The Supreme Sovereign of Perfect World

This makes sense. The protagonist is essentially a template of the Beginningless Era, invincible and crushing those of the same level. He can kill ordinary people one level higher in one or two moves, geniuses in a few or ten moves, and even prodigies can be overpowered and killed. Only monsters can fight him head-on. After all, with so many talents and comprehensive enhancements, it would take anyone a long time to fight, otherwise no one would watch.

Originally, most of the book's highlights and climaxes focused on the protagonist and Shi Hao. However, you then introduced Xiao Miao and emphasized her, and the system is clearly an important supporting character. But this effectively diminishes the protagonist's aura, or rather, his screen time, instantly lowering the overall impression.

The beginning was alright, but the Kun tribe part was a bit awkward. They had no grudge against you, but just because Shi Hao later had a grudge against them, you went to cause them trouble. You could cause trouble, but the way you wrote it wasn't handled very well.

By the way, please don't include anything like the cringe-worthy stuff from the last book, with its 15+ restrictions and the potential to become an Immortal Emperor. Unbearable

Then Xiao Miao appeared, he has a system, has more screen time than Shi Hao, and completely overshadows Shi Hao. It's disgusting and a waste of my points.

Xiao Miao's appearance is purely disgusting; this book is basically doomed, you can withdraw your subscription.

I saved over ten chapters, and suddenly a system protagonist appears… You're not writing Zhu Tianwen, you're writing fanfiction, and you're even surpassing Shi Hao… You still want popularity? No wonder people are leaving.

It looked pretty cool at first, but this part seems a bit mindless lately? A Divine Fire Realm cultivator going head-to-head with the remnant soul of the Demon King Pu? That's way too stubborn! 😥

I have absolutely no idea what you're writing. You think you can become an immortal in a perfect world? After the Immortal Ancient Burial, the Otherworldly Realm already placed a curse on the Nine Heavens. How are you supposed to become an immortal? Even more ridiculous is that the protagonist, barely a Celestial King, beats up the Otherworldly Celestial King with one hand?

This little bit is hardly enough to read. If foreigners see it, they'll think we look down on them. I'll give you a number: 200 chapters per person. 😌😌