Isn't This a Game? Why Are You Really Cultivating Immortality?

It's both beautiful and heart-wrenching to watch, it's really beautiful to watch, the setting is very novel, and it's eye-catching. I am really upset. I came here for the cultivation of immortality. As a result, this book is more like an infrastructure article. It is engaged in industry in the world of immortality. While saying that "Chinese people are pursuing immortality in their bones", they are fiercely building infrastructure and preparing to build subways and trains (I really don't realize that this is in the world of immortality. Make a secret, form a formation, two sentences of setting, and a random bad guy will give a formula and formation). It can be said that the background of cultivating immortals does not affect the development of the plot. But it actually doesn't affect the plot very much, because there is no big main plot, it's just "development", and at most it's just not enjoyable enough to watch. For example, on the state side, Zhen Weiwei's game character "died". The state has realized that something is wrong with the game, but it has not given him a check-up. What if "game death" is equivalent to "real-life death"? (For example, it was not obvious at first, but became a vegetative state the next day) What a big heart. The state is searching for the modern identity of the heroine. To be honest, there is no use in finding out. On the contrary, it is very bad for the heroine. Even if I keep opening the box of the heroine, anyone can find out the identity of the heroine. I have been trying to equate the "mysterious leader" with the modern identity of the heroine. The first time I opened the box, I even thought that the two parties would be at odds in the future. Also, we already know that something is wrong with the game, and there is no attempt to cover it up. Any game manufacturer can search and find that this game does not have an IP address. The country is very inactive. It does not require hiding it, but at least it has a relationship between the official and the game. Now everyone knows that this game is not within the scope of the country, which is a shame to the country ("I surpass you in technology, and I am arrogant in your home, but I have no ill intentions." This is also very embarrassing). It doesn't mean that the heroine has to be officially connected, but the game company checked the game and found that it has something to do with the country. The country is involved (no matter how much it is involved). At least it can make many people feel that "it has something to do with the official and cannot go into details." Actually, there are quite a lot of bugs, but I almost forgot about them after chasing them down in one go. For example, the one who feels like there is just a teenage girl in front of me, and the one who is in his twenties and has a sense of superiority in his heart, well... This is a world of cultivating immortals, and appearance is the most important thing (but the author is really too "non-traditional in cultivating immortals" and doesn't emphasize the age difference in cultivating immortals. He thinks that he should be how old he is on the surface). There is also the live broadcast. This setting is a bit more fun for readers. It's hard to see others unable to enter the game on the platform, and it's really fun to upgrade silently in the game. However, the author doesn't seem to expand on this setting. Although it is a group portrait, one in the east and one in the west. I actually only remember a dead Zhen Weiwei, a rich man (I don't remember the name, I just remember that he was rich and knew how to make wine), and a live broadcaster. The others are not very impressed ("profound" means they have never seen it. The characters have a highlight, a bland farming infrastructure NPC feel), the supporting characters have been written, but they are all very flat in their portrayal. It seems that everyone's daily life is similar, but the author also said that it is daily and relaxed, so the problem does not seem to be a big problem (but I still hope that there will be two or three outstanding characters with highlights). The current role is that if you apply everything that A does to B, I don't see any problem at all. So I would say it's not really a story about cultivating immortals, but more like a story about farming. The plot points of the supporting characters are basically all focused on building houses, cultivating land and opening roads. It seems that only the heroine's plot points are focused on cultivating immortals, upgrading and fighting monsters. The few plot points of the supporting characters cultivating immortality, the undercover agent, are not described in words, and the sword player has not appeared for a long time. I thought there would be a story about cultivating immortals when the golden spirit root came, but it turned out that because of poverty, I gave it away again. In the future, it may be a command position and an auxiliary position. (Well, although the author wrote "non-traditional cultivation of immortality", I think "basic construction of immortality flow" is more suitable. This is too unconventional. What I originally thought was a [novel type] can only be reduced to a [story background] here.) It's quite good-looking, I'm not looking for faults. It's a really good-looking novel, very novel, but some settings lack some logic, so I couldn't help but point it out. So far, the heroine's personal plot line is very interesting, exciting and perfect, while others have more or less minor flaws. It's not a guide to writing. I write the author's article however he wants. I just point out the parts that "I" (just me) think are unreasonable. The author doesn't have to change them. There is no need to change the xp points of other readers for one reader. I just write it for the author to take a look. It's just a look. Seeking common ground while reserving differences is the right thing to do. (I'm afraid of being scolded by "novel fans" on other platforms. It's a good starting point. There are more "readers" here than "fans", and I feel like I can talk calmly.) Looking at the comments, the author often interrupts updates. I hope my comments are not given to the author. It's a shock. I really think it's pretty good, but I like to point out the shortcomings. If it's really not good, I won't write a long review, or even write a review. After reading so many words and typing so many words, my attitude is quite peaceful. It has been shown that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. I hope the author will update it more. It's very good and interesting.

1. Daily updates are 4K, which is related to website regulations and basically no updates. 2. Daily group portrait flow, not a traditional fairy tale, focusing on light-heartedness. There's no way to be too slow if you're in a hurry. If you're in a hurry, just keep writing.

Good guys, good guys, the author said that there are 6 updates a day, but it turns out that it is updated every 6 days. . .

I beg you, can the author not write a male protagonist😭, that would be great

The author is really incredible. It has been almost a year. He started to stop updating in March, and stopped immediately after April. He updated two or three chapters every six months... Because this book is really not updated, I have switched to a male channel with a lot of content. The male channel writes a lot about game player settings ()

Can the author guarantee completion? As long as it can be completed, everything else is fine. I will live until then.

For a website like this that is a serial reading site, you can write less but it is best to update it steadily every day. It's even better to take a leave. Otherwise, the heat cannot be raised or maintained. As time goes by, the heat will get lower and lower, and it will become more difficult to maintain, and in the end it will become a eunuch. It's a terrible endless cycle

Dear author, I beg you to read more. It's so painful. I like your setting and story. I read it after reading it for several months and a few hours. It's like a drug addiction withdrawal, like a hamburger that doesn't deserve Coke, like a broken refill in a sketch. I really want to read more 😭

I thought he was completely eunuch. The author's two accounts are like this. All four books were suddenly discontinued. I have no confidence in the author at all.

Oh my god, this is so miserable. I finally liked a book, but after reading more than half of it, I realized that the update time was wrong. I looked at the author's page again, and I also read his other book, which was also discontinued. Why did I stumble across it all?