial arts as the main line, the exchanges with various people are weird to read. The strength is not overwhelming, so you need to hide your clumsiness. Practicing the evil-proofing sword technique, I almost failed in the latter. I feel that this is the routine I watched in TV series when I was a child. The protagonist does not have the invincible strength but insists on seeking death and then the plot unfolds. Yu Canghai, who has practiced the evil-proofing sword technique for a month, almost failed to do it, but the protagonist wants to start Dongfang Invincible again and wants to release him. I feel that the protagonist is too desperate.

A circle of people come to trouble the protagonist. The protagonist is close to the best in the world. The protagonist defeats these people and then lets them go completely. He is convinced.

I haven't read the book yet, so I read the reviews and decided not to read it.

After reading Chapter 108, I felt that it's no wonder that Jin Yong can become a classic. When I saw the witty plots in the article, I couldn't help but roll my eyes.

What the hell is the Condor? If someone wants to kill you, why are you let go twice? In Yitian, you could collect martial arts reference, but later you did it in Mingjiao, and the six major martial arts schools were also let go. In Swordsman, the pig's feet still look like a human. The problem behind it is very serious. I can't stand it anymore. It's a waste of my starting coins.

I vomited. I saw the protagonist, the old man, screaming. It was so disgusting.

No heroine🐢Male novel, don't read it

Why are there creatures like Yue Chui? There is a saying that it is better to be a real villain than a hypocrite. The first reaction of the hypocrite among them is Yue Buqun, who is already a benchmark of hypocrite, and the coffin board is sealed! No one who has read novels or TV series can do such a magical operation? I have not seen a marketing account! Are there more people who do one thing on the surface and another behind the scenes? Have they developed empathy? If you go black, you can also blacklist the three views of Yue Buqun. Isn't it the same as being blind with one's eyes open? This is so tough-talking and Yue Buqun is compared with Tian Boguang, has Tian Boguang become a saint? Except for the background of the flower picker, a bad thing has not been accomplished, and he has made a promise to smell the fragrance and know the woman? How did this group of blind people come into being? Where do these guys who don't read all the novels and TV series come from? I remember that several dramas changed the final BOOS to Yue Buqun.