Douluo: Start with a Tom Cat

Author, are you plagiarizing? I saw that there is a book in FL next door that is exactly the same as yours, but it is almost finished. Please send me the rest of your content, and I will work with you. Don't let me wrong a good person.

He smiles bitterly and touches his nose at every turn. Did the author live ten years ago?

This book was originally good, but I think it is difficult for the author to write it now, and Jerry should not have been included. Originally, when you are a Tom, you can also use the interaction between Tom and the protagonist to make Tom's presence less overwhelming. But now that Jerry comes in and interacts with Tom instead of Jerry, it is easy for him to take over the spotlight. It's too easy to write and break down. In fact, I feel like I'm already a little broken.

How can I put it, the content is quite novel, but I feel that the portrayal of the protagonist is a bit outrageous. He said clearly that he would protect Zhu Qing like a jade, but the next second he provoked Ning Rongrong, using his modern thinking to explain the reason for not taking down Zhu Zhuqing. Why did I feel that he was hanging on both sides, and then The idea of a queen opening a harem is a poisonous point for me anyway. Either you write a protagonist who treats relationships with modern thinking, or you can honestly write a single female protagonist. Tom is a cat anyway, and you can also write something about Jerry provoking a cold kitty and letting her break through her defenses. It would be more interesting.

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God-given soul rings, from tens of thousands at the beginning to several million in the fourth soul ring, the value has completely collapsed. You must know that there is no difference at all in the original work of god-given soul rings. I don't think there is any difference in energy for a system that can extract conceptual props. If I encounter this system, I will directly go to fight soul beasts to obtain soul rings. There is no need to sacrifice your growth speed for the so-called best. After all, these skills are not very useful after the god level. The author's way of leveling up is so disgusting. The protagonist still has to save tens of thousands and tens of thousands, but just a few million will make you break through. This is your fourth soul ring. What will you do with the hundreds of millions behind you? The system also has no function, absorbing the energy of the soul beast as a substitute.

Fanfics basically have multiple female protagonists, which are meant to fill regrets and make people feel happy. Not to mention that there are so many beauties in Douluo. The beauties that some people like are confiscated and taken away by others, which makes them become minotaurs. As a result, they have no desire to continue reading. After all, there are only a few people who like a single female protagonist.

Why can't it be Tom and Zhu Zhuqing together? Imagine Zhu Zhuqing turning on his martial arts spirit and being seen by Tom. Tom's eyes would instantly turn to him and he would be extremely attentive. It would be a show effect.

The author deliberately deepened the hatred between Xiao Wu's unruliness and Tang San. Later, the author plans to accept which female protagonists and female supporting characters. Tom and Jerry are hip-hop characters. What I like is the hip-hop life of the protagonist and heroines with Tom and Jerry, so I want to confirm. It has been confirmed Determining whether I will continue to pursue it or not, without the heroine, these two characters are actually not worth watching in the later stage. The heroines are the boss wives, and the protagonist is the boss. Coupled with the nonsensical daily life, only then can I have the interest of watching Tom and Jerry. Classics are also here.

I hope there won't be any other characters, just one Tom is enough. There was one Pirates before, but when there are more other characters, the flavor changes.

There is a poisonous person who has confirmed their relationship with Zhu Zhuqing and still calls her Xiao Zhu Xiao Zhu. Moreover, when they get along with Zhu Zhuqing, they don't look like a couple at all.

Personally, I feel that the recent plot is a bit boring. It relies entirely on the system to improve soul power and soul rings, not to mention it, which is harmless. Will the price of the soul ring increase to hundreds of billions in the future, because the protagonist will be stuck in level, and then just give Tang San a chance to catch up, so that he can become a god, and then can trigger a wave of plot? And I think different people should give different fame values ​​​​to the protagonist. After a god and an ordinary person know the protagonist, the value generated should be different. Otherwise, the protagonist will only be able to do big jobs that shock the mainland, and it will only make a small amount of money like fighting souls, and the efficiency is too low.

Tom wrote it very well at the beginning, but the heroine was very awkward and made me dig my toes into the ground.

How does the author change Qian Renxue's attitude of wanting to be exclusive? After all, if she is so tough now, it will be a bit uncomfortable if she doesn't handle it well later. If the protagonist still avoids feelings, it will be difficult to make a breakthrough. The heroines are all sincere.

Do you think it would be better to write Tom as a mutated martial spirit?

It's too slow.

Seizing power is so casual But Douluo is also normal

Can Qian Renxue's disguise affect cognition? The protagonist hasn't noticed anything wrong after all this time.

Author, please write more about the daily life of the boss and his wife. The early part is very good, but the second half of the plot is really not interesting. There is no need to fight, daily life is your advantage Also, there are too many words about Tom and Jerry in the back, more than the male and female protagonists. It is really boring

Suppression is real suppression, it's almost fun. If the little angel himself was given it for free in the finals, wouldn't it be better than Qiandaoliu's Riddler Yunliwuli?

I came here to read Pussycat, but it turns out that I'm almost 20 chapters in and I'm still writing about that woman. In addition to forcing weirdness and asking whether women can write books

Can Dou San's armor parts be drawn through the lottery?

It's over. Is there any follow-up? It should be gone, right?