Naruto: I Awakened the Ninja Clan System Before the Night of the Uchiha Massacre

I feel like there is something wrong with the setting. The ninja system is a family. Are the mother and sister not from the same clan? No recognition? Could it be that only the three of Fugaku's family could be considered a ninja? Not counting the rest of the family? No one else agrees? Family, you can either summon or resurrect directly? Wouldn't it be better to resurrect all the former Uchiha clan members!

The level of political struggle among primary school students. In fact, if you can't write well about political battles, you can concentrate on developing your abilities and defeat them with force.

Writing less about politics and less about emotions is too demanding for the author, so he can take his time, and the Uchiha have never been short of money. Let's not talk about the background of the rich clan. Look at the houses in the Uchiha clan's land, which are all courtyards and commercial streets. They have a cooperative weapons business with the ninja clan, and they have their own private training ground.

From the moment when the protagonist came into contact with Charming, I felt something was wrong. Later, when Uchiha Itachi and Uchiha Tomigo opened his eyes with him and fought against the Third Hokage, I felt something was wrong. A person who can massacre an entire clan can be turned against you in just two or three sentences. It would be better for the author not to write about politics and just use force to defeat all laws. It's really not okay for you to write about politics.

After people in the Naruto world are controlled by the Sharingan illusion, their eyes will not look like the Sharingan at all. Kishimoto drew this just for the convenience of readers. . .

It looked okay in the early stage, but the more I looked at it, the more awkward it became.

Authors, don't listen to their nonsense. Your writing is very good, but you clearly claim that it is a fan, but you still want to have more depth. You must understand that fan texts are inherently simple and entertaining. Readers love to read, and the last word is that they enjoy reading.

The author is too imaginative. Your ninja system should be approved by Kaguya, gain favor with Otsutsuki, and then Uchiha, Senju, Hinata, Uzumaki, etc. Are all branches of Otsutsuki's bloodline. If you do it, it will not take off. If you gain favor with the branch, you will get Otsutsuki's reward.

If you don't know how to do politics, then don't engage in it. Framing, frame-up, and intimidation are all false. What is real is that the physical level disappears directly.

If you write about the political struggle in depth, the battle lines will be too long and it won't be fun enough! ! It's just right now. I don't use all physical attacks so mindlessly. I like the rhythm. It's fun.