Fude Tianzun: I Can Summon Players to Cultivate Immortality

After reading the current 43 chapters, I will come back and write a review. Overall evaluation: The plot logic is clear, the main line is clear, the layers are rich, and the characters are well created. Analysis: Incense Shinto + Solipsistic Player Flow. The main plot is that the protagonist Dog Brother Bai Quan becomes a god, using players as soldiers to fight for hegemony in the world, and vows to protect all people and create a new world. The plot progresses reasonably and smoothly, there is no doubt about why he did what he did, and every villain has a reasonable explanation. Keep up the current pace and you will be on the charts soon. I have to find faults: the title of the book is from the perspective of the protagonist. The protagonist was a player who felt that the Shinto profession was not good, and then the author has a set of settings for Shinto, which is a bit different from the traditional incense Shinto. The introduction makes people think that the player comes and then the protagonist makes himself a mainline NPC. The version of the protagonist's routine, in fact, the player is completely controlled by the protagonist, which is a solipsistic player flow

The current rhythm is very good. If you keep it up, give more ink to the protagonist. The protagonists in many similar books have disappeared, and group portraits are still easy to get lost.

When the protagonist is weak, don't forcefully shout slogans to show off. Only by pretending to be cool and letting others shout it out can you be cool.

The white-robed general and the jade-faced man also see the power of the great sun. Slay evil demons and bring chaos to the world, with the sleeves of millions of Taoist soldiers. No taxes are paid, no grain is collected, and the merits of all the people are offered to the Holy King. Kill the cattle and sheep, prepare wine and liquor, and open the city gate to welcome the true king. The true king has come to break the shackles! The true king comes and doesn't accept food!

For new authors, it is really important to read the new book issue, which directly determines whether the book will be aborted. 😭 Dear readers, please take a look and take a look If you can take the time to help turn to the last chapter, the author can get more support and persistence, thank you!

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The content is good, but if you write in semi-vernacular, try not to mention too modern words. I know you want it to be easier for readers to understand, but it can easily get off the mark, just like the "fired" in the first chapter.

It may not be consistent with the original work, just spray lightly

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Come on, sincere sky survey can start with two million, I feel that your writing is no worse than him, it's okay! The future is promising!

Overall it's okay and worth checking out.

Author, you made a typo. I can't tell the difference between the bee and the front of a wasp.

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The true purpose of incense, the incense used by gods, has a department dedicated to separating the causal thoughts in the incense. What the gods absorb are pure thoughts. Those magazines will be sent to hell to precipitate to form various yin ores or weapons. The incense of all living beings is poisonous, but after layers of processing, it becomes a renewable resource.

Fortunately, I didn't subscribe. I would have asked the eunuch to tell me earlier 😥

Another eunuch ———I, a veteran reader for 23 years, a video game player for 20 years, and a practitioner in the film and television industry for eight years. Today, a cultural and creative entrepreneur is just a vest, and I am ridiculed as a newcomer by some novice writers. It is simply ridiculous.