How Can I Become the Pirate King If You Don't Work Hard?

The preaching content is a bit too much. Personally speaking, when I read One Piece fanfiction, I want to watch the fights, not the building of a brave new world. When it comes to construction, the content in the book seems too domestic. The lord is a good person and the territory is rich are two different concepts.

I didn't want to watch it after eating the red dragon fruit. . .

Everyone wants it. Don't be inflexible if you have different views. It's hard to say about the Black Cat Pirates. After all, the fact that Jango and the others were later incorporated means that they have no serious crimes. And the ghost man Jin is a murderous villain no matter how loyal he is. His hands are covered with the blood of ordinary people who are similar to the protagonist's pre-time travel state. Even if he obeys orders to do it, don't you agree?

So what do you do as the protagonist of a war? Just pretend to be better than Whitebeard. Don't do anything. Just one chapter every day. Ask for leave at every turn. If you don't want to write, don't write. You spend money to watch it every day and feel lonely.

I'm going to accept a new naval hero who works 200 times harder than what this author praises, and who even thinks he doesn't work hard enough to be his younger brother. This protagonist doesn't take off directly.

The latest chapter is quite interesting, but the theory of fate in Nika is annoying in the original anime. If you play this way, you have to pass it on.

The entire Monster Hunter fantasy beast species is in trouble. . If my own performance is not enough, I will add more. . To be honest, it's a bit unnecessary and just superfluous.

I feel that the combat description is not as exciting as in the early stage. The combat power in the first 150 pictures is relatively reasonable, but the later ones are very abstract. The protagonist in my perspective can defeat Jhin in non-death matches, and can also defeat Jhin in death matches. He defeated Zefa in a head-on duel, but when he was at full health, he was almost killed by a golden lion who lost both legs and had a boat string stuck to his head for more than ten years.

Changed the division of realms, Zatetsu, flying slash, domineering black sword The writing is quite good, but I think there are a few principle errors The addition of points is wrong, The description of the power level is wrong. Zante is a swordsman, and the flying slash is already at the level of a great swordsman Then there is Rou, as Koushiro said, there are those who can kill one There are swords that can cut, and there are swords that can cut through everything, which is the feeling of the crowd narration when Hawkeye debuts for the first time and cuts away bullets Flying and slashing, cutting apart a ship, is already more than a fleet of 5,000 people can handle. There is also the fact that the pirate world is face-blind, and you can't see it at all if you don't wear specific clothes. And by analogy to the real world, can you remember people after seeing photos a few times? I can't remember or recognize it at all.

I feel that Fujitora's strength is very unreasonable. Fujitora is not young and has been out at sea for many years. It is no problem that his strength has improved rapidly in the first few years since he went out to sea. Now it is almost a year of the plot, and it is more than a year since the appearance of the Straw Hats. In other words, it only takes two or three years to improve his strength. His strength did not improve in the first ten years, but he improved significantly later? Therefore, Fujitora should be at the peak of his strength now. The protagonist has no chance of winning if he meets Fujitora now. In addition, the pirates' combat power has collapsed long ago. Their combat power fluctuates and is full of contradictions. It is okay to refer to some of Oda's character backgrounds, but it is better to reset the combat power system by yourself.

What kind of fateful battle between red and white dragons is this?

In fact, the effort system in the early stage is quite good and interesting to watch, and later comes another fruit ability. . . The interestingness dropped by more than half, so I abandoned the book and left.

Just started: collect gold, Crow. All perfect. The plug-in is just right. ———— As soon as the good guys saw the charges, there was a plug-in to eat the dragon fruit. ? ? ? ? I believe that many people are like me now, and it's not worth spending money because they are invincible. It would be a shame to give up without spending any money. .

I wrote so many chapters when I first entered the Grand Line and fought Musulu. I didn't want to subscribe anymore. The plot after it was released was not as good as the previous one.

The water is killing me. I either ask for leave or pour it into the sea. This author is really a loser.

I don't even know why the protagonist dared to eat Devil Fruit, so I really slapped Hawkeye in the face like crazy Hawkeye came all the way from the Grand Channel to the East China Sea to see you, just because you have the potential of a swordsman, and he spared your life because he thought you would definitely be a powerful swordsman in the future, so he let you go. You go and eat the Devil Fruit He also brags to the red-haired guy, saying that your bounty has increased or something, to prove that he has a good vision If you want to say that you can become a swordsman by eating Devil Fruit, then okay, Kaido can become the world's best swordsman with a sword, right? Then the moisture level of his number one swordsman is really great Hawkeye is really a tool man and has a really good temper.

Will you start novels with multiple female protagonists in the future?

According to the content in the article, navigation level 5 cannot be improved, so the protagonist's system does not have the ability to break through the limit. It just advances the limit that its own talent can reach. If this is the case, the protagonist's strength reaches the limit, and that's it. It will not open the gap with others like a fault. Soon the system will be useless

Wait until this original plot is over before watching it. It's so boring.

There is a younger brother with hundreds of thousands of people, and his abilities skyrocket every day

It feels like it's been foreshadowed for dozens of chapters, or even a whole chapter. If it were in a comic, it wouldn't be enough for two pages of plot.

In the early stage, I took the swordsman route and even ate a red dragon fruit. What did you think, forcibly weakening it?

I saw 166 specifically commenting on it. The author's plot in the early and middle stages is the same as that of Sag who ate the Momo fruit. Compared with the original work, it cannot be said to be exactly the same, but it is still very similar. What's the point of changing Luffy into the protagonist and walking through Luffy's old path? Let's accept Ace. , I don't see the slightest bit of interest in collecting it at the moment. I can tell at a glance that when the time comes to join the top, why bother? The fruit bounty is harmless, but the plot is the core of a book. You wrote a book about the adventures of the Straw Hats in Luffy's place. Why don't I read the original book? Looking at the time of 25 years and looking at the content of the script from three years ago, the difference is that there is more information that was not available three years ago. I read this book after I finished it, but you gave me a hard time. It's so embarrassing. 😒

I hope you are not careful

It's really outrageous, saying that the most important thing is to give the protagonist a Devil Fruit, and then not having any movement for months.

The author said, "A person who travels a hundred miles is only half a century old. The closer you get to the end, the more clearly you can see a person's character and attitude."

The overall writing is okay, some small paragraphs are very bright, especially Zefa's paragraph is very well written, and the restructure of the characters also has a certain depth, but there are a lot of typos, which sometimes cause drama.

Why are there so many typos? Even if you say it, you won't pay attention to it, and you won't change it either.

Im represents the earth and Joyboy represents the sun. The five old stars are Mercury, Venus, Mars, Jupiter, and Saturn. The three ancient weapons are Uranus, Starfish, and Pluto. Saint Garin is the moon that protects the earth, and his hair is also shaped like the moon. The Knights of God are indeed Yim's army. The old world had Im as the core and the stars revolved around the earth, which was geocentric theory. And Luffy defeated Im because of the sun star. So, this is a collision of old and new ideas, mixed with religion, theocracy, emancipated ideas, etc. Uranus was discovered after the heliocentric theory was established, and was observed after great scientific progress. So the corresponding three weapons are actually the power of Joyboy. The blank hundred years corresponds to the view of religious history in reality. It is known that Im represents religious power, so the huge kingdom is the Roman Empire in reality, enslaving various ethnic groups. The Roman Empire was overthrown by barbarians, so Im was actually born as a slave, or from a lower class. He didn't want people to discover this history, so he banned it.

What fruit does Crowe eat? Vampire? In fact, the Pink Dragon is also extremely powerful, and I strongly recommend that the protagonist get it, as it is powerful enough.