
Swordsman: Yue Buqun Has a Son
笑傲江湖:岳不群有子
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- 748k Words
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- Martial Arts
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- Male
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- Wuxia Fan Fiction
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- 1y ago
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- Qidian
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After watching Linghu Chong's Wedding, there are a few things I'm not happy about. 1. Deliberately describing Yue Buqun's emphasis on rules and highlighting the rude conflict with the monk who is not disciplined. If he pays so much attention to face, why does he hold a wedding so grandly? It can be called a grand ceremony. 2. A thief caused trouble at the wedding, and neither Yue Buqun nor the protagonist had the ability to catch him out? Performance has been inconsistent. 3. Being a disciple of Shejian Sect is too ridiculous, and he is not a fool like Yue Laosan. 4. How much the author hates Linghu Chong. He despises Linghu Chong throughout the whole article. Even Feng Qingyang and Dugu Nine Swords, who are related to him, were demoted to the third rate in the world. The above points are my feelings after reading the latest chapter in one go.
The protagonist is even more annoying than Linghu Chong. In the beginning, he mentally scolded Linghu Chong and Feng Qingyang. Later, everything he did was done by Linghu Chong, and he did it even more than Linghu Chong. After seeing it, I felt that what the protagonist said at the beginning and his character design were like a joke!
When reading this kind of novel, the most ridiculous thing is to talk about who is righteous and who is evil. In fact, if you compare it with today's big companies and groups, you will know that the bosses of those companies are polite on the surface and greet you when you meet. Do you think it's easy to talk? How many security guards do you have secretly? The security guard's salary is higher than yours, but he patrols every day?
It looks good, but I have a few points to make.
No one has read martial arts novels now. It's better not to let this kid Linghu Chong commit suicide. I used to read and write to ask him to commit suicide, but no one responded to you. I found a lot of martial arts novels on the Internet, but not many people could read them.
The writing is really disgusting. He looked down on Linghu Chong and then did the same thing. This part about Qu Feiyan was so disgusting.
I read a few pictures and found that there are too many personal items in the book, all of which I think. I think that you can reasonably create a second version of the parts that are not clearly stated in the original work, but you can also change the setting of the places that are clearly stated in the original work. If you like to change the setting, then don't write fan fiction, write original work.
It's not unreasonable for junk books to hit the streets
The part about thinking about crossing a cliff really made me laugh.
The protagonist infers Feng Qingyang, who Ruiping has never seen before, purely based on the content of the novel in his previous life. He also shows his temper by slashing the rocks that others sit on to vent his anger. This behavior is simply low to the core of the earth. Later, he also mentions that his father cannot beat him and there is nothing he can do to him. It is really hilarious 😄
Doing the behavior of a villain and questioning the behavior of a gentleman is worthy of being the son of Yue Buqun
Definitely don't read it. It's poisoned before it's put on the shelves. It's poisoned to death. Pig's trotters double standard plus mentally retarded, ugly as hell
Do not enter if it is poisonous
Shen Nong is already 💩, I can't stand it after reading the first few chapters 😰 Yue Buqun just taught the protagonist Zixia magic power earlier, and the protagonist also promised face to face that he would not pass it on to other people, and the protagonist would give it to Yue Lingshan within a few paragraphs Let's not talk about the importance of Zixia magic power to the Huashan sect. In ancient times, there was a saying that it was passed down from male to female. After all, if a daughter marries outside and learns it, she will not give it to her husband's son. Cheng will also give it Forget it, it can be said that the protagonist has not accepted the influence of ancient times in 17 years, but the promise you made in front of your father is just a fart, right? 😰 The key is that Lao Yue trusts you so much, it makes me sick to think about it. The author is not a childless cat who cuts off the biological father♀ In short, if you don't think these are poisonous points, just continue reading and run away.
Poisonous, highly toxic
The protagonist can't stand Linghu Chong and Feng Qingyang's behavior, but their actions reveal a small-minded, narrow-minded, mean-spirited and ungrateful character. There is a sense of self-righteousness that a time traveler looks down on the natives. It should be the author's fault. People like this are not qualified to be great villains. Be cautious and persuade them to leave.
It makes people happy to say that Shaolin Wudang is a hypocrite. The character of these people is much better than yours, Yue Buqun. Hengshan sent a group of women to hear that Huashan was in trouble and sent reinforcements. Instead, Yue Buqun looked forward and backward and sat back and watched the reinforcements being surrounded. Later, he was so wolf-hearted that he took revenge and killed two masters, Dingxian and Dingyi. Is your virtue worthy of comparison with others?
