I'm Only Eighteen Years Old, I Don't Have Time to Enjoy My Old Age!

The writing is okay, and the plot is relatively dense. It feels like a sweet story about daily life on campus plus a little love story. It can be seen that there is a clear setting, and it is a relaxed and happy writing style, but I personally feel a bit heavy. Several lines may have been BE in the past and future, but now they should gradually be resolved with the "awakening" of the protagonist. Let's see what happens next Additional updates! Get on the shelves quickly! Do you need to discuss with the editor to see how to gain fame, or should you increase the number of words before taking action? Come on

I am a true warrior of love!

There is nothing wrong with the author's writing. It's just that some of the plots don't feel relaxed. Based on my personal preferences, I simply suggest that the author delete some heavy plots and describe more daily life with more relaxed words and more relationships between heroines from different perspectives. This should give better results. If the author is doing it for love, personal hobbies, etc., You can ignore it and just write according to your own ideas.

The urban love story has turned into a time-space suspense urban love story. I have read all the free chapters but have no desire to subscribe. It is not a sweet love story at all. The author inexplicably inserts this future line into that future line, ugh.

The taste is a bit complicated. I thought it was an urban campus love, but it turned out to be a bit heavy.

The author, the writing is very good, don't be a eunuch

If there are no more chapters Wadasi

There is too much time and space, can we still write about the main world?

But since so many people have praised it, I still want to see what the author has written.