The Alchemist's Life-Saving Method

Hello everyone, this is Haiyan. In case there are readers who are interested in this book but don't know the setting/can't understand the content, here is a brief introduction to the background of the book to help readers quickly understand the specifics of the book. First of all, the world view of this book is adapted from the two games "Secret Cult Simulator" and "Book of Sichen", which is the "Noon" world view. The original text of the game is relatively fragmented, with a magnificent descriptive style and ambiguous expressions based on the tone of British mysticism. Because of its ambiguity, it will put certain requirements on readers in terms of understanding. If you are interested in simple and clear upgrade points, and the levels rise according to letters, then this book may not be suitable for you. Second, due to genre reasons, the numerical settings in this book are not limited to the gender gradient of 2/4/6/8 in the original work. The settings serve the narrative, and the synthetic watermelon-style game mechanism is obviously not so applicable in online texts. For the introduction to the world view and keywords, you can refer to the introduction in [Related Works]. I will not go into details here, but please pay attention to the fictional setting (lost history) of this book, such as the resurrection game of the gods of the stone source, the collapse of the sun, etc., Which are also reflected in the names of different principles. For example, [moth] turns into [cocoon], [cup] overflows with [blood], etc., All of which will be told according to the background events. Well, have fun watching. Your delicious friend. Presented by Haiyan. (The book friends group post is in the introduction and the latest chapter. If you are interested, come and play. If you beat the author in the group, you will drop a esoteric gift package and some reference books.)

As the title states, the follow-up reading and comments of the new book issue are really, very, very important to the data of a seedling 😢 I hope everyone can spend five seconds and turn to the last page of the book to support it if you have spare time. Thank you! Then it would be better if you have tickets (rubbing hands) 😡😡😡

The buzzing sound in the skull is not loud enough. Maybe there are too many unnecessary things? Human version I only read esoteric texts when I have nothing to do and am bored, let alone online readers. The miraculous language of esoteric religions and the straightforward expressions of online articles are inherently conflicting points. If only the author could grasp it and pretend that I didn't say it. There is no light in the woodland, but the moth always prefers the glow, so surely the petrel can find its way with the blessing of the tide.

The writing is good, the plot of the first fifteen chapters is coherent and reasonable, and the setting is novel. At present, it is estimated to be food and grass, you can take a look. Of course, all this must be based on stable quality and stable updates in the future (Xiao Sui Nian 😐)

Because I have the habit of revising when I write a book, whether it is to straighten out sentences or add or delete some paragraphs. The mechanism of Qidian has caused some comments on modifications to fall into the virtual world due to the changes. I am deeply sorry for the impact o(╥╥)o —but Qidian will forget it, and I will not. Every comment will leave traces in the writer's backend. Reading your messages is one of the motivations for me to write a book. Thank you to every reader who sees this. It is with your participation that the content of this book can become more complete. Above

To be honest, there are too many metaphors, metaphors, and Western myths that I can't understand. It has an inexplicable beginning and an inexplicable ending. It feels like the book is a esoteric world view, but the reader feels like reading an indescribable and incomprehensible novel full of gibberish in the Cthulhu world view.

Unpopular among the unpopular, because the author seems to assume that readers know the game settings. People who have never played it will feel that there are too many words and descriptions that are incomprehensible, and there are also long and idealistic descriptions. There are so many contents that I don't know whether it is the text of the protagonist Goldfinger or what, and there is no explanation. Although after reading the first copy, I feel that it is okay, but there are probably very few people like me who can't understand many of them and still read it. . .

The esoteric novel is a large-scale self-design () Those who know it will participate in the discussion, and many new things can appear But most readers can only accept flavor text () I am really sorry that I can be seen as a minority at a glance ()

The choice of words and sentences is very similar to that of a certain master. The shortcomings are also the same. It is very tiring to read. The protagonist is so intense that the reader is tired to death...