To say that Yue Buqun is a hypocrite. But if a person steps on his shoes. Just apologize. On the contrary, if you step on the shoes of the demon sect elders, you will most likely lose your life.
I don't understand why it's so popular to demote Linghu Chong and elevate Lin Pingzhi?
Forcing Dugu Nine Swords was created by the sharp sword realm. . He is the general outline of swordsmanship in the world, and his main focus is to win with no moves and only one move. No matter how awesome Dugu Qiubai is, he couldn't have mastered this thing at the age of twenty. And how do you explain the soft sword at the back? The main focus of Ruanjian is weird changes. Isn't it exactly what Dugu Qiubai used to delve into the changes of moves? If you have no move before, why use a soft sword? The epee at the back is even more obvious. In the past, I relied on exquisite moves to defeat the enemy. Later, when my internal strength became more powerful, I relied directly on the epee to defeat the enemy. The epee has no edge, no skill, and no skill. It means that the level of martial arts does not depend on the sharpness of the weapon and the change of moves, but relies on the state of one's own cultivation. This is where it evolves into no move. At the final stage of the Wooden Sword Realm, one is truly not stagnant in things, and there is no way to win without a move, which is in line with the theory of Dugu's Nine Swords.
Linghu Chong adopted him since he was a child and raised him to inherit the family business. Yue Buqun and his wife have devoted more than 20 years to it. As a result, Linghu Chong was unable to take responsibility and caused trouble. His essence was selfishness. For the sake of a stranger whom I have only met a few times and spent a few days with, I ignore the difficulties of my loved ones. . . Strangers who have been with each other for a few days really don't tell their parents when they say they shouldn't. They clearly know what their parents' difficulties and expectations are. . Both Yue Ning and his wife have never abused this person. How can they raise a white-eyed wolf? .
Watching Swordsman, I really wanted to be Linghu Chong when I was young. I had good resources and knew the bosses, and had many beautiful sisters. When I became mature, I felt that Yue Buqun was really miserable. He accepted a white-eyed wolf and had two or five boys under his command. Huashan passed on to Yue Buqun like a bird, but he was still supported. It's awesome. Don't say that Linghu Chong is not a white-eyed wolf. Without the platform of Huashan, Linghu Chong is nothing. The elder of Hengshan is just because of fighting with the devil The teacher makes friends, gets married, and the whole family dies. Linghu Chong is good, a rapist, the leader of the demon sect, etc., But nothing happened. If it weren't for the main character, he would have to lose his martial arts, cut off his hands and feet, and add physical skills.
I just laughed at the introduction. Criticizing this, not caring about the heart, and criticizing that, not caring about the heart. He deliberately targets double standards and talks about being a "gentleman". He is worthy of being the son of Yue Buqun! 😰
Zixia Divine Gong Xiantian Gong, Hunyuan Gong is more like the Quanzhen Dao Song. ,,, Both Wang Chongyang and Lin Chaoying died young. The Quanzhen Dao Song is more in line with the purpose of Quanzhen martial arts to cultivate both life and life. Zhou Botong, who practiced Quanzhen Daoge, was still able to grow new teeth and black hair in his later years when he was over 90 years old. It was a blessing in disguise. Therefore, I recommend that the protagonist practice Hunyuan Gong intensively and practice Zixia Magic Gong casually. Don't go too deep, as it will easily kill your life. In addition, I think the Sunflower Book should be the remaining chapter of the Jade Girl Heart Sutra. The Jade Girl Heart Sutra means that the early stage of the skill is very fast, but the heat should be evaporated during the practice, so you need to take off your clothes and one person will practice the yin advancement, and the other will assist the yang retreat, and the two will assist each other in practicing. Later generations probably didn't have the part where the yang retreated, so they simply figured out a way to eliminate the yang root, so they added those eight words.
Is this book finished yet? Still a eunuch?
It's not you who accepted Linghu Chong as your disciple
It really doesn't work. In fact, I accept the double standard of male protagonists. However, your book tries to improve the moral character of the male protagonist by belittling Linghu Chong and Feng Qingyang. However, in fact, the male protagonist is also a Bailianbiao. The author should also clarify the positioning of the protagonist when writing novels.