Douluo: Change Your Destiny with Bibi Dong

The writing is so bad, it makes me uncomfortable to read.

There are problems with the writing, the sentences don't make sense, and the plot also feels like AI, but it's okay.

To be honest, the idea is very good, the plot is very good, but the arrangement and writing are very poor.

Sometimes the male lead is a bit oily. Some logic is not handled well. Neither heroine is likable

The combat power is also weird, there are all kinds of cross-level challenges, and the main leg is also very useless. Let alone level 100 to become a god at this level, it is difficult to practice to level 90 without using the big weapon. As for the main leg, even if you eat the fairy grass in the original work, it is probably barely enough to reach level 90.

So bloody 🥵

The plot is pretty good. It would be more comfortable to watch if the structure is clearer.

From the beginning to Poseidon Island, the plot develops fairly smoothly, but from time to time there are jumps in the text and poor connections. After the plot of Poseidon Island, the plot settings jumped faster and bigger. In some places, I even thought it would be nonsensical. There were no causes and consequences. Suddenly, the characters reached a consensus, and they got involved and fought. As I watched, I stared and shouted: Huh? ? ? Then flip the page back and forth to make sure you haven't missed any explanation. I followed the recent updates purely because I like the character of the protagonist established in the early stage, and the slightly novel plot and setting made me stick with it 😂

No, buddy, why does it sound more and more like a sword the more you write it? This kind of flowing water feels quite good, and the plot is pretty good.

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This martial spirit can be very powerful. Every time he cuts it off with his sword, he will die! Fate

This is also great for deducing exercises and the like, with unlimited trial and error.

Qianxun, will it be over if you die? Don't you want to continue writing?

All Douluo novels are best read only in the comment section

Author, how long will it take for Chihiro Bureau to die?