This book has a total of 42 chapters so far, of which as many as 20 chapters are full of tributes in large sections. To put it nicely, it is called tribute to the settings of the Esoteric Cult simulator. The following interactions are also for Esoteric Cult enthusiasts, and there are almost no readers who have not been exposed to Esoteric Cult. Then the question is, do these ordinary passerby readers not want to comment? No, it's because they can't understand. The Esoteric Cult is a occult-themed game. It is a good thing that the settings are obscure and difficult to understand, as it can increase the atmosphere and sense of immersion. However, these settings are good to say that they are a tribute, and to say that they are unpleasant is that the original texts in the Esoteric Cult are modified and used. What are the advantages? The advantage is that Esoteric Cult fans are really ecstatic after watching it. What is the disadvantage? The disadvantage is that passers-by cannot understand it at all. If you are writing a fan novel purely for fans of esoteric cults, then I would say continue to fill it up and fill it up, add the original setting to the end, and that's it. Ordinary casual readers will hardly click in, and fans of the original work will be happy watching it. But what you wrote is an online article that was published publicly on Qidian. It is a book that may have a plan to make money on the shelves. Then I have to give the author a suggestion. As an author, you have to think about who you want to write for. If you have thought about it, tell me about this book. It's just for fans to read, it doesn't matter if you don't make money, that's very casual, but if you think it should be understood by general readers, my evaluation is: The entire early chapters and the description style set in the future may need to be greatly changed

Hey, the esoteric cultists have caught this.

I can't understand the setting—— As the title states, many readers have recently reported that the setting of this book is relatively obscure and concentrated, making it difficult to understand it well. I can only express this. is my problem. Due to the difference in perspective and foundation, I have taken it for granted that some content throws out settings, which is more difficult for newcomers to understand. Therefore, I would like to ask book friends who have doubts and confusion about the setting of this book to leave comments in the text or express their opinions here. As long as their comments are reasonable, I will take them into consideration for revision and help this book become better. Here, thank you in advance for your valuable opinions. Above

I read this book because I like the subject of esotericism I saw that the first copy of Chapter 30 was almost finished I had a strong sense of déjà vu The villain has been accumulating for a long time, planned calmly, and worked hard for his life for the big goal of immortality Then the protagonist rushed up shouting love and justice, knocking the villain to the ground. How should I put it, it feels like a cartoon. There is no need for a long period of hard work and accumulation, you can win as long as the small universe explodes

The protagonist's combat power fluctuates frequently, and the mechanism of his skills is unclear. Sometimes he can beat him, and sometimes he can't.

Although the name of this calligraphy is "The Alchemist's Life-Saving Method", the author of this book on the Esoteric World View was secretly executed early the next morning after preaching it 🙂

I really can't understand it, it feels like eating pork belly and peanut rice dumplings for the first time. These are zongzi, with meat and salty glutinous rice

If you don't have any information about Esoteric Buddhism, be careful before entering because there are many places that you can't understand.

