The Eastern Magician Who Emerged from Hogwarts

😒As soon as you look at this world view, you will know that it will collapse

The power system is too complicated. If you can't write it with that kind of depth, don't write it. If it's so messy, I feel like it will collapse. Basically, it's 99.9% Eunuch.

Does China have nothing to write to you? You can either have a Westerner write it, or you can write about Eastern Taoism. Are you an Easterner who writes about the Western style? I won't tell you what to study? Let me ask you about the world view. How do you write about it? Purebloods even despise their own people👎? You, an Oriental, went to England in the 1980s and 1990s?

It's okay to worship at the Tianshi Mansion. After all, the Tianshi Mansion for one person is much better than the real one.

What are you writing after the water is dead?

The reason why a forbidden curse is a forbidden curse is not because it is powerful, but because it is costly to use.

HP magic ceiling is Dumbledore and Voldemort, there is no need to add anything more

Really, Zhang from Qiu Zhang contacted Zhang from Longhushan, saying that you have ideas, but not many. Also, these two female supporting characters do not have heroine settings. How come they are so similar to a previous stock trading article?

Now if you see something weird, just exit immediately

When I saw the title of the book, I thought it was Magician Che Wan 😟

It's too long, if you include him studying at school. I can't imagine how many chapters 🙂🙂🙂 he has gone into the worldview described in the introduction, and I can see how different worlds are different in the author's imagination or can be on the same page as the author.

The worldview is quite large, it just depends on whether the author can control it!

Black long straight Zhang Qiu

Two years after entering school, I can keep up with Lao Fu's soul rings. Fortunately, the world view is a bit big and has been refreshed. The soul rings needed by the protagonist

It's as bland as water, just like a dish without seasoning or side dishes.

Want to know in advance the protagonist's power system, is he going to use magic all the way? Or focus on magic to absorb other essences? Or maybe you want a little bit of everything?

To be honest, I can't stand it anymore. I can accept what was written before and even said it was pretty good. From the time he killed Fudge, the author started to let himself go.

Too short, too slow

I have been following this book until now, and I think the writing is quite good. I don't want to comment more on the content. Here are the problems The first is that there are too few updates. The author may also have his own work. This can only be said that I hope there will be more. The second is the update time, which is too arbitrary. Sometimes I wait at night to see the update, but the time is not fixed and I don't know when it will be updated. Of course, Not just asking questions, at least I think there is a solution that you can refer to, that is, the author can hold a manuscript of one or two chapters in his hand, and release the update at a fixed time, and then the author can put what he has written on that day into his own hands and continue to save the manuscript. This I think is at least a good method, otherwise the current messy updates will make it very tiring for us book friends who support you to read the book.