Entry Wizard

It's better to kill monsters and extract it more conveniently 🤫 The entries in this book make people feel like it is a mission system. I personally have no interest in the missions, and I feel like I am being manipulated when I enter it. For example, in the early stage, the protagonist was asked to go boxing underground. The protagonist was originally going to refuse, but suddenly an entry task came up. Do you want to go? It's bound to happen, but it's an inducement rather than the original intention. It's very disgusting, so I generally don't read novels about the mission system.

It's not poisonous, but it's not unpleasant either. At the same time, the plot is still very good, and it is very dramatic.

He didn't search for Xiruan when he killed someone. He thought he was a rich man, but in the end he had no money for anything else.

So far, it seems that there are no poisonous points, and I would like to make a small suggestion, that is, let the protagonist come into contact with a wizard or learn meditation as soon as possible.

The values ​​are messed up in Chapter 9. Isn't this a poisonous point? Where do so many people come from?

It's so classic. The villain's genius is all kinds of resources to improve the realm. The protagonist's genius is to give you a chance. You treat me like a dog and fight for everything by yourself. What is the meaning of genius? If this woman had made it clear that the protagonist would be exposed and everyone would fight for it, she could help hide it and give the opportunity, and the protagonist would have to choose. But she chose to let the protagonist be a dog, and she almost felt sick and vomited when she brought the protagonist in.

It's said to be an entry, but it's actually a task system.

It's quite good, but it's too bland and a bit hard to read.

The protagonist of the Witcher World is the Witcher. After reading for a long time, I saw the title of the book, The Witcher.

From the first chapter to the end of the second volume, there are all kinds of battles. There is no operational preparation at all. It's really uncomfortable to watch, and it doesn't look like the rhythm of a wizard novel.

Because I didn't bind my mobile phone number before, I couldn't speak with one finger. I only discovered this problem later. Let's treat this as a floor for everyone to give opinions. If you don't like it, you can criticize it. As long as it's not a personal attack, I'll accept it. Actually, I have read all the readers' comments, and I have corrected the correct criticisms. It is really not AI, QAQ! Also, I beg you to read it and vote for it. I kowtow to you all for its wonderful work!

There is no poison or excitement. The protagonist feels like he is stumbling through the plot while holding a string.

This writing style is definitely that of an old author. I would like to recommend some books I have written before. If I am not satisfied with them, I would like to recommend some books I have written before. Let's take a look.

Blood energy surged out of the body and enveloped Rhodes. Rhodes' body began to expand by more than 6 meters, his muscles bulged, and his blood vessels and veins wrapped around his body like steel. The blood energy in his body surged, and his huge body broke through the air resistance and blasted towards the alien species at supersonic speed. The two figures collided together and instantly erupted into a continuous roar. The gravel and soil in the mountain forest flew away, and countless large trees were shattered by the collision. The center of the fighting became a mess.

The blood in Rhodes' body exploded, and his body shot out like a cannonball. The terrifying speed exceeded the speed of sound, directly breaking the sound barrier, and a deafening sound erupted in the mountain forest. In the blink of an eye, Rhodes rushed hundreds of meters away. The astonishing speed brought up terrifying strong winds, leaving huge holes wherever Rhodes stepped on them. Boom! Suddenly, Rhodes slammed into the pirate in front of him. The pirate exploded with a bang, and the debris of the city was scattered everywhere. Rhodes stopped, patted his clothes, and said, that's it

Rhode's clothes began to explode rapidly, and clusters of thick and strange black hair came out directly from his body and quickly covered his body in dense masses. At the same time, his body began to rapidly expand and expand as if it were inflated, bringing a terrifying shadow, and his face was full of blood vessels. Rhodes stretched out his thick claws to grab the reader and threw it into a huge blood basin. His mouth was filled with blood as soon as his sharp teeth closed. Rhodes chewed the flesh and blood in his mouth and made a satisfied sound.

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I took a look at the novel's catalog and found that the first chapter was "On board". You can read it.