The DND Bizarre Adventure of the Telepathic Monk

Author, don't be afraid, be ruthless The author of Monk's Fantasy World Journey was almost scolded to death for not cheating on the protagonist. If you don't make the same mistake again, you'd better learn from the experience.

The 5r immortal monk does not need to be level 20 to jump to the roof.

It is written like a group novel, written just to sit back and have fun. The abilities are too strong and the plot has no sense of reality.

This book is a bit like a running group. The character cards are pretty good, but the plot copy is hard to describe. It was fine when I first entered the world, but it was hard to tell when I met the first plot character and then went to the Druid camp. This plot is like the protagonist is a gangster who smuggled into the United States from South America. Because he does not look like a criminal and has some skills (non-evil camp + monk), he is taken to a shelter to be cleaned, medically examined, and kept for observation for a few days. After confirming that he is not sick and does not carry a deadly virus, he gets a green card and officially joins the United States. This is a good thing. After all, I have gone from a black household to a formal household registration, but it is hard to say whether the overall feeling is good or not. Then there are too many high-level professionals, legendary professionals, gods, demons, etc. Who appear at low levels during the protagonist's adventure. When it's low-level, don't write so many characters with high-level powers to appear. Even if they appear as a background board, don't participate in the adventures of the protagonist. In the protagonist's first official adventure, a six-armed snake demon appeared, and even a demon lord participated. In the end, he relied on the boss to save his life, which ruined the adventure atmosphere. Moreover, there are too many gods appearing, and the existence of these background panels is too far away from the protagonist. Don't describe so much in the early stage.

The dnd5 version + pf1 + pf2 + hunter telepathy makes me dizzy. The setting is too complicated and is not good. You can level up by running in a group and killing monsters and passing the plot. You can be promoted to legend without any talent restrictions. It is the player's privilege to choose skills and copy skills at will. NPCs are not qualified to upgrade like this. Every bit of knowledge must be studied and learned by oneself. Each expertise requires long-term training to master, and everyone will hit the limit of his own talent. Therefore, high-level NPCs are very rare. This kind of low-level character is led by a boss to fight high-level monsters, and then upgraded by leaps and bounds. The game feels too heavy. Simply write it as unlimited flow in the main god space. When teammates join, they will receive a character panel. As long as the points are enough, the level expertise can be purchased and poured into it at will. It is more reasonable.

After reading more than two hundred chapters, there is no main line, and enemies or tasks are refreshed from time to time. The strengthening machine created by the protagonist group can barely be regarded as the main goal in the early stage. As a hook released very early, it is the main reason for me to follow it. "I just want to see what the protagonist can do at such a high cost" - but I absolutely can't. I didn't expect that after reading more than two hundred chapters, there was still no sign of that thing, and suddenly I didn't want to read it. The main conflict in the plot now is the struggle for interests between the above legends and the other side. It is "the king can't see the king" between them. However, the reason and motivation for the protagonist to get involved in these troubles all day long as a pawn and chess piece are really not enough. Grandma Yangui's grandson and apprentice have as many things to fight against as the protagonist! What I see from the perspective of a reader is that the protagonist is caught between two waves of big shots. As a person who is neither necessary nor close, he has to bear too many inexplicable troubles. He can only passively follow the crowd, encountering one trouble and solving another, not knowing what to do. I don't want to watch anymore after watching it

The combat power of the monks is low. When I read novels of the same type, others said that the combat power of the different versions of the monks is quite low. The version with the higher combat power seems to be close to the point where a two-story building can be shattered with a slap.

There is no need to strengthen the monks under the PF rules, because the monks inside are not human and are ridiculously strong. However, under the 3R rules, Yong Nian can strengthen them.

The protagonist is too strong. He combines the strong skills of PF and Baldur's Gate, and also adds telekinesis.

It's too game-like. After a battle, a druid jumps from level 2 to level 5 (even a druid who just went from level 1 to level 2). Is this a world where everyone can gain experience by fighting?

The practice of monks is not something that ordinary people can practice. The physical and mental training required by monk practice is extremely cruel and cannot be tolerated by modern people.

The name of the protagonist is a real downfall for me

Why is the protagonist a dwarf?

The group number is 456506254. The question when joining the group is what is the name of the ability to think about changes in Lezhengjing? Answer: The changing free mercury

Can't read! I had to abandon the book.

I think the author writes well, the story is exciting, the writing is smooth and detailed, and the subject matter is also very good

Hello everyone, I am the author. This is a post to give suggestions to the author.

The "Warrior Monk" in the old game "Ragnarok" has good skills and can be written in. The sure-kill "Heaven and Earth Overlord Fist" seems to be this 🙂

I can't even finish the first chapter 😰 It's so cruel

What about Chapter 1 V? How can you subscribe if you don't release it...

It's been a while since I've updated. Is it just discontinued? 😭Can you reorganize your thoughts and reply to the update? Or re-open a book

Overpowered, with inflated values, it looks like a mission log, and super powers that don't fit the style are everywhere. The title of the book should not be called Telekinesis Monk, it should be called Telekinesis xDND. The values ​​are indeed bolder than next door, and there are more updates every day, but what about the plot? It feels like there is no plan. I do whatever I encounter, and when I cut it off, the number of words was not as high as the one next door. How come there are so many supporters in the comment area who don't support the author to continue writing?