Douluo: Delayed Son of Destiny

"A direct analysis of the author Dou Er's original protagonist Huo Lingbing (also known as Dai Yuhao, it is possible that he still took the name of Huo Yuhao, it is possible that Huo Lingbing was also a pseudonym he chose, or it may be what people called him after becoming a titled Douluo) and the inevitable plot route without Tianmeng and Electrolux" I think this It should not be a substitute, it should be the original Huo Yuhao's body. At this time, it should be Dai Yuhao, and there is no protagonist Huo Yuhao, because Tianmeng was not sacrificed, which means that Electrolux was not attracted, that is, it is still drifting in the universe, so it can be confirmed that the piece in the protagonist's hand should be the fragment of divine consciousness in the original work. The piece in Huo Lingbing's hand should be another piece that came from nowhere. Huo Lingbing should be Dai Yuhao in that era. He was also a lucky child of that era. It is normal to have some cheats. What's more important is that we don't know what part of the memory about Electrolux's consciousness fragment in Huo Lingbing's hand? If there were only memories of him being full of hatred and fighting across the entire continent, but not the memory fragments of the Divine Seal Throne era, then there would be fun to see. Those were the divine memory fragments of the dark period, and hatred was also filling his heart. But without the teachings of Tianmeng and Electrolux, the original Yuhao would inevitably turn dark. Coupled with Tangshan's guidance and invitation, they will definitely join the Tang Sect and go to Shrek Academy. Although I don't know where I got the other piece, in terms of personality, I will definitely avenge my father. The Star Luo Empire still needs him to guard the border, and it is impossible to just let him take revenge. Therefore, there are conflicts and conflicts, and the personality is also a bit fierce. The two sides will definitely fight. If it is more intense, then the entire Star Luo Empire will directly fight head-on. When Huo Lingbing comes into conflict with the entire Star Luo Empire, and it is absolutely impossible for Huo Lingbing to give up his hatred, Shrek Academy will definitely persuade Huo Lingbing to let go of his hatred. One student is not worthy of the entire Shrek Academy and the entire Star Luo Empire being enemies. The interests of both parties are not equal, so Huo Lingbing will definitely leave Shrek Academy and the Tang Sect. In order to find an opportunity for revenge, the exchange student between the Sun Moon Empire and Shrek Academy is a good opportunity to help him complete his revenge. Even with Tangshan's intervention and obstruction, the plot line would not have been so smooth. Judging from the results, the author still followed the original plot line regarding the Dou Er period. But without the teachings of Tianmeng and Electrolux, they will inevitably go deeper into darkness and hatred. Even if Tangshan uses love and love to win over the other party, it probably won't have much effect. It is very likely that Tangshan used his resurrected mother as a threat to let the original real protagonist Huo Lingbing become a dog. Judging from the situation, Orange and the original protagonist Huo Lingbing have a natural hatred. Both sides are hostile to the same person. Their hatred is the same target, the same Star Luo Empire, without the teachings of Tianmeng and Electrolux. The changed history of Dou Er is that Huo Lingbing rebelled, betrayed Tang Sect, betrayed Shrek Academy, and openly joined the Sun and Moon Empire. In order to win Huo Lingbing's heart, Xu Tianran would definitely send Huo Lingbing's original first love, Orange, to control him. In order to gain a loyal genius subordinate, Xu Tianran would definitely send Huo Lingbing's original first love, Orange, to control him. In the days of time, both parties share the same goals and hatred, so they will inevitably fall in love. It was impossible to be Tang Wutong anymore, so the only reason why Tangshan used Huo Lingbing to be his dog was because of his mother, since he controlled her.

At present, it seems that the author has done very little in shaping the characters in the novel. It can only be said that there is not much. There is only a thin interaction between the characters and no feedback after the interaction, that is, the inner activities, demeanor and emotions of the characters are not written out. Based on my feelings after reading the original work, Tang 50 and Xiao Huo are both very emotional people. I hope the author can write it out bit by bit. Finally, I wish the author that his writing will become smoother and smoother, and I will continue to support it.

