Lord of Mysteries: a Different World Line

It is a rare mysterious fanfic that uses changes in key events as the starting point. Compared with most novels of the same type that just go through the main plot from a different perspective, it has a big breakthrough in new ideas. However, after reaching one million words, although I can feel that the author has some ideas, in my personal opinion, it seems a little too unrestrained and the reading is a bit foggy. This is mainly reflected in the fact that the characters reflected in some plots are very different from the original work without or lack of foreshadowing, resulting in dramas, such as the conflict between Admiral Star and Lieutenant Iceberg and the backstab of Pales. Of course, it cannot be ruled out that I missed some foreshadowing. As a reader, I hope to see multiple novels in the form of units with subsequent changes due to changes in key nodes, similar to the mysterious version of what if, to reduce aesthetic fatigue.

Since there was really no traffic at the starting point of this article, the author decided to draw fan handwriting! ! A certain sound, a certain station, a certain account, a certain red book will all be updated! ! Everyone, please show your support! The account name is Chrystaling (if you can't find it, just add [little ghost] after the name)

The deputy CP is Leonard and Audrey. It's very inappropriate. Can you change it? In the end, it's still the same sentence that the world needs justice.

I have to make some comments. Forcing Lundai to be paired together is a complete failure. Such a big problem is CP or not, but it is secondary. If you don't know the irrationality and sloppiness of this love line, you would think it was rigged by 008. Pairing two people who are incompatible with each other will be very harmful to their characters and the plot related to them. The author said that this was written to shape the characters. Is the way to shape the characters just to smash the original characters to pieces and then build a new one? And following the previous example of the long scroll of King's Capital, I am pessimistic about whether the author can handle this line well in the future. If you can't write the copy well, you can end it hastily. If the emotional line is rotten, it will disgust everyone. It's true that the pen is in the hands of the author, but you can't write a book just to feed history to readers, right?

No one has read such a beautiful book

The whole book is free, 🙏👍

There may be logic or setting conflicts in some places. But during my reading process, it was basically extremely smooth. This illustrates one thing very well. If a story is interesting enough to be invested in reading, then there may be problems and it will be ignored. Although I don't want to offend, I personally think that if you ignore some of the differences from the squid setting, it will be more interesting to read than Suhuan.

I read it in one go, it was so well written, thank you to the author for generating love. Gorgeous text, fast-paced narrative, dazzling perspective jumps and time-space interlacing writing methods also have their own understanding of the reshaping of characters. I'm curious, since Xiao Ke is no longer attached to his hometown and has a new understanding of himself, will there be a love line in this book? (Although it seems redundant according to the current progress, maybe it can strengthen human nature?)

Generate more than 700,000 words for love, it's amazing

I'm here from Huanba. Check in. I have the same idea as the buddy downstairs. It would be a pity not to sign a contract with hundreds of thousands of words 🙂

Brother is very powerful. He wrote so much for the love of power generation.

This is a partial group portrait story with Klein as the main line. It introduces Su Huan's Outer God path setting in advance. I have to understand it in advance otherwise it will be difficult to understand. The new story 😁😁

Very well written, cheers author! It's just that why the characters in this book are so full of humanity, they especially like to talk, and they are all riddlers, and they want to fight every one they see.

The boss wrote very well, but it's a pity that not many people read it.

Did the author make the angels too human?

I just want to ask, after watching it for a long time, why do you feel like other characters are being cast as CP? I can't accept it...

Come on, I hope you can sign a contract or open a new book smoothly.

This is no longer a group portrait novel. I think it is a Wanxiang novel. Everyone writes a few chapters, and then they keep adding people. The main plot is covered in one stroke, and the subplots are constantly added.

Promotion is too slow. Who will give you time to develop in the later stages?

If there was a fake marriage, wouldn't he kiss 3? Can this be considered a different kind of intimate contact? Isn't this disgusting? Moreover, I don't think the author will write about what will happen in daily life after a fake marriage. Relationship, but there is no emotion and close contact will be a bit uncomfortable... (Not to start a fight, but it is really a bit uncomfortable, and it feels like someone used CP randomly in the past, and more importantly, even if Xiao Ke will become a god in the future and his personality will be indifferent, it does not mean that he will not contact them. , There will be no social relationship, but will try to walk the earth in order to maintain it. For example, Xiao Ke still has contact with his niece. How should he deal with himself when the time comes? Even if they get married in a fake way, they are still a couple. How will he get along with Xiao Ke alone in the future? Don't let the relationship between the two change later. Xiao Ke became closer and then they became each other's companions. In the end, Xiao Ke was kicked away. Do you want Xiao Ke to become the couple's shared lover in the eyes of outsiders? ) PS: To be honest, in terms of wedding banquets, Xiao Ke is more suitable for serious people? , It's not just about benefits or the basic level of social interaction, but about intimacy. Even men are more suitable. And there are many misconceptions that most high-ranking people are not suitable for wedding banquets. But in fact, there is a lot of marriage in it. Even the God of Death has children and the ancient gods are worthy of marriage.

My day is free? Awesome! The author generates electricity for love, you are this 👍

For the time being, I can only say that it is bearable. I like Xiao Ke and Night Adam. I like the setting and plot of the original work. I like the careful entry of the original characters. If I say it sounds good, it is re-shaping the character image. If it sounds bad, it is OOC of the original work.

The author says he doesn't like time travel, but he writes Xiao Ke like most time travel novels written nowadays, forgetting the past and his hometown.

Why are there so many branch lines? The main line is unknown (you still have to rely on the original work). And how dare you speed up the progress of the end of the world and slow down your promotion at the same time 😥

Are there too many characters? 🤔 Sometimes I feel a little confused.

The author feels that the original Xiaoke is still too relaxed and happy, and it needs to be crazy and difficult. What does it mean?😥

There are so many characters that it's complicated. Writing new characters for the sake of branch plots Is it like making a plate of greasy dumplings for a mouthful of vinegar after eating a full meal?

My complaint is purely because this book is a little uncomfortable to read, but it's also uncomfortable not to read it. The author doesn't need to be affected, because many people still like it.

Abandoning the past and showing no kindness, yet still dealing with George righteously. So hypocritical and crazy.

I thought people who read the original Mystery would find Klein's path to promotion difficult. It turns out that in the eyes of some people, it's too cheap, too unqualified, too easy, too virtuous and unworthy of his position.