A Detective's Life in America

The first two books both ended badly, and I kept following them.

Readers want gunfights every day; authors shouldn't focus on detective stories. There was a North American gunfight novel that lost sight of what readers wanted and switched to detective content later, resulting in a significant loss of readers.

In the world of online novels, there are no cheat codes; how can ordinary protagonists possibly live an exciting life? Ordinary people's lives have an upper limit, a ceiling.

I read the first chapter. I have no idea what it's about. It's a jumbled mess.

I'm hesitant to look at it; this author abandoned three books, and I haven't even touched this one.

I've read three chapters and it seems pretty good. American police fiction isn't exactly a niche genre; this wave of popularity hasn't died down yet. You didn't have many readers to begin with, and then you abandoned the project and switched accounts, so it's normal that you don't have much traffic. Just keep at it and see.

Are you going to write it or not? Can you give me a straight answer? I was about to delete the book when you updated a chapter, I thought you'd come back to life but then you went silent again...

One drawback is the slow pace of the combat scenes. The first missing person case took over thirty chapters, a large portion of which focused on combat. Modern gunfights don't really need to be described in such detail. Secondly, the update schedule has been inconsistent; I haven't been able to maintain daily updates. If the author wants to write in detail, then they need to update a lot, 20,000 words a day, and all the flaws will disappear.

I'd suggest the author make the protagonist a playboy, focusing on one-night stands and sex whenever the mood strikes, without a main female lead. "I highly recommend checking out the American variety show: Starting from Banshee Town," which I personally think is in the top three of Qidian's American variety show novels. 🤩🤩

What attracted me to this book were the guns and explosions. If the author wants to introduce supernatural elements, I suggest handling the relationship between the two carefully, at least don't let the protagonist become a god... That would really ruin the story. In addition, the pace of the protagonist's promotion might need to be controlled. After all, once someone gets promoted, they'll rarely be on the front lines anymore. This is purely my personal opinion.