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Your introduction is genuine. Drive people away.

As the title states, your novel reads like a greasy urban novel from ten years ago, but your military knowledge is contemporary (it's very good to talk about the mountains without having to read the author who is illiterate in the military), so while I was watching 055 engage in target-centered battles, I read the dialogue between men and women that seemed like it was ten years ago 😂. Personal suggestions: ⒈Write less plots between men and women, because you are obviously not suitable for this kind of story. If you must write, it is best to write about the relationship between colleagues or superiors and subordinates. ⒉ Use less emojis. If it's a joke, that won't be a problem, but you are obviously not. ⒊I hope the author will continue to work hard and not stop updating. It is not easy to read a novel with military knowledge these days😭

I don't know why. I like every book I find that clearly has a setting, but the tmd is poorly written. It's the same in every book. I don't know why. Just a personal complaint.

Lao Bai, I don't like greasy descriptions of women now. The readers of male videos are awakening in the age. They are either flirtatious or warm. They describe strange women first. The male protagonist is devoted to the strange female. To be honest, it is too licking. It is better to do the other way around. A woman with the temperament of the big sister next door cares about the male protagonist first... In fact, this is also consistent with the core of female videos. Either countless bosses fall in love with me, or the heroine fucks the whole world.

The picture comes from the Internet, but it is very close to the scene of Heroic Port I imagined, so it is for your reference (deleted due to copyright infringement) Heroic Port is a small city built on the seaside with a certain medieval style. There are many residential houses with brick and stone wooden structures. It has certain shipping conditions and the seaport conditions are relatively good

Chapter 7: It's really not possible there. Do you understand what righteousness means, and do you understand that you cannot fire the first shot? Your behavior style is European and American, and it is very inconsistent with the behavior of our army, especially when you are new to a different world.

The bad thing about this book is that the game world and the real world are connected. Do you dare to write about the game world invading the real world? Do you dare to write a forbidden curse to bring down Shanghai? Since it is destined to be impossible to write about the war and conflict between the real world and the game world, then why bother adding the real world? It is better to just write a two-week story.

Here comes the old reader, I used to have no money to read the pirated version of the Guide to Galaxy Domination on Zhuishu Artifact, 😭😭

I thought Yin Ba was the beginning, but I didn't expect it to be the final chapter.

To be honest, the subject matter is okay, but it's just a lot of nonsense

I hope this book can be restored to its standard. The works written on 🍅 are really unbearable. They are too everyday and have a strong sense of immersion, but they are not what I want to read 😁

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What does pla mean? This book is a bit scary for eunuchs, and it seems that the reading process is not going well.

This is the northern region. The main political entities include: Haine Empire Levan Hero Territory White Deer Principality Blue Wolf Principality Orc Nomadic Alliance Mermaid Territory Northern Continent Country Colonies include: Franco Empire Aiqia Viceroyalty Beckinhan Kingdom Wengen and Strawson Colony South of the Central Holy Mountain are two other principalities.

After reading about 10 chapters, I can only say that the author's knowledge reserve is very high, and the content in the professional fields covered in the article is quite professional.

It's been almost two weeks, and the story has only progressed a little.

It's really well written, five recommendation votes

When I saw Chapter 12, the protagonist was cut in half without any protection, I thought:? ? ?

It feels like the ending is a bit abrupt, but there aren't any explosive moments later, so I'm afraid it won't be long 😐

I will continue to write fictional history, mainly from overseas, including the Southern and Northern Dynasties, Five Dynasties, Ten Kingdoms, Song, Yuan, Ming and Qing Dynasties. If not, I will add game elements.

I haven't read too much, but it's a bit tiring to read. The balance between the military and the different world is not good. After reading half of the content a few times, I finally got into the good zone, but the scene changed and it stopped for a moment, which made me feel uncomfortable. Moreover, the identity of the protagonist is a bit embarrassing. He intervened too quickly in the beginning and did not realize his value. I don't know what will happen next.

Update quickly! I want to see the return of the Dragon King!

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The monster-killing upgrade can be removed. It's not an upgrade. The description is like. Hodgepodge