Hogwarts and the Mystery of the Portrait

I will never work so hard in this life.

Very interesting ideas, and the writing is spot on, but there are a lot of jumps, and the chapters feel confusing. For example, the previous chapter may still be about 50 years ago, but the next chapter may be about Harry fighting Voldemort.

Harry Potter fan fiction is not lacking in creativity, but it is lacking in writing that contains magic. I really like the mysterious and attractive settings written by the author, including curses, souls, third eyes, portraits, centaurs, numbers and the protagonist's poisonous tongue (I love it so much). Ms. Gray's plot made me know that the protagonist is not completely lacking in emotions, he is also trapped by death, and he is still the same 50 years after his death. The fifth grader who is attached to Hogwarts and is cared for by Hogwarts. His third eye makes him forever lonely, and his destiny makes him never mediocre. Can the little bird that comes back or never leaves truly get rid of the shackles of death and fate and gain freedom and relief in secrets and transactions? I look forward to the author's great plot.

Harry has read dozens of books and has almost mastered it to the point where he is invulnerable to all poisons. His mentality is that a dead pig is not afraid of being scalded by boiling water. But the beginning of the book still surprised me. I can only say that the author is awesome. But I still want to say that although the author mentioned the two protagonists, the one I want to read most is Starling. The Harry part later is too much written separately, which is a bit boring. By the way, I hope the author will write Starlin after his resurrection soon. Of course it's okay to keep writing about the dual protagonists in this current state with your writing style, but let me tell you straight, I don't like it. Okay~ That's too much. After all, it's not written for me alone. But I have to say, I want to see a resurrected Starlin do more things that make me happy, rather than a male lead who acts as a support for Harry. Well, it's up to you. Author 🙂😜😜

Can others not get the author's point (you need to have a certain amount of historical knowledge and literary reading). I hope the author keeps writing and will succeed.

1. Snape: Persecuted for several chapters, definitely number one! 2. Harry: Just one chapter so far? But it feels like every time he is tortured by Starling, it can be considered persecution... 3. Sirius: Currently 0, the third place is reserved 4. Dumbledore: When will the Principal American cockroach be sent? 5. Tom: It's time to send it, there's no hope 6.…… I can only think of so much 🤓

I kept saying that I wanted to change the previous chapters, but after procrastinating for a long time, I finally changed them. Haha, the plot content has not been changed, but details have been added to distinguish different characters. Because many characters were named only by their identities, which caused early misunderstandings, the name of the old Everrick apprentice was added. Other people whose names were not mentioned are passers-by, including Starling's parents. Oh, house elves are not passers-by, and there is a plot. Alanide didn't remember its name, but it exists... A short story is added at the end of each portrait chapter. If you run out of books and feel bored, you can read it again. ps: I spent a day trying to draw the cover, so the writer's assistant could only use the free template (meditation). I don't understand this cover, so let's use it like this 🙂.

It can be seen that the author has his own outline. It is so well written that it is eye-catching. Stick to it! !

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A bit heavy at the front, very interesting at the back Looking forward to it ୧((•̀ꇴ•))૭⁺✧

This book is really good to read, but it doesn't feel very popular. Is it because the style is not pleasing to the eye? It still has something to do with the name. After all, when I first read this book, I didn't think the portraits were interesting.

It's very interesting and the beginning is very catchy. Come on.

First! After chasing it, it's so small and beautiful.

(Picture generated by AI) "The portrait is of an old woman with gray hair, thin, with protruding cheekbones, and her eyes closed. She is wearing a traditional wizard's robe, her hands are folded on her legs, each finger is distinct, the joints are raised like the knots of an old tree, and the fingers are black."

(Picture generated by AI) "A small brown bird stood proudly on a snow-covered branch. Its belly is dark brown with white markings."

(The picture is generated by AI) "There is only one newly "grown" door, which is fixed with a bent branch and is a bright red single door. This door is so conspicuous that it is simply abrupt in the monotonous landscape painting."

(Picture generated by AI) "Starlin threw away his helmet impatiently, picked a leaf and transformed it into a deerstalker hat of suitable size. There was also a mini suitcase next to his feet. It looked like he couldn't wait to leave Hogwarts."

In my mind, being a Harry Potter fanfic is on the same level as "I Am Legend". It's unreasonable for you not to make a lot of money.

I hope to write less about Harry Potter

After almost a year of keeping it, I forgot all about the plot, so I started reading it again. Author, this kind of small extra drama, we will consider it later if we can finish the book 🥺

No, the person in the comment section who keeps saying it has been changed is referring to the author's revision?

? It is your latest update that allows us to meet. Let me taste it carefully