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I feel like the subject of Conan has been dirty by your writing.
Hey guys, is this the Dragon King style's invasion of Conan? Could the protagonist bring you foot-washing water?
A brief view of the character
Let me make it clear that the protagonist is a time traveler and the protagonist knows the plot. First of all, I like Conan, I like Kogoro, I like Xiaolan, I like Sonoko very much, I like Boy Detective Corps, Kuroba Kaito, I like Nakamori Aoko, I like the three cat-eye sisters, I like Akai Shuichi, I like Sera Masumi very much, I like Haibara Ai very much, I like Toru Amuro, I like Tan Hakuba, I like Mary very much, I like Eri Fei, I like Sato Miwako very much... (Characters will be added after the corresponding plot is set) The subsequent plots will also be more or less unfolded from the perspectives of these characters. (If you find it too troublesome and don't like the verbosity, you can follow the following steps and abandon the book directly)
Compared to Ooka, they are still more like sisters in the next life! ! It can be seen from the original work Inland Sea ~ You have gained one of the three sisters! In fact, it's just like packing them together ~ not to mention the charm of sisters in the next life! I think it will kill Ooka instantly! Moreover, the background setting of the Afterlife Sisters is more powerful than that of the Ooka family. Their butler, Uncle Nagaishi, is a former American general who has a good relationship with the President of the United States, including European and American business dignitaries, and can mobilize U. S. Military fighter jets. Not to mention the strength of the Ooka family, even the Suzuki family cannot match the background of the Afterlife Sisters. So, author, what are you waiting for? Hurry up and arrange for the protagonist and the Afterlife Sisters! !
The protagonist's character is flawed! I've only seen such a trashy protagonist in my life.
Difficult to choose a name
I suggest you learn how to write the Silver Bullet written by Ke Xuezhi next door. After all, the heroine of Ooka Momiji written next door is really good. It's a pity that the author didn't update it two years ago 🌹
I'm sure that the Ooka family and Hongye must be the ultimate poisonous spot.
This book feels weird. Although the introduction to the book says that if you don't take the Ooka family's money, you won't take it for free, but the protagonist is the son-in-law of the protagonist. It's the protagonist's daughter-in-law. It's still unclear who the money belongs to. After all, the protagonist makes me feel quite useless. He still takes money and doesn't want it to be swallowed up by others. That's good enough, and since Hongye is the heroine, can we write more about the emotional changes and interactions between the male and female protagonists? After all, this is a Conan fan, do we have to wait for Hongye to be rejected by Hattori Heiji before having any emotional interaction with the protagonist? Isn't the protagonist a real enemy? And wouldn't it be embarrassing when the protagonist and Heiji meet again in the future?
This writing made me feel like I was reading a book on a pirated website. It felt like it was all garbled. There was no connection between the previous and next chapters, as if the chapters were out of order.
Everything else is fine, but love is a mess, unless you choose to have a harem.
I would like to ask how to deal with the three sisters of Maoyan in the later stage? Because I quite like him and they become the heroines.
You want to persuade someone to quit at the beginning, but you still want to force someone you don't like to become the heroine? The beginning is so vulgar, I have no idea what I am expressing by writing so much at the beginning. How can we write so many things that can be concluded in one chapter? I haven't learned any of the good points from fan fiction, but I've learned a lot of bad points.
There are people writing this type of heroine, but I don't think there's anything pleasing to the eye about Hongye.
As long as you remember the treasures in the plot, the protagonist will not be short of money
After looking at it, I found that in addition to not being able to get the rhythm of the story, the logic of the various choices made by the protagonist is completely inconsistent with each other. The logic of the actions conflicts with each other, just like a robot loading and unloading various conflicting action programs at any time for the storyline.
Have cat eyes? Did you choose the wrong heroine?
Let's talk about why the author doesn't sleep with Xiaolan. Xiaolan is very comfortable sleeping. Isn't it uncomfortable for a beautiful high school girl?
Why do the first few chapters make me want to curse?
I've read less than 20 chapters. What the hell is it written? The son-in-law doesn't look like the husband-in-law, and Wen Chao Gong doesn't look like Wen Chao Gong. They all look different. Some people say they know the plot, so why are they written like an idiot?
The thinking is good but the writing is bad. After reading Ke Xuezhi's Silver Bullet, I became the benchmark.
Congratulations on finishing this book🐉
When I saw the word "Dragon King", my son-in-law came out, and then I thought of the picture of the crooked mouth. Haha, I got cancer from embarrassment.
Why are the Maoyan world and the Conan world not completely integrated? I want to see the Phantom Thieves War.
Turtle man as spare tire
No matter how the author writes, it's the same. Isn't the protagonist Hattori's backup? Over five hundred chapters, Momiji learns that Hattori likes Kazuha, and then turns to the protagonist, claiming the promise of seven dates. It's just that I haven't caught up with the love I've had for twelve years, so I'm looking for the protagonist as a backup! No matter how nice it is to say it, there is no use. It was Hongye who broke off the engagement at the beginning, but later because of the will, he had to make a seven-date agreement for the sake of family property. From the beginning to the end, he did not feel his love for the protagonist, and only saw the compromise of reality.
Keep writing, I've already seen the paid chapters
Take a big look! ! !
There will be more cat-eye scenes later on, you know! (Must order in full)
Since I like Tears in the Next Life, why not just have more heroines?
Systematic failure! Dang Wenzhao Gong's novels and comics don't have much plot! The sense of immersion is not good, and it is an aggrieved story about a son-in-law, which makes it uncomfortable to read.
Do you have any recommendations for Conan fanfics? I feel like they are all copied from the original text and then added some of my own creations. It's so boring.