Swallowed Star: The Supreme Sovereign

Author, please reduce the amount of writing about the financing company. After reaching the planetary level, any king-level monster could easily buy out your entire listed company. It doesn't seem to make any sense. Currently, dozens of chapters have been written about it, and because the company takes up most of the content, plus the presence of Xiao Cai, I really can't see what role this…

Starting a company doesn't seem very worthwhile, especially with two small families investing in it. It's a waste of time and energy. Later on, defeating a single monster can wipe out most of the company's profits. Currently, you have Teacher Chen sponsoring you, and once your talent shines, you'll be able to attract more investment. Becoming a martial artist as soon as possible is the key.

I doubt the author would just give these two women the female lead. I felt they looked down on the male lead at the beginning, and now that he's somewhat talented, they're trying to curry favor. I'm a little annoyed by this kind of female lead.

I advise you to write less, or start a new business novel; don't try to sell something else under a false pretense.

Wearing the skin of a devourer, he's actually a red-haired character with a whole set of traits! It doesn't devour anything; is it a state of mind? A skill setting?

There's no need to start as a non-beginner student, then reach intermediate level in a few days, and then become a martial artist in a few months. That would definitely attract unwanted attention. The normal approach is to start as a senior intermediate student, then become an advanced student close to a near-martial artist, and then become a martial artist alongside Luo Feng.

It lacks any of the characteristics of devouring. Devouring isn't about covering the sky, nor does it require recklessness. Sometimes, it's necessary to play it safe.

So what's written next? Reforming slavery? It's like someone telling the government to change the system 😴, then leaving, the book being deleted 😜.

Chu Nan, go back and write red-haired fanfiction.

Second-tier strength. Perfect genes plus the secret technique obtained from perfect genes are at least third-tier strength. Isn't that too much of a suppression? It was already awkward that the strength didn't change at all when the genes increased. If the strength increases by several times, the strength should also increase by several times. You didn't even write about the characteristics of devouring. If the strength doesn't change, why pursue the gene multiplication?