All Heavens: Starting from the Chaos of Martial Arts, Conquering All Worlds

I think since you are writing about Wen Lianggong, what's the point if you don't write about his exploits in picking up girls? Compared with what you wrote about "No Court and No Jianghu", if you directly wrote about the appearance of Longmen Escort Agency and Uncle Wen's girlfriend, the popularity would be higher than what you are now.

I don't see how the author's description of the protagonist participating in the struggle to enter the court is of any benefit to him, money? The money has not arrived, martial arts? It also wastes time for practicing. You don't have to go to the court to find a master, right? Moreover, so many people from Longmen Escort Bureau were killed, and Tong Boda's fingers were also cut off. So what's so cool about the plot you designed? If you want to be original, can't you write more about Jianghu struggles? You are not number one in the world now, so if you participate in the struggle to suppress martial law, you are completely putting people who are related to you in a dangerous situation, and the gain outweighs the loss.

There's nothing poisonous about it, and it doesn't mean much. To put it bluntly, martial arts is nothing more than the righteousness of the family and the country, and grudges and grudges. This book neither captures the pleasure of grudges or grudges, nor the sense of progressive progression of online novels nowadays. The feedback on the protagonist's upgrade is not clear. The character's behavior pattern is also not clear enough. From time to time, he will write some unimportant plots. For example, the protagonist, a gangster, always writes plots related to the court, but he happens to write them. Such plots have no effect on the growth of the protagonist and are stinky. It's so long that it never ends. The protagonist talks about getting stronger and saving strength for the subsequent time travel, but in fact he has been involved in these nonsense. This is astronomy, and the emphasis is on a clear and refreshing rhythm. What is there to write about these fools? The best part of the book is at the beginning. What to do? You can only kill. You should practice your martial arts. There is nothing wrong with exchanging martial arts for other martial arts. You should not listen to the bandit copycats. Just have someone. As the plot develops, wait for someone to target you, and then kill all the way to kill the big and small pavilion bosses. Kill, what is martial arts? Kill one person in ten steps and leave no one behind. This is martial arts. What is the heavens? Use the unique resources of different worlds to quickly become stronger. Face new challenges in the next world. Continue to snowball and become stronger and continue to travel. This is the heavens. If you want to write about the power disputes in the court, then you should invest in a historical novel. If you add money and have no internal strength, you can dare to fight ten or twenty cavalry. For the protagonist's position, in the world of martial arts, you can kill him. If the treacherous ministers are targeted, kill the treacherous ministers. If the emperor is targeting the emperor, kill the emperor. If the country is in turmoil, kill him. There are foreigners all around like this, no matter how hard the country is, the flesh will rot in the pot. When the force value is raised, it is time to leave and go to the next world. This is a world where the power belongs to oneself. They are still afraid of the army and the imperial court. Not to mention reaching the top of the Forbidden City, they cannot defeat an army of 100,000. A top expert cannot accurately assassinate ministers, princes, nobles, or even the emperor. There are not very powerful people around the emperor in this world. Even if there were, if he killed the emperor's son or daughter every now and then, you would see if he would still dare to make a fool of himself. In this book, there are even one or two chapters from time to time, and the protagonist does not appear in two or three pictures. The main character does not appear in the offline version. I have ordered it for you with QQ Reading. It is not in vain that you have more than 100,000 words of free content. You can work on the subsequent plot according to the situation.

I am also a reader who prefers martial arts, and I really don't like Douluo and the like. I hope the author will continue to work hard. There are also beacon fire thunder bullets from Longmen Escort Agency, which can also be installed for the male protagonist.

Can you please stop using dialects and slang? If you want to write about the culture there, you have the ability to use all dialects. Screen the readers and see if your local folks will support you! Is it necessary to create dyslexia? How is this different from writing mindless conflicts?

Will the protagonist use swordsmanship from now on? I came here just for the Fire Dragon Spear, and there are so many people writing about swordsmanship and swordsmanship. Why are there so many people writing about swordsmanship? I really think marksmanship is better than swordsmanship, what a pity

I can understand the need to borrow the plot from the original work, but you are too stupid. You just copy the dialogues of the characters in large chunks for several consecutive chapters. In addition to copying the plot, it is also stupid. After a few chapters, I might as well have finished reading this episode of the drama. It is much more exciting and vivid than what you wrote. I tolerated it before it was put on the shelves, but it was too much after it was put on the shelves Hold on, I read it on QQ, so you don't have to say that I don't deserve to complain

To be honest, Uncle Gong is not as handsome with a sword as he is with a gun.

If you don't practice shooting, then you won't watch 🤫! Uncle Gong has lost all his characteristics, no wonder his grades are so poor! Go down and settle down.

If it deviates from the original plot, don't write too much. What you want to see when traveling through the world is to interact with the original characters. So, just hurry up and travel.

If you have any suggestions or ideas, you can write them here. I will come and review the book at any time, thank you!

The more I write, the worse it gets. Why did it take so long to write about the first world? It's not interesting at all.

The book is actually quite good, why is it a eunuch again? No update in seven days?

How should I put it? First of all, I don't know how to write. The author has a lot of writing skills and the writing is quite smooth, but it does look a little awkward in some places. The character creation of the protagonist is a little bit weird 😂, that is, if the author writes a novel that is purely brainless, I will not agree with it. I'm not picky at all and I'm not wasting my feelings. 🙅🏻‍♂️But the writing is quite good, very fluent, and the logic is self-consistent, so I may be a little more picky. Of course, it only represents my personal opinion. After all, I said at the beginning that I don't know how to write 😁. Come on, don't feel pressured

The first world is attractive and fresh, but are you tired of seeing the worlds you choose later?

Donghai Yuxiao and Bai Xiaosheng definitely have a py deal. . . Yuxiao is not ranked in the top ten

There are so many worlds expected, I don't know if I can write 800 chapters.

I don't understand why I have to write about Wen Lianggong. Even if he was handsome when he was young, the key is that he is already old. Who can replace him as an old man? Not to mention that he is really not very good-looking when he is old. The beginning is a failure! No wonder it's not popular