Night Falls: I Use Words to Kill Through the Wasteland

The more I look at it, the more uncomfortable I become, and I feel uncomfortable without vomiting. 1. A protagonist with a busy constitution will encounter a death crisis whenever he goes out. 2. There is no plan at all for plug-ins. The plot so far is all about forcing the protagonist to do things. 3. The so-called cheating and killing through the wasteland is just a joke and doesn't bring any fun at all! ! !

Not long after it was released, there was a plot where the heroine was taken away by a big shot🤣

Is this still a decisive killing? That girl, Xiong Qian, has been messing around all the time. If she was really decisive, she would have been killed long ago! Your protagonist is as poisonous as the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles!

You hold a golden finger and say you want "Kill Across the Wasteland", and you also want the heroine to level up at the speed of light with you. The heroine's conditions are worse than when the hero didn't cheat. I don't know if it's because of youthful illness or because I'm crazy about changing the manga. The heroine was taken away by a big shot. Is this a plot that should appear in a "system novel" in 24 years? Why not? It's normal to have no heroine. Is it okay to write online articles and always think about how great and upright the protagonist is? Thanks to the writing skills of most of your authors, you can write the Dead Wife Douluo. But the writing was more than ten years ago, and the ancient Internet articles said that no matter how many times the male protagonist escapes from death, the entire environment is stable. Are you just playing this in the wasteland? Cao Cao lets go of Guan Yu less happily than your male lead lets go of your female lead. Liu Bei and Zhuge Liang are more obsessed with each other than your male lead and your female lead.

When I saw the title, I thought it was a post-apocalyptic wasteland novel But I was confused at the beginning. I originally thought that it was a very disturbing plot for a supporting character to show off his intelligence and get slapped in the face. It turned out that the even more disturbing plot was that the villain made a fool of himself for ten chapters, but nothing happened and he was finally solved by the enemy. The protagonist can either put a knife to someone's head to make her lose her bb, or even kill the whole person, who is not ruthless and unstable. Or just talk to her and let her understand that her weak thinking logic should be hidden in the sewers of the sewer, and you can be happy in private. If you dare to put it on the table, you will be exposed to death and people will be sprayed all over your body. But the reality is that the protagonist can't fire a single shot, which makes me choke and can't breathe. Looking at the author's description of the novel, I feel that he wants to depict the darkness of human nature and create a more realistic tone that is so dark and severe. I don't think it's okay if you don't like it. But then I thought about all the people who were against the protagonist. But the heroine came back alive from a certain death situation and even woke up. After reading the book review, I was even offered to a big shot to become his apprentice. Speechless for a moment. It makes you happy but you don't want to make everyone happy. It really makes you do the real thing but you are not willing to write dead people. I want both a realistic tone and a happy ending with a happy family reunion. It cannot touch the souls of helpless readers who have a deep understanding of reality, nor can it touch the hearts of emotional readers who have long been numbed by the cumbersome plot.

This book would have done better if the main character had been a monkey. The protagonist went out for a trip to the wilderness, owed two favors, and got into trouble. On the other hand, the monkey follows the protagonist to win, does not get involved in anything, and hides behind his back to grow up. This is the template that the protagonist of a cool novel should have.

The setting and story of this book are actually quite interesting, but there are too many minor flaws. The author's writing style is very "new" and he fell into a state of "I thought" when writing the book. The author only writes from the perspective of knowing everything as an author. The settings, foreshadowing, and character traits are all clear, but the readers don't know. The author takes it for granted, and the readers will find many violations and unreasonableness. Due to the author's writing skills, this book was originally written as food, but now it is basically just hay. Reading this book is basically the state of "it develops this way because the plot requires it, don't think about why". The author was like this when he wrote this book. He needed to develop the plot, so he just found a reason and wrote it without thinking carefully about whether it was reasonable or not, and how the readers would react after reading it. To put it simply, you can't read this book with your brain in mind. The story setting is quite interesting, apocalyptic, crazy, weird and scary monsters, tight living environment, what a pity. By the way, using exclamation points like crazy is a common behavior of new authors, like touching their noses and smiling bitterly.

