Mystery Revival: Ink Washes Over the World

The Four Treasures of the Study: brush, ink, paper, and inkstone. Ghost brush, ghost ink, ghost paper, ghost inkstone, and ghost paperweight. Ghost ink can pollute, suppress, and assimilate, or it can transform into butterflies or rain for ranged attacks. Alternatively, ghost ink can be concentrated and solidified into ink sticks, sharing its supernatural power with others. These ink sticks can also be used to nail ghosts, becoming coffin nails that need replenishment.

Good ideas But it's just a rambling account, it's so hard to read. A lot of the content is superfluous. You write down every single action of the protagonist. You describe every step of their life, from the moment they enter the house to when they go to bed after taking a shower. You even include psychological descriptions for every step. You're really good at padding the word count.

No, hasn't the protagonist already resolved to end the supernatural himself? Why bother with the plot then? Besides, Qin Lao is still active; it's not your place to maintain the plot. After all, if you can't keep making prophecies, maintaining the plot with only partial information isn't easy.

Stop focusing on national wars and such; mainly write about ghosts.

So which mythological figure does this character correspond to?

The protagonist's ultimate form wouldn't be the magnificent landscape painting, would it? 🙂

I feel the main character is too mediocre, but everything else is pretty good.

Well, after looking at dozens of images, the characters still don't seem very distinct. Besides the original characters, the original supporting characters are rather blurry...

Is it going down the same old jigsaw puzzle path again? Will it become an outlier later on?

Why tell him about the baby?