Others Control Beasts, Are You the Beast Control Girl?

Some inconsequential supporting characters take up a huge amount of space, and the fight between the supporting characters is written in great detail. Those who came for the Ark can be withdrawn. This thing does not look like a second creation at all. I put up a sign on Arknights. The male protagonist is disabled for 400 chapters, and the supporting roles in the 400 chapters are estimated to be half as much. It's been so delayed that only 440 chapters have been released w Texas Kelsey Suzuran has a close relationship with the protagonist but there are very few ambiguous plots. This book feels like a tasteless piece of food that is a pity to throw away.

The setting is okay, the writing is average, the plot is cliche, and the character descriptions are polarizing.

I have only read Chapter 145 so far, and I have no motivation to continue reading. Except for the first few chapters explaining how the Terra creatures appeared, the settings are all standard templates: unpleasant classmates, "loyal" best friends, well-intentioned teachers, visionary principals, support from leaders and suppression from aristocratic families. There are probably hundreds or even thousands of books written like this. Not to mention the theme of beast control, the cards printed next door all have the same theme. Even any subject matter that has something to do with modernity has a large number of people using this template. Looking at Terra, there are almost no settings related to boats. In Chapter 140, there is no trace of the Terra camp. All are the templated world settings mentioned above. The source stone skills were suppressed by the laws of this world, which made me laugh out loud. The possibility of fusion of power systems is gone. What does the author plan to write in the future? Continue to apply templates? The only connection with Terra is the character name. As long as you change the name, you can easily apply it to other works and write a new book. Since you have chosen to add the element of boat, you should recognize the fact of fan fiction and don't be restrained as if to avoid suspicion. Even if you want to write your own stuff, you must first have something of your own.

Except for the behavior of some of the supporting characters at the beginning that was not in line with my personal preferences, the rest of it really poked me. The settings, plot, and characters are all of high quality, and as a 5-year-old Ark player, I also particularly like the porridge element in the text. I hope the author can continue writing it well and stop being a eunuch 😭 If so, I will be heartbroken to death. Wish you a great sale🌹

As shown above, the following is the copied content of the chapter. That is indeed what it means, but it is really unreasonable. If the protagonist has an average level in martial arts, it is still possible to get first place if he has close to full marks in liberal arts. However, the author said that the protagonist Wukola was unable to restrain his crotch, so he was probably just counting down. In this case, he can still get first place. It can only be said that all the other subjects are probably not above the passing line at most. Otherwise, the protagonist lacks most of the points in martial arts, and it is impossible to be first. Assuming that the scores in martial arts and liberal arts are equal and the full score is 100, and the protagonist has 20 in martial arts and 100 in liberal arts, then the second place cannot even pass both civil and military subjects, which is outrageous. Therefore, it is impossible to be first in the field, unless others are even more rubbish, but such first place is meaningless at all. Therefore, I suggest that the author should change it so that the protagonist's physical fitness and martial arts scores can reach an average level, and there is no need to make him a weak academic character.

I haven't played the game, but judging from the plot, it's pretty good. I've chased too many eunuchs, so I hope the author doesn't end it badly.

It's very well written. Come on, write seriously.

With its salty and moist writing and mellow flavor, you can tell at a glance that this is the best porridge batch. Being able to see such an explosive work makes Silver League worth the price of admission.

After reading more than 190 chapters, I really couldn't bear it anymore. I came here just to get close to the operators, but in the end, this part of the book contained very little content. You've already written fan fiction, but you still have to commit literary youth disease. You don't read fan fiction for the sake of fun. You make the characters worse than the original work, and you don't even have a basic sense of lightning protection. You can't write original works. Your writing method is really not suitable for writing fan fiction.

I understand that the author wants the protagonist to go into research to make money, and to show his independence and not to hug Mr. Kelsey, but just like the guy next to him said, it is putting the cart before the horse. We are here to see the protagonist and the Ark girl become stronger together, not to see some Luo Shizi's beast-control novels. We have already read enough about research on evolution and other things that shock everyone. To be honest, isn't what you are writing now just an ancient beast-control novel and modded Arknights?

I have read more than 400 chapters. The protagonist is sick throughout the whole process, born with a disability, and even the system does not work. . . (It's still not good now, and the system is relatively rubbish.) The author is a bit of a writer, so some of the plots are stinky and long, and he always likes dark and deep characters It's like lightning protection, and he has some consciousness but not much If you want to read it, you can read a hundred or so chapters, and then it depends on your own feelings.

The plot of De Gou made me feel very uncomfortable. It could have been promoted with a more reasonable and stable plot, but it had to be written from the perspective of bitterness and hatred, and the old lynx was completely blackened. I really can't figure it out. The driving force of the character's actions can be used in the original work. The original character of De Gou was already full of bitterness and hatred. Since you wrote about De Gou who came from time-travelling when his family was destroyed at the beginning, why did you continue to "add bricks and mortar" after you came to this world? Do you feel that if you don't write like this, you can't continue writing? At this time, when De Gou traveled through time, as long as the protagonist faced her sincerely from the beginning and lived with her for a period of time, the goodwill would be improved, instead of relying on the dark and cruel plot you imagined to promote goodwill. The same was true for W and Suzuran before. Their life experiences were miserable enough, and they were caught and enslaved after coming to this world. To do an experiment, take a look at the plot you wrote and summarize how shocking it is. You didn't describe anything too much before, so I didn't say much. As soon as the plot of De Gou came out, I was immediately bored. He was caught in human form for experiments, and he was still naked when he was found by the protagonist in the base. Is it because of Wenqing disease? I just have a suggestion, rewrite this plot, otherwise it will be painful in my heart and I can't stand it.

