It Turns Out That I Am the Source of Strangeness

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I think the author's writing style is quite good, and it's easy to read. But it's obviously a good writing style, but I can't stand it anymore. I analyzed my psychological process from being interested to not being interested. In fact, it has nothing to do with slow heating. There is nothing wrong with slow heating. The problem is that there is no hook. Except for suffering, there is no other information in the dozen or so chapters—— For example, there is some [special] world view. There is no problem in applying these dozen or so chapters to the plot of ordinary refugees from ancient feudal society being captured as slaves in mines. In terms of shaping the worldview of the external environment, it did not arouse curiosity. For example, there are no impressive characters in more than ten chapters. Although the characterization is not the worst, in fact, none of the characters are OOC (for example, the image of the horse bandit, the village chief, and the mine supervisor are consistent), but they just fit the title, and the characters are bland and featureless. Another example is Golden Finger. In fact, the writing style of many new novels is not as good as the author's in terms of the above two points. For example, the writing of little characters is nondescript and OOC. So they quickly took out the golden finger that aroused curiosity and interest and acted as a hook. If you are not too picky about writing style, you will be able to read it. However, The Protagonist's Golden Finger was released after more than ten chapters, and the product was not right. [The protagonist discovers that he can practice using the exercises he saw in his previous life, so he practices secretly.] This kind of golden finger is not only unattractive to me, but also unconvincing. And the weird world view that should have appeared has not yet been reflected. (Or the way it is reflected is that the setting of "monsters running out of the mines" is too old-fashioned and the weird atmosphere is not in place) I was attracted by the evil protagonist in the introduction, but since there are no relevant elements in more than ten chapters, I can only stick to this. Of course, there is nothing wrong with the author's writing style. In other words, judging from the dozen or so chapters, they all belong to the kind of good introduction that I prefer. The kind of writing that is not easy to read will not last for two chapters unless the hook is attractive. If you don't value the [Evil God Element] in the introduction, you won't be disappointed if you look at it as an ordinary mortal. This is also a problem for old bookworms. If the characteristics are unclear and the homogeneity is severe, I will lose patience if I can't see what's behind. Ten years ago, I actually had to be more patient. I value [amount of information] more, especially at the beginning of the novel. It doesn't matter if it's a golden finger, it doesn't matter if it has vivid characters, or it doesn't matter if the world view is interesting.

I feel like the author should change the introduction. Your introduction looked like an invincible article, but I clicked in and read Chapter 15, which was just a piece of cake.

The hang-up is too big. Even if you have invincible qualifications, you still need to open the system to redeem it. It's too invincible and it's boring.

It has a strange skin, but it is actually an old wine used in traditional cultivation of immortality.

I suggest you put the golden finger at the beginning. If you put it in more than 30 chapters, people who can't read chapter 30 will just run away? The key point is that this is not a slow-burn article, but a fast-paced article. I don't understand what the author is thinking.

It's so boring. I haven't even gotten to the point yet when I read Chapter 10. I've written ten chapters of a story about someone being caught in a mine. The protagonist doesn't have any abilities and it has nothing to do with the title. Come on.

I wrote it too fast, without any good preparation, and it ended up being a matryoshka doll with a bad ending. Now it has the flavor of a mortal cultivating an immortal.

I knew I wouldn't be able to write anymore in the end, eunuch, right?

I think all of you fellow Taoists have the talent to be immortals. Please show me your noble hand and help the poor Taoist.

1. For the title of the book, please don't choose a story from the middle or later period. I haven't seen a corpse in the sky at all. The protagonist doesn't know that his corpse is in the sky, and he is not invincible at the beginning as he imagined. It can be said that the previous part has nothing to do with the title of the book. 2. Feeling Time The lines are so complicated and too blurry. Months or even a year have passed without you paying attention, and your mind is still stuck on the last second a year ago. Various supporting characters also appear out of nowhere. They are very smooth, but you don't even know when they appeared. Time The thread skipped too much 3. I've read about 25 chapters now, but I can't find it exciting, and I haven't found the main plot. The little girl died quite quickly at the beginning. I thought she was a heroine or something like that. The boss lady in the back is actually a bus. She seems to be very interested in love and has some male pets. I guess I do it every day before I meet the protagonist. Even though I haven't written anything about it after meeting the protagonist, there is a high probability that I won't be looking for a male favorite. In addition, I don't know why I suddenly noticed the protagonist, and then I would be happy to meet the protagonist. Anyway, it is still an inexplicable way Keep up the good work, I will run away first.

Note, there is no golden finger. In Chapter 10, I am still working as a hard worker and suffering hardships.

Your own corpse from your previous life has become the source of strange things. How do you feel?😁

The introduction is an invincible article. The system is not necessary. Just have a golden finger.

The writing is actually quite good. There are no logic problems that defy the odds. There are occasional plot demands. Personally, I think it is within the acceptable range of online writing. The problem is, after reading the title and introduction, I thought it was the "I can't tell the difference" kind of thing. However, after reading it for a long time, this kind of content accounted for very little. The main content is that the protagonist suddenly encounters a change, endures all the way, and then breaks out and starts mowing the grass for revenge. After killing a super god, I have to change copies and kill again. I can't stand it anymore.

It's so beautiful, why doesn't anyone see it? Damn it

It's pretty good. Well, at least there's nothing wrong with it.