Mihua Is the Most Affectionate

1. First of all, the plot is well written, especially the case where Sera appears for the first time. It feels like the author is thoughtful and gave Sera the spotlight, sacrificing the light he brought to solving the case, which can be regarded as a backing up to the protagonist and the heroine. (I don't like this expression very much, it can obviously be better) The male protagonist should be chaotic and kind, and the good side is reserved for Sera and his family (Kaito, his mother, Butler Terai, etc.) The male protagonist's hang-up is to lie and steal things, which is relatively reasonable, and the few anime that have been combined are also okay and logically reasonable, but being logically reasonable does not mean that readers should feel the same way. 2. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is pretty good, and generally very sweet. As a love insulator in my opinion, Sera actually has good emotional intelligence, and so does the male protagonist. The two of them understand each other's thoughts. The male protagonist dotes on Seriang, and Seriang also trusts the male protagonist. At present, it seems that the woman obviously likes and wants to possess the man, and the man most likely knows this, but neither of them broke through the layer of paper. But whether the two interact well, they are still possessive of each other, and Sera seems to like teasing the male protagonist, so are the two just one confession away from falling in love? 3. The only failure may be that the author did not write the plot where the two met and developed a crush on each other. In the beginning, the relationship between the two was very good, so good that Seriang ran away from home and came to live with the male protagonist for a few days. Then the male protagonist needed money, and Seriang directly sold her motorcycle to the male protagonist to raise money. Corresponding to the protagonist, he went to save Seriang's mother, and then rescued Seriang while racing on the street in a hail of bullets. Although these things can be made up for, I still think it is important to understand the process of mutual affection. I hope the author can tell us how the two met and who they will like first (after all, you wrote the love tag, and half of the readers are here for this part of the plot) 4. At present, the male protagonist is a bit too weak, and Sera seems a bit weak. So you can try to strengthen Sera slightly. Only if they are evenly matched can a relationship last for a long time. Otherwise, the heroine is just a pendant for the male protagonist, dispensable, and her only function may be to serve as a gimmick for Sera's heroine. 5. It can be seen that the popularity of this book is too low, and it is estimated that the author will not make much money, but I still hope that the author can keep updating ❤️❤️❤️

I think it's good. It can be seen that the author has something on his mind. It's good to introduce comics appropriately to increase the story. It's not a failure. Emotional scenes are handled well so far. The word "affectionate" is not suitable for "passionate" if it is dull.

I'm too fussy about punctuation and can't bear to use punctuation marks.

How can there be no monocle in the wrong way 🤓

I'm speechless. I feel so affectionate when I see you, Mihua. The first thing I thought about the title of this work was a harem, but it turned out to be a single female protagonist.

I quite like girls like this 😟

If Sera is a single female protagonist, the market will vote with their feet.

If you like the heroine Sera, you can rest assured. I haven't found any poisonous points after reading the revised version. The writing style is relatively delicate, the rhythm is stable, and the emotional description is also good. The cases are original, and it is linked with some other anime with phantom thieves, such as the three cat-eye sisters. The protagonist should be chaotic and kind at the moment, and has not yet suffered from depression. It's a pity that the popularity is a bit low. This Conan fanfic I have read is definitely at the forefront of my opinion. Then there is the talking dog that is a bit of a drama and is very disconnected from the plot. I don't know if this is considered a poisonous point.

In Conan, there is a mysterious potion sequence. If it is too strong, it will be impossible to write, but if it is too weak, it will overwhelm the combat power. Moreover, you must think about the problem from the perspective of an extraordinary person. Many methods used to promote the development of the plot cannot be used. Once the protagonist is stupid, it will be a big poison. The later rituals are also difficult to carry out, and the protagonist is almost invincible once he reaches Sequence 4. How should he write about it later?

First of all, the author's inspiration is good, and the writing style is good enough to write a fan novel, but the current impression is very confusing. The first is the protagonist's plug-in. This plug-in largely solves the difficulty of writing the magic part of the protagonist's Phantom Thieves activities and the complicated reasoning narrative problems in the investigation. This level of trouble-free is something that everyone likes to see. Just as people don't like to watch the author narrate the case all the time, people don't like to watch the author explain magic for a long time. However, the author is a bit slow in writing plug-ins for investment, which can be regarded as scraps. Conan novels are mostly slow to gain popularity. If such a flat narrative is crammed into the 4,000-word daily update, it will really make readers run away. Then there is the main story of the protagonist. After all, fan fiction must be based on the original work, because readers come in for this. However, the protagonist of this book has not yet returned to Japan except for making phone calls, and even his occupation is a bit confusing. The author not only wanted to stay in the comfort zone, but also wanted the protagonist to be a copycat and a phantom thief like his old books. He also wanted to travel around and get in touch with different comic characters, which led to a very confusing look and feel, and he didn't even know whether it was a comic or a fan. Among the non-Conan characters I have come across so far, apart from Brian, the disobedient birth family, the three Cat Eye sisters are still related to the Phantom Thieves. I hope the author won't add too much to the comprehensive comic. The current dog who can communicate with the protagonist has already made the protagonist very powerful in cheating. He even has the advantage of knowing the plot first. I don't know how to write the main plot later? Even the specific time of the main plot is not clear yet, because it is difficult for everyone to tell whether Conan has shrunk. I just wrote so much that I hope the author can see it. Apart from being a little messy, it's actually okay. Let's see if the author can grasp the outline later. The protagonist feels invincible at the moment, so it's better not to let him hang too hard.

Yesterday I saw the cover and message of Rohan Kishibe painted by Aoyama, so I made a living based on the story of the wealthy village recommended by Aoyama, and linked it with JOJO's Bizarre Adventure Do you think it is a good job? 😊😊😊

It's really rare to see the heroine Sera for the first time, even if she is a younger sister from outside the realm, the heroine has a much better identity than Sera. Come on.

Wherever there is Sera and purity, there is my Smecta!

Which other female protagonists are Sera's famous detective fans?

The heroine marked one, single or multiple...

I just saw it today, I didn't notice it before... Oh oh oh, author, I always feel like you are insinuating something [doge]

Come on, stop being eunuchs. There are basically no fanfics of Sera's pure heroine! He is obviously a very charming character, so at the end of this month, the double monthly pass is yours!

I have to say that I really like the heroine of your book. By the way, does the author also like Yueshui?

The author is so miserable, Conan's house collapsed 😅 I wonder if it will affect the fandom