If You Don't Work Hard, How Can I Become the Pirate King?

The preaching content is a bit too much. Personally speaking, when I read One Piece fanfiction, I want to watch the fights, not the building of a brave new world. When it comes to construction, the content in the book seems too domestic. The lord is a good person and the territory is rich are two different concepts.

I didn't want to watch it after eating the red dragon fruit. . .

Everyone wants it. Don't be inflexible if you have different views. It's hard to say about the Black Cat Pirates. After all, the fact that Jango and the others were later incorporated means that they have no serious crimes. And the ghost man Jin is a murderous villain no matter how loyal he is. His hands are covered with the blood of ordinary people who are similar to the protagonist's pre-time travel state. Even if he obeys orders to do it, don't you agree?

So what do you do as the protagonist of a war? Just pretend to be better than Whitebeard. Don't do anything. Just one chapter every day. Ask for leave at every turn. If you don't want to write, don't write. You spend money to watch it every day and feel lonely.

I'm going to accept a new naval hero who works 200 times harder than what this author praises, and who even thinks he doesn't work hard enough to be his younger brother. This protagonist doesn't take off directly.

The latest chapter is quite interesting, but the theory of fate in Nika is annoying in the original anime. If you play this way, you have to pass it on.

The entire Monster Hunter fantasy beast species is in trouble. . If my own performance is not enough, I will add more. . To be honest, it's a bit unnecessary and just superfluous.

I feel that the combat description is not as exciting as in the early stage. The combat power in the first 150 pictures is relatively reasonable, but the later ones are very abstract. The protagonist in my perspective can defeat Jhin in non-death matches, and can also defeat Jhin in death matches. He defeated Zefa in a head-on duel, but when he was at full health, he was almost killed by a golden lion who lost both legs and had a boat string stuck to his head for more than ten years.

Changed the division of realms, Zatetsu, flying slash, domineering black sword The writing is quite good, but I think there are a few principle errors The addition of points is wrong, The description of the power level is wrong. Zante is a swordsman, and the flying slash is already at the level of a great swordsman Then there is Rou, as Koushiro said, there are those who can kill one There are swords that can cut, and there are swords that can cut through everything, which is the feeling of the crowd narration when Hawkeye debuts for the first time and cuts away bullets Flying and slashing, cutting apart a ship, is already more than a fleet of 5,000 people can handle. There is also the fact that the pirate world is face-blind, and you can't see it at all if you don't wear specific clothes. And by analogy to the real world, can you remember people after seeing photos a few times? I can't remember or recognize it at all.

I feel that Fujitora's strength is very unreasonable. Fujitora is not young and has been out at sea for many years. It is no problem that his strength has improved rapidly in the first few years since he went out to sea. Now it is almost a year of the plot, and it is more than a year since the appearance of the Straw Hats. In other words, it only takes two or three years to improve his strength. His strength did not improve in the first ten years, but he improved significantly later? Therefore, Fujitora should be at the peak of his strength now. The protagonist has no chance of winning if he meets Fujitora now. In addition, the pirates' combat power has collapsed long ago. Their combat power fluctuates and is full of contradictions. It is okay to refer to some of Oda's character backgrounds, but it is better to reset the combat power system by yourself.