Although fans of Esoteric Cult simulators are ecstatic, they still have to point out a very serious framework problem. In the early stages, specifically chapters 6-31, the game progressed too fast and rushed to throw out a lot of vocabulary settings. It is very unfriendly to readers who do not understand the Esoteric Cult worldview and is quite disconnected from the atmosphere described at the beginning. This kind of book (referring to niche settings or light novels) is easy to make a mistake, that is, something suddenly happens when the world view is introduced at the beginning, and then the protagonist is inserted into the center of major events one after another in the chapters very quickly. This gives a high B rating, but it is unlikely to be followed up. Using this high-level protagonist description method will give people a weird sense of gap, just like the novice tutorial trial version of a krypton gold game. It has become a temporary state, raising the reader's threshold while letting go of the dividends brought by the first climax, which is very unfriendly from the perspective of story structure. The same is true for this book. Perhaps this is a common problem in esoteric/occult novels. It is easy for the protagonist to participate in a very high-end scene in the first few dozen chapters, and serve as the core while throwing out a large number of nouns and settings that have not been explained in the book, describing a sudden and unclear story: no Attracting readers only raises the reading threshold. There is no foreshadowing and it is disconnected from daily life. The focus is not even on the protagonist, but on describing the own/official settings and scenes. However, because there is no foreshadowing, it only adds more doubts without expanding the worldview. The readers have accumulated more and more doubts from the beginning until they become sensitive and impatient. The introduction of the story at the beginning is undoubtedly remiss. Let's take a look at successful examples, such as the Shepherds and Players of Qi Meow, Fengyue Destiny and Apocalypse, Yintian Monster Killing, Destiny and Gao Tian. These authors are all set writers, and their writing styles are also gorgeous and have their own merits. However, without exception, the introduction of the story at the beginning is simple, solid and eye-catching; on the contrary, those Western fantasy books with more average results have a slightly better beginning. After a slight foreshadowing, it suddenly entered the turbulent mode, with gorgeous and high-end settings and descriptions thrown out crazily, and then readers started to revel, but soon fell silent. Not many could continue writing, only a few fans supported it. The author obviously has this tendency, but the number of words is not too many at present, and there is still time to lay a solid foundation. To put it bluntly, this is a carnival for Tantra/boh lovers, but there is no ticket for ordinary passers-by and book lovers. I hope the author can make a solid description of the world view setting. After all, it is a relatively good article. I hope I can follow up on it for a year or two, so as not to fall into the middle of nowhere.

Western fantasy with the background of the Esoteric Cult. If you are a fan of this type of game, you will like it. However, if you have read The Destiny or The Book of Prayer, you will have a strong sense of déjà vu. Although the author tried his best to write his own style, it seems that he still unconsciously continues the writing style of the two above, but it is too immature and makes it a bit boring. However, some of the ideas can still make people who are familiar with the radio wave shine. Overall, it is still worth watching.

I forced myself to read more than twenty chapters, but I still didn't understand it. The whole text is full of obscure vocabulary and specious descriptions. It seems very high-level, but as a casual reader, to me, it is more like moaning. I can't tell what the underlying logic of the protagonist's ability is, how the protagonist can become stronger, and the meaning and purpose of the protagonist's existence. In addition, I also have doubts about what this plot is going on. It is indeed a bit torture to watch.

The plot is too weak and there are too many redundant descriptions. After all, this is a popular novel, not a collection of settings. Of course, if the author specifically wants to take this niche route, I won't tell you.

I was harmed by the Esoteric Cult simulator. I stocked up on several Esoteric Cult novels and bought a set of discounted games. After a while, I cut them all and started playing them. I played for several days in a row during the summer vacation from dawn to dawn Swallowed by despair, I couldn't concentrate on my career. Upgraded, the evil name exploded and I couldn't block the hunter. After playing for a long time, I didn't study and understand where the main plot was. I pressed the gourd and entered the secret realm. I was covered in a curse and my passion was crazy. I was forced to burn my reason and become passionate I found that the curse was prepared in advance, and then I couldn't make up Dongliu and Xinliu's life Also, after working so hard, I finally understood a little bit, and then three times in a row, because I didn't sort out the desktop dating events, and stayed out of sight and didn't show passion, which made my lover full of resentment I was so fascinated that I was directly exploded Finally, I finally learned the experience and fought for a while The rhythm of the police officers is very good, killing the enemies like chickens, and then I find that after extracting all the acquaintances, I can't find the resentful lover in the previous game I was so angry that I reopened the game with my original identity, and I was so angry that I committed suicide on the spot What a bad game.

The author introduced Si Chen [Bai Xue], which seems to correspond to [Bone White Pigeon], but the description has nothing to do with his memories and remembrances?

Punch a little piggy

It's a holiday, why don't you update?

Then today I saw a limited-edition book next door. I didn't know it was this book at the time, but I felt it was more familiar when I read it That's right, I've read it. But the more I watched, the more confused I became, the more I watched, the more confused I became. I haven't been looking at it for long, and I saw about 10 pictures I guess I saw the heart, and then it jumped a little. I'll go back and look at it later

I just decided to catch up and found out that there has been no update for so long.

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I just saw it, this cover is The Curse of the Fifth Eye?