Hard Work Pays Off: Starting at Hogwarts

When writing proficiency, don't just use n magic at full level. To learn a new magic, you have to add a little more proficiency once. It is very illogical 😡 Talent bonus, theoretical bonus, and analogy bonus are all normal for accelerating the creation, learning, and proficiency of new magic. It is very sick to be illogical in order to suppress your strength. Invincible is invincible, and that person is invincible. It is also necessary to consider the performance and difficulty of different levels of magic. Apart from how difficult it is for Harry to accurately summon a broom in one night, it would take several days and months for the protagonist to commit cheating 😅

The protagonist's name persuades him to quit, which is both unsophisticated and unconventional.

What we mean is that Harry Potter fan fiction has a style of ancient cool writing, for example: How can this not be shocking! A smell of dragon pride

This protagonist's name is a bit trivial

After reading Chapter 19, I feel like the author has never been to school. I have never seen a school where all grades are taught compulsory courses at the same time. You make it seem like Defense Against the Dark Arts only needs to be taught for one year. After all, the first year is completed, and the new students come and teach it again in the second year. You've even given up the exams and left only practice. If you do this, the magic world will be over sooner or later.

What I couldn't stand was when the protagonist praised the elves after dinner, and the house elves were particularly happy and said they were respected. Isn't this nonsense?

A pure giving nanny who only has one excuse for giving every time, just for the system's tasks? And it's the same mission. I don't understand it. I'm shocked. There are such saints these days. It's awesome.

The plot is okay and the writing is good, but the author is not familiar with the original work, so some of the plots are very embarrassing to watch, such as the defense badge that can prevent nearly a thousand young wizards from attacking at the same time. If it really has such defense power, Voldemort probably won't be able to break it even after coming for a while. Another example is that the author thinks that it takes two weeks to fully recover from a fracture in the wizarding world, and the male protagonist can even shock Madam Pomfrey by restoring a spell.

You started to feel weak at Voldemort's ancestral home. You had to let the opponent fight Avada Kedavra several times on you before you started to fight back.

How come you have become a pirate and don't use magic anymore? What's the use of learning it?