Beginning as a Witcher

To be honest. . The characterization and plot are both good. The battle scenes work too. . Most of the logic is fine. That radical is a bit poisonous. You can write that it's because of political interests that you target pig's feet. But you write that they don't recognize the existence of evil spirits. This is a bit confusing. If the top leaders of the country only have this kind of brain. Society is already finished. . The probability of evil spirits appearing is so high. You actually write that the official does not care about any evidence. . I just don't believe in the existence of evil spirits. I just thought it was the fault of the sect. In fact, the pig's feet look too smooth. Want to put pressure on him. But this logic doesn't make sense. And the way the evil spirits are dealt with. Either you write can kill. . Or just write that it cannot be killed. You can do it normally without killing, just sealing. The only way to kill it is to devour it by the demon hunter. Then the personality splits. I know you're trying to get stronger for pig's feet. Let him eat evil spirits reasonably to become stronger. Your previous setting is to seal the evil spirits and wait for time to kill them. You can definitely write that the pig's feet are quietly devoured every time, leaving a little bit of remains for the evil spirits. In this way, it can develop quietly without revealing its specificity. If these two points are changed. . Have the talent of a great god. These two settings are too contradictory. The further the plot goes, the more energy you have to spend on patching. And the patch may have new setting conflicts. . Need to patch again.

Looking at the name, I thought they were from The Witcher Three 😂

Five-word explanation: There is a devil in the government. Everyone, stop scolding motorcycles. The protagonist cannot see this from the current perspective, so some book friends do not understand why the radicals want to mess with the church like this, because the devil wants to mess with the church. I won't explain too much through spoilers. In addition, thank you all book friends for your support, please vote and continue reading!

It's a shame the comment section is so quiet. The story has a tight rhythm and constant explosive plot points. Especially the character creation of the protagonist is very interesting. The protagonist's acting style is very natural, not rigid, not coquettish, and not artificial. In particular, the way GTA players behave is very endearing. Regarding the background of the story, this is the first time I have seen the author's design. Isn't it extraordinary and extraordinary? Suspicion and prejudice are normal perspectives. But this kind of pressure from society did not make the protagonist's behavior deformed, or behave erratically, or become cynical. Focus on your own pursuits and run for your own "ideals", which is very GTA. Write a final sentence of reflection. Not all good people wear white clothes, The light of justice may not be born at dawn. God is not aloof, God is in the mortal world. People can also transcend the ordinary and become saints, and human nature can carry the extraordinary.

Did China Tobacco sponsor the author?

At the beginning, the pig's feet looked like an unreasonable lunatic. Later, they were still lunatic, but no longer unconventional. Overall the writing is good, but the progress is a bit slow.

It was too much, and the eunuch didn't say a word. It's all for nothing, at least fill in the hole you dug.

The protagonist has traveled 100 days, and he still thinks he is in a game. I can't even describe how stupid he is.

After reading the first chapter, I felt that the main character was a psychopath. I wonder if it will be the same in the rest of the chapter?

I've read the book, it's only 50 chapters, and it's well written. The number of reviews is only 13, which is pitifully small. Anyway, I have already voted for the book. If you read it, please comment and support it.

Chapter 56, no job transfer?

This book is great. I haven't read it so smoothly in a long time. The protagonist's mental state is far ahead 🙂🙂🙂

The top management of the federation is rotten. The protagonist has grown up and must be cleaned up 🙂

By the way, is my cover introduction not very attractive? (In addition, you are welcome to exchange topics about the content of the novel)

Writing a book cannot satisfy all readers