Alchemists Deceive the Sky

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This could have been read, um, easy to talk about. Suitable for appetite.

I have been reading novels for 17 years and have read them all with various themes. The theme of this book is very novel and very interesting. It feels refreshing and bright. The barbaric flow➕a little bit mysterious➕the god flow. It is still okay as the first novel written by the author. If the narrative is not too strong when writing about the human world, and does not completely follow the path of the long-term flow, and lays out some suspense and pits when writing about the human world, it will be easy to write when writing about the heaven. It is possible that this book will be as popular as Seeking Demons, which covers the sky and the ears! ! ! However, as the first book written by the author, I personally feel that it is already very good, and the flaws are not covered up. Come on, author! ! Come on! ! Come on! Work hard to clear the main line. I hope you become a platinum writer 😊

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It feels okay, but it's very tiring to watch. It's okay to suppress first and then promote, but the "suppression" is too delayed. It's mentioned every now and then, which makes the viewer feel irritated. In order to highlight the protagonist, a bunch of people are invited to belittle the protagonist. Even if the protagonist has begun to highlight his abilities, he can turn to the protagonist to despise him when he is doing other things.

As soon as you make some progress, you immediately increase your intensity. As soon as you gain some strength, you make a sudden breakthrough. It's boring, boring.

It's so depressing, it's a breakthrough every time

I am speechless by talking about all kinds of nonsense about the Five Directions and Five Emperors. From the beginning of training to every upgrade, all kinds of plots are dragged out, which is really tiring to watch. It was said earlier that the First Emperor relied on this to make a living, but the result was a lot of plot. Isn't this book about deducing the exercises? Why are there so many messed up things, and they come up every time at the critical moment. The Five Meridians in front of us, and the Five Emperors in here are dragging us down. It makes me sick.

Just change it to Academy Hegemony and you're done.

The author's writing is still very good, but I feel that there are some things that are not good enough. First, the author intends to write about the protagonist as a teacher, preaching to the world, but how to put it, most of what I see now is actually the manifestation of the protagonist's power alone, and there are not many elements of the teacher. Secondly, it is the plot of Aoki Shushu. In fact, I think it is There is something wrong with this place. To put it simply, what the old man needs is for the protagonist to become a member of his school honestly and not to be an obstacle to him. Normally, shouldn't he come to the village first and threaten him? Then he directly kills people, and he goes to a restricted area. It feels like his behavior is to force the protagonist to either run away or deal with him, but doesn't this contradict his motives?

The subject matter is very new and interesting to read. I have read about twenty chapters so far, and I can't help but come here to comment. There are too many messy side plots, which are a bit off topic, and I am very unhappy to read them.

As soon as there is a breakthrough, something will happen. As soon as there is a breakthrough, something will happen. You need to be more intense, right?

Why are so many online articles about the First Emperor not popular? It's because Qin Shihuang has a very high historical status. Most of the protagonists who travel through the Qing Dynasty rebelled, but those who travel through the Qin Dynasty basically assist Qin Shihuang. This is equivalent to the protagonist always having a big daddy on his head, and readers always feel aggrieved while reading.

This idea is outrageous. Other people's Spring and Autumn Period was about Taoism. As a result, the author's idea is anti-Taoism. Old coins are just waiting for others to level the road to immortality before they start... This is the first time I have seen the setting of an anti-humanity idea.

The plot with that senior sister is really cliche. There is also creative method, which is completely to change the way of the old gods and use it. This is not a creation, it should be called a reform.

The protagonist at the beginning of the game, who is not even an alchemist, can directly become a teacher in a government-run school. It is also said that Mengcun has been harmed by several alchemists before. So why don't the alchemists from Wucun Private School directly send someone to take over Mengxue? It won't be a problem to merge them after taking over, and the operation is relatively simple.

Treating readers like piglets and repeating the same thing is not a good thing for this author. Limited free model

This emotional scene is so awkwardly written😓

Although there are shortcomings in the beginning, there are still bright spots. After the 200th chapter, it starts to become boring, which is a pity.

Is the path of the ancient gods a brand new path?

I really can't help but want to complain. I know you have a hidden plot, but why do you want to kill everyone around the protagonist? Xiang Ming was manipulated by the Five Dou Taoists to first become hostile to the protagonist and then take away one of them by sublimating into the extreme realm. Meng Wu is possessed and fused by the old god and is expected to die later. Chen Cang was first forced to transform into a Five Dou Taoist by his teacher. After the protagonist solved the incident, he began to hate the protagonist and turned against him. Could it be that the young senior sister and several senior brothers in the back would also die directly because of the protagonist? Moreover, this young senior sister has not appeared for a long time. Wouldn't she be rebellious again and have to make the protagonist a heartless and lonely person?

Give me some cum

Asking for more refinement

When it reaches more than 300 pictures, hydrography begins