The female protagonist is Huo Yutong and the male protagonist is Tang Wulin. If you want to watch a single female protagonist, feel free to watch it.

There was no Laohuo thousands of years ago, but there is still a soul?

I have no objection to Xiao Huo and 50, but I am against the three (except for the third brother). I hope the author can be kind to his father and filial to his son, because with 50's character, he knows what San Gou did.

According to the bloodline theory, this protagonist must be a descendant of the Ice and Snow Maiden spirit beast clan. After all, the protagonist possesses the Ice and Snow Maiden spirit. Of course, it is not ruled out that he may be the descendant of Dou Er's Ice and Snow Maiden spirit master, or he may be the human clan that possesses the Ice and Snow Maiden spirit in Bingcheng. Currently, there are only descendants of these three types. After all, the inheritance method of martial arts is more reliable than blood recognition. The Dai family is green

The writing is a bit green and the emotional progression is a bit sloppy.

The author's idea is also quite new. Xiao Huo Niang has all the basic configurations of Yi Lao and Tian Meng, and no one comes to compete with Xiao Huo Niang. The overall writing style is still very comfortable to read, relatively warm, and Xiao Huo Niang is also very cute 😍. The shortcomings are probably a common problem among novice fan authors. I feel that the writing style still has a lot of room for improvement. Some parts still look like compositions, but it is at least average among Dou 2 fans. Alas, mainly true writers rarely write fanfics on your site 😂. I also hope that the bunch of parentheses in the text can be deleted. It is too confusing to read.

You can't be a eunuch, this is the Douluo fanfic that best suits my taste.

Single? It's better to go alone. Love the mainland, x Tang Wulin again, it's better not to let it go!

The most poisonous place: Halosha is still trying to destroy Shrek all day long. The meaning of Harosa is unclear at the moment. I am very curious whether the author has an outline or not. Or maybe the outline is the original main line and just follow the original work. The current main plot is Shrek's entrance examination, but the writing of this entrance examination is worse than Zhang Wei's, and it can basically be regarded as half-copying and half-writing. The attitudes of different people are not reflected at all. For Gu Yuena, this place is just a passerby. It doesn't matter to Gu Yuena whether she can enter Shrek or not. Her main focus is on subverting the Spirit Transferring Pagoda's plan. As for Huo Yutong, she didn't know how strong Shrek was, but she had already seen Harosa's abilities. Don't the 12-year-old children in Douluo District still understand what college life is like? It's not a purely civilian family like Tang Wulin's. The Ice Emperor, who has survived Douluo II, is like an idiot. The Far North is no longer a restricted area for humans, and the Ice Emperor's goal at this time is not to become a god, but to live a good life and not be a drag on others. Under such circumstances, I would never have imagined that the Ice Emperor has not exploded yet. At present, you can continue to watch dozens of chapters (I still have poison resistance), and you can tear up the book if you still tie the original work. You, the author, also have to reflect on why it has not been put on the shelves and there are so few people. It is obviously not caused by the promotion/following of the third issue. Currently, there are two branches of the fandom. Up to now, I still can't tell whether I'm anti-three or neutral. Assuming that the main plot is the opposite, there is no fun part. Do you expect Huo Yutong to deal with the Abyss and Tang San factions with non-god-level weapons and Douluo Continent's spicy chickens loyal to xxx? What is it if it's not a dream? Combat weapons and ideological weapons, at least one must be proficient and one must pass. Considering the current state of the native Huo and the zero-IQ Electrolux, I can't say the direction of this book. Just don't end up with a cheat like Peerless Light, that would be even worse.

It's very interesting. The author keeps writing, grasps the logic, and doesn't care too much about comments.

I originally thought about writing it and revising it, but now that I have sent it, I don't want to write it anymore.

Because I feel that what I wrote is a little off, and the more I write, the less I feel, so I started to rewrite it. I will start from Chapter 18. Reading may not be smooth before I finish the revision, so please forgive me.