Martial Arts World: the Beginning Revives the Beggar Gang

Revitalize the Beggar Gang? What kind of brain circuit is this? Do we want the world to be unified? Bringing people all over the world to beg for food? Harvesting and cutting?

What are you writing about? Read the original book clearly before writing! The idiot protagonist is really an annoying piece of trash! The Beggar Clan would be damned useless with just this little bit of martial arts!

Qidian also has this kind of erotic novel, how can it be reviewed?

Going to farm and be a soldier is better than being a beggar, right?

Let's talk about the evaluation first. A novel with a score of about 75-80 points is of good quality. Definitely not as bad as said in the comment section. Advantages: The three elements of the novel, characters, plot, and environment. There is no problem with the author's character creation and social environment in this book, which is also the advantage of the novel. The protagonist is chivalrous but not pedantic, determined and not soft-hearted. He is a good character. The second is the environment. The description of the social environment is also the environment. For example, after the game was released, the six major factions besieged Guangmingding. The battle between the protagonist and Wu Sanren, the two Dharma Kings, was very exciting. Disadvantages: It must be the plot! Two points. First, the protagonist is fourteen years old. He said something to himself. When he found out that Xie Xun was in the Western Region, the leader of the gang released the protagonist. This part is too confusing. The helmsman neither asked his subordinates to reconcile the news, nor did he learn more about the details with the protagonist. Whatever the protagonist said, what does this mean? Secondly, before it was released, this part of the plot where the protagonist went to Guangmingding was the most hated part. I also found it difficult to watch this part. The plot must promote the development of the story and the growth of the characters. I would like to ask what role this part of the plot has in promoting the two of them? The protagonist left his elders behind and went up the mountain alone. What did he do next? You didn't do anything. You neither killed or injured people from the Ming Cult, nor helped people from the six major sects, nor did you learn about the Great Shift of the Universe. In other words, I walked around the mountain and did nothing. So what do you want to express in this part of the chapter? You must remember that the protagonist is a decent person, a well-established hero in the martial arts world. You must sit firmly on the stool under your butt, that is, become a martial arts supreme that everyone respects in the martial arts world, and do not do things that are nonsense or inconsistent with your personality. You can raise your arms and overthrow the Yuan Dynasty later, and you can suppress Shaolin and Wudang, but the Mingjiao must not be soft-hearted, they must be beaten, and even if they are not killed, they must be imprisoned, because you were born as a decent person, and you did not have a grandfather named Yin Tianzheng! ! !

The plot design is illogical and I have no idea why.

The author has written with great respect for the original work, and he has put his heart into it. It is much better than those who just pretend to be 13 at the beginning.

The writing is good and the story is good. Come on, don't mind those comments in the comment section that are too violent.

After watching it for a long time, I had no idea what position the protagonist was playing.

This book is well written, but the details are a bit rough. Good luck, author.

You revived, what are you doing?

The Great Shift of Things to Be Done from the Beginning, Praise 👍

It's okay, why is there no one?

Do you want a eunuch? Don't. When I first read it, I had a mediocre impression because of some errors in the description of some details in the original work. As I read, I felt better and better.