Tony Stark of All Worlds

The writing is too boring. Although the protagonist is a shithead, the author has no subjective initiative at all in writing. I don't think the shithead will honestly follow the flow of the game, so it is better to write the protagonist as an ordinary person.

This kind of introduction, I don't even want to read it for free

He who stabs others in the face forgets in the middle and forgets in the end

The author is quite brave, but it is too difficult to use Tony, a popular character with distinctive characteristics and a full-bodied character in the movie, as the protagonist. This is also the reason why many people are used to writing about time travel, and just blame the OOC reasons on substitutions.

I saw Chapter 8 of Iron Man 2. I don't know why, but I always feel that the taste of this chapter has changed a bit. The protagonist will often smile and look at everyone with a "joking" look in his eyes, looking at strangers and gods. Thor is written like a clown and Ancient One is written like a servant. Their judgments on events are becoming more and more arbitrary. I think you are a god. You are a god. Why? Because the names are similar, it's hard to convince readers, and it feels like the writing is becoming more and more deliberate and mindless, which was not the case at the beginning

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The writing is too boring. If the author has writing experience, this book will be well written and it will be a very good book about astronomy. Unfortunately, the author is not strong enough and does not need to follow the rules. As for Iron Man, every world must come up with some technology that shocks the world. Such pretentiousness is popular everywhere.

It can allow Tony to experience some science fiction worlds, which will help him relieve his anxiety, collect technology he doesn't understand, and obtain equipment that is beyond his time.

Evaluation: This is a typical online novel, that is, nonsense literature. It seems to talk a lot, but most of it is useless content. The novelty of the setting will soon be worn away by the meaningless content.

After reading the comments, you will know that this is the gap between an ordinary person and a genius. Using an ordinary person's cognition to describe the thinking of a genius, do you think the world in the eyes of a primary school student is the same as the world in the eyes of a scientific research boss? When it comes to home, it means that the author's cognition and imagination are insufficient, and his morality is not up to par.

After reading the first few chapters, it was a bit rough. The inner drama is entirely from an ordinary person's perspective. If you want to write it from Tony Stark's perspective, you must substitute a arrogant genius scientist. A genius scientist traveled through time, how would he want to travel through time? What technology can achieve this? When I picked up the pad, I will study all the contents inside and try to understand the reasons for the current situation. Once out of danger, he will study the design of the escape cabin and find everything that can be used. It can be something Tony Stark dismisses (the escape boat is poorly designed, the water resistance is not perfectly matched, and the power design is a mess) It can also be something Tony Stark can't do (Tony knocked on the shell of the escape capsule, and there was a muffled sound under his knuckles, The outer wall material of this escape boat seems to be some kind of high-strength alloy, but it is not like steel. If he could go back to the laboratory, he would have to knock off a piece and take it back to see the composition of the material) The result can be good or bad, but the process must be there (it can even be water-resistant).

The moment I saw Tony and Lu Dantou looking at each other affectionately, I no longer had the desire to read. Just as I saw the last sentence "It's time", I swiped the screen to jump here to write a comment.

It's better to seize the person Shit Da Kou, Shi Da Kou can't be so disciplined and write with the same IQ as ordinary people! No wonder the entry limit is waived! ～～(ಡωಡ)hiahiahia

Iron Man is here to rub with his bare hands. How can he rub without missiles or hammer? Heat with his hands?

Is this about Tony Stark? ? Still a time traveler wearing skin! ! This kind of personality change is too conflicting! Too many private goods affect the perception! !

Stark is a person cursed by knowledge. He is confident when facing technological creations, not you. . .

How do you write this setting? If you don't have the logic or the brains, it's better not to set up Tony. It's better to take over.

The choice and entry point of the first world are wrong. The first world of Zhutian Novel Stream is very critical. 70% Of the authors who choose less popular ones will have poor data due to poor reading performance. It is difficult for me to get into the first world because I don't know the background setting. I will understand the background of the story for the beginning. I will only understand it after I am attracted in the middle and late stages. A poor choice of the beginning will lead to poor user stickiness. Don't expect that in a fast-paced society, you will calm down and read the early stages.

The front part is so boring! At the beginning of Deep Sea Trek, the main theme is that there are few resources, and it feels like a clever woman can't make a meal without rice. However, Stark is a super technological genius after all, and ordinary people may be stifled. But Stark might be able to create a strong AI robot. But the author didn't write that feeling. Ten thousand words is too boring, and the Deep Sea Trek game is also boring

Are all recent updates written by Ai? ? Too messy

You're all Stark, why don't you go to Game of Thrones for a while?

Just by looking at the title of the book, I don't know what you want to write about. Stark is a Marvel character. Looking at the title of the book, you can only think that this is a novel about Stark time travel, or Stark time travel. Then read it according to these two points, one is the starting point of the time traveler borrowing Stark's identity, which is cool with the Marvel plot prophet, and the other is the reverse acquisition system of the indigenous Stark... This is what you wrote. I really don't know how easy it is to write about this subject. According to the original setting, Stark's abilities have surpassed modern science. To write about Stark's abilities, it should be a book about learning and mastery, describing Stark's unconstrained imagination and quick thinking. But it's a pity that modern people can't do it, because the original character of Stark is not in science fiction literature, but in commercial movies. Setting is a science that modern people cannot write about. Therefore, Stark's upgrade system cannot be read at all. It can only be read in one's mind, and it is a scientific article. And reading this kind of thing is a complete waste of time. For this subject matter, it's very impressive.

Tony Stark could smell the sour smell of engine oil mixed with sweat in the cave. The blue flames from the welding gun cast distorted shadows on the cave wall, and his fingers were scratched with tiny bloody traces by the metal burrs, but none of that mattered at the moment. "Jarvis, record the data." He subconsciously said to the void, and then twitched the corner of his mouth in a self-deprecating manner. There is no smart butler, no holographic projector, only thirteen cameras facing his workbench - the kidnappers want to make sure that the hostages are seriously making missiles. The sparks from the arc welder fell on the Ark reactor on his chest, and the blue light suddenly became unstable. Tony frowned at the palm-sized cold fusion device, this shouldn't be happening. When he inserted the last curved armor plate into the transmission joint, the entire cave began to shake. Not an explosion, but a strange resonance. Metal parts levitate like puzzle pieces being dismantled by invisible hands. Tony felt the blood roaring in his eardrums, and the blue-shifted halo unique to quantum tunneling remained on his retinas. His hand gripping the workbench penetrated the entity, as if he was being dismantled into elementary particles. "Sir?" A familiar British accent suddenly sounded, but there was a noise of electronic interference in the voice. Tony turned around suddenly and saw the Mark 1 suit's head display lighting up with snowflake-like ripples, and a star vortex appeared where the monochrome interface should have been. Severe pain exploded from the reactor location, and Tony staggered back. His last conscious thought was that his hands were glowing—not reflected welding sparks, but the quantum glow of Klein blue oozing from every pore.

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Is this guy 185? Are you bragging like this just for money's sake?

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It's well written. It can be better if you have a complete outline.

I have experienced the apocalypse, more than one apocalypse, I have seen the collapse of civilization and the destruction of order. I am like a traveler, living in their world. Civilization is sometimes as fragile as a piece of paper, but life, even in the darkest abyss, there will always be people working hard to find the light. I often wonder, will my world come to an end? There is no answer to this question. Unless one day, I can go back there, as a dead man. Interested friends are welcome to read the new book "Guests on the Edge of Doom".

It's still being updated. I remember that the author said it was going to be finished before each team took the lead. I thought it would be over after returning to the water world for the second time

Character description, explosive, unimpressive