The Dimension Meat Connoisseur

The first Pillar Destroyer Blade at the beginning felt okay but it didn't reflect the personality of the protagonist, it was too ordinary. You can use your understanding of the plot to let Wu Zao know the information about Hibiscus Flower to divert your attention, and become stronger through crazy eating. After all, your ability is a good talent for torturing food. The second world is also too boring. It would be better for Dugu Bo in Douluo Continent to directly massacre the city. Anyway, ordinary people and experts are of similar value to you. Obviously he was being persecuted, but he didn't seek official justice, nor did he crazily increase his strength to protect himself, so he just followed the protagonist group through the plot. Do you think that if your strength does not improve explosively, will you have any united front value? Who will care about your grievances? It will be difficult for the protagonist to become a top existence if he can only fight in small ways.

It turns out to be this meat 🥱

Unexpectedly, the writing is good. When I saw your title and cover, I thought it was some kind of ghs stallion story. I had to criticize it, but I didn't expect it was real meat. 😂 gkd, I want to see blood flowing like a river Added on 11.28, Because the reality-related plot is too bad Has been changed to "Grain and Grass~Boutique" Hay~Grain It is not difficult to see from the original realistic plot that the author still has a lot of room for improvement in terms of writing skills, plot structure, and character behavior logic

I'm not a buddy. I can't write emotional scenes so I can cut him off. Learn from Aizen. Longing is the farthest distance. Tmd. Give me a big meal after more than 50 chapters.

I came in after seeing the three keywords of dimension and flesh, and this is what happened 😒😒😒

No matter how hard you rack your brains on abstraction, it can't compare to the sudden inspiration of the author Shabao.

Ghost Slayer is good, Qin Shi is okay. What the hell is a female character that pops up in the back? It makes me sick to my stomach. If you don't know how to write an emotional scene, don't write it. Don't mix it with poison, okay! The character image that was finally established has collapsed. Evaluation: hay secretly mixed with shit.

What I wrote when I was in my 50s really discouraged me from quitting. I didn't even know what I wanted to express by writing it.

Conceive the protagonist, conceive the plot, conceive the author

There is a big problem with ennn's writing style. It seems that the writing style is not as good as that written by AI... How about you let AI write it?