The Thunder That Breaks the Sky Shatters

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Accepted, why should I accept Ya Fei or not? There is no cheat cheat. You are a waste. Not to mention Ya Fei, even Xiao Mei looks down on you. Time travel is not from the Xiao family. With ordinary talents, how high do you think your achievements are? Opportunity to cut off Hu's original work? Apart from those few fixed opportunities, what can you do? If you don't have the ability of Douhuang Douwang, you're going to kill them all. What can you do with rubbish that doesn't even have basic martial arts and fighting skills? You still despise it. According to you, Yafei Yunyun is useless in the mid-to-late stage. Then in the later stage, no one except Xiao Xun'er Medusa can be used, so just don't accept it. It won't be of any use in the world. Just stay in Doupo. They already have a system, so what are you afraid of?

Don't listen to them, how can you not accept them if you already have a harem?😍

When I saw that the thunder attribute grudge actually played with refining medicine and retreated instantly, since you wrote about refining medicine, don't write other attributes. It's really no brainer.

Will the author accept Zi Yan, Han Yue, Cao Ying, Xuan Yi?

The protagonist likes to hide his realm, and everyone can step on the protagonist, especially cats and dogs who are two or three realms lower than the protagonist. . .

Xiao Xun'er, Xiao Yu, Nalan Yanran, Ya Fei, Yun Yun, Yao Ye, Yao Yue, Little Medical Fairy, Qing Lin, Medusa, Han Xue, Han Yue, Feng Qing'er, Mu Qingluan, Zi Yan, Liu Fei, Cao Ying, Xuanyi, that's pretty much it.

Xiao Yan participated in the alchemy competition to obtain the spirit-melting elixir. You are participating in it. Anyway, it doesn't matter whether you participate or not in the hands of your brother.

The introduction only included Yafei and Aunt Yun, which probably persuaded many readers away.

When you are a stallion, don't pretend to be a gentleman. There are also people who will exterminate your family after just one look at you. What kind of three views

Decisive to kill? It made me laugh to death. To be honest, I thought Qidian's strength turned out not to be as good as Chuangshi's. And Feng Qingyundan pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger even though she has the strength to pretend? If this fanfic doesn't make me happy, who will read it? It's a waste of money.

Replace the heroine Ya Fei with Zi Yan and she will be invincible

The author recommends not to add so many dialogues and emotions, focusing on the plot. A good book is inseparable from a good plot. Moreover, this cultivation progress is too fast and there are no twists and turns. It needs to make readers empathize. If you want readers to deepen and like it more, it must contain great principles and be able to connect with real life to inspire readers. Only then can it be regarded as the basis of a good book. In addition, the ability to depict characters, scenes and emotions needs to be improved. Try to slow down the pace and focus more on language description, otherwise the book will seem too monotonous. Good language and writing style determine the emotion of a book, and good plot determines the depth of a book. I hope the author can see and adopt my suggestions.

I originally wanted to leave, but suddenly I saw Xun'er as the heroine, so I had to stay.

Licking dog, I gave Yafei a level 5 elixir as a gift when I first met her. One level 5 elixir is worth ten to her.

I am a veteran fan of Dou Po fandom and have read no less than 10 Dou Po fandoms. The plots of these fandoms cannot be said to be the same, I can only say that they are similar. Let me start with the beginning. Most of the protagonists cheat in Wutan City. Then if you are older, you will not hook up with Xiao Xun'er. If you are young, hook up with Xiao Xun'er. Then stay for a few years, go to Qingshan Town to hook up with the little medical fairy, take the treasure map, and then go to Tager Desert to pick up Qinglin and get the strange fire. You will inevitably encounter Medusa. This is the key point. Basically, every fan novel will definitely encounter Medusa when picking up strange fire. After the three-year appointment is over, you will go directly to Canaan Academy, and then go to Zhongzhou. Can these fan authors be more creative?

You can accept it, you can accept it, as long as it is written well and does not collapse. Keep up the good work, the word count is still too few

I found out that there are many Dou Po fans who don't accept the snake. Do you like life life so much?

As the third brother of Emperor Yan, he is such a nanny, and the system has developed a Five Elements Divine Thunder Technique that can be evolved to cultivate a trace of spiritual thunder. The low-level and Xuan-level advanced and intermediate thunder martial arts and the Five Elements Thunder can be cultivated one by one. It feels like a random setting. There is also a fire and wood attribute that the system gives to alchemy, but I am speechless. Is the Five Elements Thunder God Body fake? Also, Ling Lei adds a little bit of a little bit of a smug feeling, and adds a strange fire to make alchemy. The explanation does not even explain the basic settings. Alchemists pay great attention to the requirements of fighting spirit and soul realm level. The more advanced the alchemist, the higher the realm level requirements. The souls of genius, evil and powerful alchemists are one or more levels higher than the level of fighting spirit. People The Lord of All Spirits possesses both Yin and Yang of the Five Elements. The so-called fire and wood attributes are high in elemental affinity and are manifest talents, but it does not mean that there are no other attributes. The Five Elements Divine Thunder alone is not enough to see and force the level. The addition of the Four Symbols, Yin and Yang, Chaos and other divine thunders is enough. The Thunder of Ten Thousand Ways, look at the Burning Technique, which has a very high level of force. It is the Avenue of Fire of Ten Thousand Ways that accommodates all power attributes!

Personal opinion: Dou Po fans don't follow the path of different fires, but it's not as interesting to follow Xiao Yan's old path as a nanny to give opportunities to Xiao Yan.

Have all the adoptive father protagonists accepted the green fairy into the harem🥺🥺🥺

It's really disgusting to accept Yafei, Yafei is a waste, her talent is so poor, what a romantic time

Damn, nine of the ten chapters are about color. Without these, I wouldn't be able to write.

Rt, are there only those on the character card?

Why is it not updated? It has been a few days and it has not been updated yet! ! ! What about being lazy? ? ?

Haven't updated yet? What are you doing? ! ! ! ? ? ? ? ?

Everyone, is it possible to change the Great Thousand World to other worlds in the Dou Po fanfic, which is Xiao Yan's goal of ascending from Dou Qi Continent?

The two heroines in the original Dou Po Liang look very uncomfortable 😒