Deliberately writing some clowns will not make the protagonist taller, it will only lower the level of your whole story. The villain can be bad but not stupid. As you said, the negative emotions in your novel are too heavy and disgusting. This is the reason why I gave up the book.

The free chapters are good, but the quality has seriously declined since it was released, and it is too holy. It is a chaotic post-apocalypse that always makes excuses for what it does, and it is a good person than in our peaceful times. It is the protagonist's good character to be decisive in killing without going against one's heart. You have to explain everything and why the protagonist is so kind when he does this. It disgusts me to death. Now I feel that I have lost my subscription. The purpose of novels is to tell stories and not to rely on your explanation. Just talk about the character at the beginning. The latter part is that one is water, and the other is disgusting.

When an author writes a novel, he should write it well. Don't stuff it with a bunch of personal stuff, don't make a bunch of preachy philosophical principles and other messy things. Who doesn't understand? Reading novels is for relaxing, not for studying.

Just like the title, if you like to torture your master, you can check it out

The biggest scam in this book so far: "I Use Entries to Kill Through the Wasteland"

Everything else is fine, but Ang Lee gives me a headache. The author seems to want to torment her. How many years have passed since the end of the world? A young man in his twenties has the courage to go out to scavenge, sacrifice himself for others to lure monsters away and become disabled, and he is still afraid of a shrew and old mother being sold to a brothel? Why are you biting your fingers and kissing her... Chun Chun is mentally ill, and the protagonist plans to support her for the rest of her life?

After reading more than 40 chapters, it is obvious that the protagonist uses the golden finger of the entry system. I have never seen the protagonist take the initiative to research and develop his own golden finger to make himself stronger. So he explained that he had obtained three entries before the story started, exploration, murderer (increasing ferocity but not strength), and college student (negative entry). You can complete the task to obtain the entry, and then it is gone? I haven't gotten a new entry in more than forty chapters, and I don't know if the existing entries can be upgraded, or if the entries can be combined, I don't know anything! Let me just say that at the beginning of your story, the protagonist has exhausted all his resources and needs to go out on an adventure. What about coming back? After finishing a confusing operation, you have to go out for adventure without stopping. You completely treat the golden finger as nothing, and it doesn't improve yourself at all, right? Then what do you do when writing entry systems? Wouldn't it be enough to just survive the doomsday?

Mainly talking about population. Some people say that the wasteland in my novel world is too dangerous for ordinary people to survive. There are so many people dead, and the population depends entirely on refreshing. First, the wasteland is dangerous for ordinary people, but they can still survive. You just don't have to leave the camp at night, dusk, or dawn. Second, resources are insufficient for population reproduction. I have made it very clear here that food and water are provided by the city. In spoiler terms, these are very cheap resources. The city uses this method to collect resources in the wilderness. Even the price can be controlled. Third, why do people in the wasteland still have children? To be honest, this somewhat incorporates modern people's thinking into it. During the war, weren't there still many children born? They have children, not necessarily for their own good. Many of them are just for exploitation. Not to mention that contraceptive measures are not effective.

