Traveling at the Same Time: My Sons All Have the Appearance of a Great Emperor

Can't the five senses in the realm of saints see the pores, mites, acne and the like on ordinary people's bodies? It doesn't matter if you have a special physique or human biochemistry. Otherwise, even if you suppress your five senses, you will still feel sick, right?

Wang Teng and Ye Fan's fathers came in? Aren't they all in the same world?

There are too many people in the crossing group. Everyone wants to show off. Without experiencing the test of blood and fire, the protagonist is always a little less interesting.

A blind guessing nanny story, and how the protagonist is so awesome, pretending to be cool and flying around with his son, it's not fun, Nai Wai, I want to see him nibbling on his son

Wang Teng's father and Ye Fan's father are in the same world? What the hell is this?

You did a really bad job with the authority in the early stage. In the same article, your golden finger actually created a chat group with a group leader. It's really hard to understand. Moreover, you can't step on your left foot and your right foot to the sky. It doesn't look like you are wearing the same clothes. It looks like the members of the chat group are all different people.

This introduction? Thinking of Gu Shaoshang, the father of all heavens

Someone has written about this before. Gu Shaoshang is much more awesome than you, and his book scores are also better!

The idea is quite good, but the writing is too messy and scattered. To sum it up simply, the pretense can't be enough to convey the idea, which gives people the feeling of being stupid and wise.

Lezi and Renqianxiansheng are well written, but the plot of raising a baby is not very good. It is similar to Gu Shaoshang's book. Although the protagonist is the father of all heavens, there is no need to hang around them all the time. It is enough to show up when doing work and showing off. At other times, you still have to have your own things, otherwise the content you can write will be too limited.

Meng Qi's dad, Fang Han's dad, Zheng Zha, Zhang Heng, Gu Chensha's dad, Zhang Bairen,

Damn Ye Fan, the sky fell when I heard the news that day... I lost my husband and child at the same time...

You are lucky if you are not beaten to death by the Three Heavenly Emperors

I know why this book is not popular or popular anymore. It's because it writes about too many worlds and it's too complicated. You can mainly write about one or two worlds. For example, if you write about the world of Zhetian, a fight to break the world will be enough. Add the world of Journey to the West, and three worlds will be enough.

I just want to ask if Zhetian World is strong? In this incomplete world where it is difficult to become an immortal, there are all kinds of great things. . . I was somewhat speechless. .

It's too out of the ordinary. To be honest, this kind of fantasy novel fandom is not suitable for this style of writing. Has it always been this style of writing? Or will it be changed later?

I believe the first few, Great Love Immortal Lord︖What are you pretending to be?

The plot is really boring later on, the characters change here and there, and the whole process is full of water!

Tongchuanliu is the Wudi Lezi people doing things in different worlds, because they share the power, which is very bt, and the beginning of the book Let a Hundred Flowers Bloom is a bit interesting. The rest of the story is all about the plot of "Zhetian", and another character in the same world has disappeared. It has become Ye Dong's solo show, basically losing its core. The story of "Zhetian" is full of hatred and bitterness. Is it exciting to write "Zhetian" for you? What's the matter? It can be said that it completely collapsed. It's also ruined. Behind them are the same people who are wearing the same clothes to cover the sky. Tang Seng and Fang Yuan's father are still a little interesting, but the back ones are all gone. Have they been taken over by Chen Dong!

This homework is like a child who grew up watching cartoons for free!

A group of big guys get together and end up with nothing, just a title. The explanation given by the author is that a group of mortals exploded after eating spiritual fruits, so everyone should work hard on their own.

The subject matter is cumbersome, the outline is stretched, it only wants to cling to others, the feeling is not enough, and the writing is average, no wonder it is exempted.

Another Gu Shaoshang? The father of all heavens

I've been limited to two exemptions just by seeing it.

Come out, Endless Shennong

So where is Wang Teng's father? Dead?

There are two people traveling together, in the same world, how do you write it? Wang Teng's father is dead? One world, you come to two.

So many authors hate Tang San and Douluo Dalu, but why are the protagonists of the novels they write even more disgusting than Tang San? The same goes for this book. There are countless births of characters in it.

As the title says, following up is related to whether the work can be recommended. I beg you readers to follow up and read the latest chapter on Tuesday. It's so cool!

What is written at the back? It's all broken.