Mechanical Tyrant from the Abyss

It's not that I raised a beast at night. If you die, you won't blame me.

There are no normal updates, who will watch?

Don't use so many long sentences, it's too difficult to understand. It's too tiring to read all at once, and even if it's well written, few people will read it.

The author should have coded the characters on the computer. It only looks like two or three lines on the computer, but on the mobile phone it looks like long paragraphs. It's very disgusting and I can't stand it.

The language is complicated and verbose. I seriously doubt the word count I'm tired of reading it. It's all nonsense

You should invest in the two-dimensional area, the smell is too strong

Isn't there only one update in the new book issue?

The writing is okay, but the middle stream is better.

War the monarch if you can

Author, the problem is as follows There is a problem with the layout of the chapter text, it is too dense and uncomfortable to watch The protagonist has too few roles, and the description of the power is more than that of the protagonist The levels of the power system have not been fully described, and I have no impression of the division of power.

It's almost the same as in the reviews, it's a bit messy and affects reading, but the plot and rhythm are fine. Hope there will be improvements in the future.

It's well written, but the author is just playing tricks, which is embarrassing.