The background worldview feels okay, but the characters, the plot, and the monster settings all feel a bit unworthy of this worldview. It feels like it has been forcibly pieced together. The differences are very strong. The character of a character cannot be shaped by repeating psychological activities over and over again. Then there are monsters, everything else is fine, but I really can't stand the ghost insects. The king of ghost insects, that's it. The king of a race has been captured by you like this. Apart from hard defense, the body has no combat power at all. There is no life-saving ability at all. I was caught by your protagonist for more than half a chapter or more than one chapter. Oh my god, if you only describe more relevant information, such as the parasitic body will be weak and dizzy after death, it will not be so or so. . . . Also, the plot is really dragging. I have only seen Chapter 116. The protagonist still doesn't know what he is going to do. What is the purpose of running back and forth, upgrading? , Then why don't you write more entries, does Shilipu Sword God know? Given this setting, what is the final performance like? I want to protect the people around me, but I just don't write entries, I just want to be lazy. How cool is Shuangwen? From the beginning to avoidance, you have always avoided. It is an apocalypse. It is an apocalypse. It is written with an indecisive protagonist. You have to think twice before killing someone. People are robbing your house directly. You still have to think about it, and you still have to kill quietly in the middle of the night. With the average moral level of this town, if you are not prepared to get away with one punch to avoid hundreds of punches, how can you survive in the apocalypse? Why is the end of the world the end of the world, why is the wasteland a wasteland, and why is a cool article a cool article? Instead of writing so many psychological activities and so many words every time, you should just complete the settings directly. Now it is necessary to have order without order, chaos with order, and order with chaos. The organization of more than two hundred years does not even know how to do it. Personal point of view, if you don't like it, don't criticize it, it's up to you to argue

That plot of Li was a bit poisonous. He was alone in the ruins to lure away monsters, in the wild, at dusk when monsters were infested, and he didn't know the way, so he was able to return to the camp with only one leg missing. He was dragged by his own mother to sell himself, and finally bit his finger in return for being bought. What kind of god is this?

The plot and system settings are messed up

I spent eight points to order one. To be honest, I felt it was a waste of money. You put the heroine on the label. I don't think it is so baffling. What's the plot? She suddenly becomes kind to people and is very cold to others. Turns out she is the heroine? It may be a bit embarrassing to have a heroine. The heroine who is missing a finger is indeed quite unique. The plot is okay but I am attracted by the setting, but there is a heroine who can't read it at all. The current books are basically either you have to fall in love, or you have to upgrade, sometimes this and sometimes that? You fell in love with this woman after only meeting a few times. Are you used to having someone by your side when you are in the same place as others? You are just a fool. The most annoying thing is that you need to rely on women to drive the plot. How many years have it taken to write the plot? The novels I read more than ten years ago had this kind of plot. If you don't upgrade and improve your own survivability, doing such fancy things is simply a waste of other people's feelings and time. (Deleting or banning it doesn't matter, but I just want to say that in addition to the hooked setting being a bit attractive, the plot inside is inexplicably hard to read. It's basically a hooked doomsday romance plot. I can't watch it. It's a waste of time to watch it for free, and it's simply uncomfortable to watch it with money.)

This is well written, the protagonist has a brain, and there are no inexplicable slap-in-the-face plots.

The writing is excellent, the plot and characters are reasonable, and the links are interlocking. It is worth reading alone. Unfortunately, the title and introduction are fraudulent and do not lock in the audience. This title and introduction can attract people who want to read exciting articles and read some novels to relax in their free time. However, the author writes real apocalyptic novels, and people are the kind of people who want to refresh. The protagonist is frustrated all the way, and has never been happy once. The content does not match the title and introduction, so it is really a bad review. If you like the apocalypse and struggle, you can read it. Want to read a refreshing article? This is not it.

The details are in place, the monster depiction is creepy, a bit slow, and it feels like it suppresses the protagonist. It doesn't feel exciting enough to watch. I don't know if the author didn't conceive it well, but the flaws are not concealed. As long as the writing is more exciting, it will be the best. Most of the elements other than the feeling of pleasure are gathered together.

It's good-looking, the world view is very novel, the characters are not awkward, and the plot is exciting and reasonable. Especially, there is a sister Sa in the three-person team, which is convenient for female readers.

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So let's see if there is any follow-up to this situation. A eunuch?

Personally, I feel that it belongs to Xiancao, and I voted for recommendation. I hope the author can adopt one of my entries: I am a second dimension: shout out the skill name or slogan during battle to increase the damage. The more serious the injury, the higher the damage 😁😁😁

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