I Asked You to Make a Dungeon, Not a China Succubus Dungeon!

This introduction reminds me of the last disaster of becoming an immortal.

The author completely exaggerates the characters in history. People in history are ordinary people without extraordinary powers. Of course, strategy can play a big role. But this is not the case in the extraordinary era. Under absolute power, conspiracy and tricks are useless. Also, ordinary people who become heroic spirits have very powerful extraordinary powers, which is too speechless. Then the original gods and gods are not as good as the people in history.

1. The author's cultural background is not good 2. There are various bad jokes interspersed in the article, and there are more jokes than the article 3. The world is poorly created, and the characters are poorly created 4. The writing has poor connection and transitions 5. The storyline is like a child talking in his sleep 6. Even if it is read as a bad article, he will not feel happy Be careful when reading, or you may be poisoned.

The subject matter is 100 points, but... Alas! Disappointed😔

What rubbish. Everyone came here just to see your gimmick. You still have to slowly make this copy, integrate FGO, and write about novice reality. I just wanted to have a good time watching it, why should I drag on the rhythm?

What nonsense is written here? The Prime Minister called himself Shuhan. The Prime Minister is about to die and is still in a funny mood. It can be outrageous, but not this outrageous.

It doesn't matter that I picked a topic that was hotly reviewed on the Internet and wrote about it. Unfortunately, the writing style and setting are not very sustainable. It is not exciting enough, and it is not immersive enough.

The idea is good, but the writing wastes such good material. I only write a little in one copy, but then jumps to another copy. What is presented is fragmented and the writing is messy. Everyone who comes in wants to read the copy, but as a result, you don't write the copy very much. Before you start writing one copy, you change it to another one.

Alas, the subject matter of the introduction is very good, but I feel that if you can't write half of it, it may be lost. That is the sun of New China. I really want to see if you, the author, can jump directly to Jianguo.

What on earth are you writing? It's a mess. One sentence to the east and one sentence to the west. Write a sentence that comes to mind. After you finish writing, don't you even read it yourself? The preface does not follow the sequel. It seems like there are more than ten chapters missing between the previous chapter and the next one. It's so chaotic that it's hard to watch.