Daoist Lord Yuxu

If you can write your first book for him, it would be great if you think you can become a god and make money.

Don't read every finished book!

🐶💩. Is there any secret to the secret technique that everyone knows?

Are you looking for a job these days? Everything goes well🌙

I have a eunuch's resume, so I'll wait and see if it's finished before watching.

If you don't write about Naruto, you'll just have to write about this fairy.

The writing is quite good, but I don't know if I will stick with it, so I don't dare to read it.

I'm not a newbie anymore, why is my writing style so good?

After seeing Chapter 12, I made some comments: It's too bland. It doesn't mean that there must be foreshadowing to have conflicts and contradictions. For online novels, there should be a small goal or pressure on the protagonist at any time to bring readers a sense of attraction and make people read. If there is none, add more settings or high-quality descriptions to make the writing itself exciting. But in the first 12 chapters, you didn't even abandon the world view, and you didn't see anything unique. All in all, you didn't do either of them.

It looks pretty good, 🙂