Hurry up and write that young master of the Huai family to appear and exit. What you are writing should be a genius style. Why do you insist on writing a background that looks more awesome than the protagonist? Think about it. Small bosses in the early stage usually only appear in dozens of chapters and then disappear. You have mentioned it several times and have not even appeared before. Moreover, the setting is that the heir of a family is also a genius. He seems to be more awesome than the protagonist. How about free time? Genius style should not have individual characters overshadowing the protagonist. What you wrote about the old woman in front of you is what a genius should look like. It breaks common sense. There is a great god on this site, Qingquan Ryu Hibiki, who writes about the same type as you. They are both beast masters and geniuses, but his is much better than yours. The protagonist is constantly breaking through other people's cognition. In just a few years, he surpasses the results of countless years of others, until he becomes the strongest. A genius-style protagonist shouldn't have a supporting character who is always on top of him. He should be a short-term target at most, but he should never have a supporting character who doesn't even have a name but feels awesome and is always acting as a backdrop, as if the protagonist doesn't even deserve to know his name.

I thought she was really a beast-controlling girl, but it turned out to be a fanfic of Zhou

This was originally supposed to be a light novel focusing on interaction with girls, but you ended up writing it as a fantasy. Your audience or what we want to see is not these adventures that make you stronger. It's not that it can't happen, but it must not be the main plot, or that it can't be too long. You devote so much space to writing these things, ignoring the characterization of these heroines, and just become stronger. It feels like these heroines are about to become cold statues of strength. The last thing I want to say is that I liked reading it at first, but you ended up going further and further away. If you insist on this writing method, you will disappoint those of us who want to read the light novel content and the interactive content of the heroine. Some people will like your fantasy part, but that is not what people read this book at the beginning. Author, you should probably consider changing the focus of your writing, instead of just fighting monsters and upgrading all the time

I'm a porridge person, but is this some kind of if line?

When raiding the enemy base, not only kill everyone, but at least kill all the small bosses and researchers. After all, the bottom level can say that some people are not worthy of death, but every researcher involved in the project deserves to die, right?

Although I haven't played with Porridge much, I think Porridge's abilities are all acquired through illness, right? The more abilities you use, the faster you die? One of the main villain bosses seemed to have died of self-destruction due to excessive use of his own powers. Is it true that Yong Zhou's character won't self-destruct? After all, the heroine's dream and the protagonist's camp's goal seems to be to cure this disease.

I won't comment much on your experience. The environment in recent years has been bad. I've seen many similar stories, and I'm not very good myself. Anyway, it's all about living, so I'd better return to books to talk about it. Your creativity is very good. It is almost the top creativity I have ever seen in online novels. Beast Control + Arknights. When I first saw it, I was very excited. I really admired it and could only call it awesome. It is a pity. You wasted this idea. You did not write it out and missed the point. It should have focused on the Arknights part. As a result, you were too obsessed with the concept of saving the nation and focused on the beast control part. You are a beast-controlling novel + amber style + fan heroine, but the content of the amber style is too little. Apart from giving some skills to the protagonist, there are only a few left to raise birds for friends, raise flowers with Miu Miu, and a few basic thesis points, but these few points are in the rebirth of the beast-controlling novel. It makes sense. I have no idea why I am writing about Kohaku-ryu. Compared with fan fiction, Koh-haku-ryu is very similar to the fun of predicting the future by cutting off treasures and predicting the plot. It's just that Kohaku-ryu uses original heroines and original supporting characters. Even the supporting characters are fan characters. , It should be the bones of the fanfic + the skin of the beast-controlling novel. The focus should be on meeting the Ark characters, predicting their plight, saving them and bringing them into the harem, as well as the setting of beast-controlling. There are more things to write, and it is just about saving the world as the main story. It's the right direction. The content of the beast-controlling article should only be used to fill in the world view. But you wrote a big book about the background of the worldview, and wrote about which colleges and competitions in extremely detail. What are you doing? I have long been tired of reading the beast-controlling article. You are so creative and you use it to write this? This book is hopeless. There is not enough space for the main plot. At most, the story of the powerful angel Kelsey is only left to the end.

It's too watery. It doesn't say a lot of nonsense about the various settings, and the explanations are vague. For example, the skill "Aether Charge" mentioned in Chapter 36, there is a lot of nonsense about the various sources and how to transmit it, and there is no explanation of what this skill does. I don't know if I mentioned it later, but what is the purpose of the thousands of words of nonsense here

Bought Vishdale Picked lily of the valley Snatched Texas Villain Kelsey like mother Scadi, who took away the protagonist's supreme bone at the age of five and didn't know what to do Reincarnated Muir Seth Now there is a foreshadowing, I don't know who will be contracted next

Looking at the catalog makes me feel off-putting. It's almost the 22nd century and there are still useless things to start with.

The subject matter is okay, but the writing is not. When I stay up late and my mind is not clear, I can barely read it, but when I wake up, I can't watch it anymore.

This book is updated at 18:00 every day, and 4,000 new books are updated every issue. I beg you readers to continue reading, this will have a huge impact on me, please, please (o°ω°o).

Tonics, tonics, tonics, tonics

I haven't watched it for three months. Why is it a eunuch?

Why hasn't it been updated? Why hasn't it been updated? Why hasn't it been updated? 😡😡😡

Is the author here? Explain it

Still a eunuch, Meimei started a new account and said yes

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