Travel Through 1920, Add Some Points and Call It the Ancient God

The writing power is still good, but it's not enough to read. More updates 😁😁

The protagonist's Watson is too fw. The assistant likes the male protagonist without any cause and effect or plot line. This woman feels like a tool used to forcibly stitch the plot together. She is a batch of embarrassing crying scenes and emotional breakups. She looks like the incarnation of something for no reason, like a puppet made by being killed.

Doesn't the author explain what the main character's attributes and strengths are? After adding one year, 90 points seems very high, but even a mob is more powerful than the protagonist, which makes it seem so mediocre.

After reading the introduction, I thought it was a cool article, but it turned out not to be the case. After reading the first chapter, I thought the protagonist was a mature and stable one who has everything under control, but it turned out to be the case. After reading it, I just felt that the protagonist is so ordinary. In the face of crisis, he can't do any exciting operations. New readers can read this, but if you are old bookworms, just leave.

Yesterday, an old man wrote a book review. It listed 3 points. It was quite long. I originally wanted to reply to thank you this morning, but I couldn't find it, so I just opened a separate book review to thank you. First of all, thank you all readers for your love of my book. Looking at the daily increase in reading and collection data, I have the motivation to continue reading. Thank you all. Then there is the setting of the protagonist Goldfinger. Because my idea comes from the traditional COC running group, this kind of point-adding flow will indeed be a bit old-fashioned. But in the future, a loot system will definitely be added to improve the protagonist's combat power, and the protagonist will definitely face those ancient gods. However, in the early stage, I am afraid that there will be too many things to digest, so I have put it aside for the time being. There is also the issue of the main plot and the branch plots. The prophet plot will definitely exist as a major main plot for a long time, and the character branch will not be opened until this plot is over. After all, the rhythm in the early stage will indeed be tight, and it will be a bit inconsistent if a branch line is forcibly inserted. Finally, I would like to thank every reader who has seen this. Every collection and reading of yours is a great encouragement to me. Thank you all.

Dear readers, please read the new book soon. If you think the writing is good and you have time, please read the last page. Thank you.

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The road is long and long, I will search up and down, and encourage each other😁