Starting from the Mortal Song and Signing to the Heavens

Shen Lei is the most popular blind dater in Beijing. Are you afraid that you won't be able to find a wife? After you have a good job and have a Beijing hukou, your children will go to school. The most important thing is to be filial and kind to the elderly, and to be responsible, knowledgeable, and good at speaking and learning. This is a hot commodity! ! There were so many aunts in this kind of agency who wanted to introduce him to someone, and others who went to check the conditions were too embarrassed to mention them.

There is a saying that if it is the logic of the real world, Lu Jie is almost a spy.

The iron trash protagonist, the kind of iron trash who would starve to death at home without the system 🙂

What era are you in? He's still god-level, super! Whenever this setting occurs, the appendix is ​​100%

I only watched Mortal Song Scroll, and I felt that the main character's mentality was too peaceful, and I didn't like the type, so I canceled it.

After reading part of it, I had a very awkward feeling. It gave people the impression that the author wanted to write a protagonist who was indifferent and clear-minded, quiet and far-reaching, but instead he wrote a male protagonist with a dark heart and a strong and independent character.

The slow progression of the plot is not pleasant. If you are a master, there is nothing wrong with this. But you are not. You have not developed in the early stage and you still want to eat shit in the later stage. You have no resources and there are only a few readers who still write like this.

Brother, if you continue to be confused and confused with Li Xiaoyue, you will continue to do so. This book is really unreadable. Saying that this is wrong while being ambiguous at the same time is not correct.

I got divorced and wrote 30 or 40 chapters. It was slow, not enough to be cool. I looked at it with my eyes and my brain: Are you awake?

What kind of Sha Nuan thing, jibbering, jabbering, writing for a long time without explaining anything clearly, talking about divorce, ordering takeout and drinking Coke in every chapter, and not doing anything serious.

If the heroine was Li Xiaoyue, I wouldn't be able to watch it. The whole family is separated even when they eat together.

When will this flow of gold end? It's so procrastinating, so pretentious, and so upright.

I can't bear to keep pulling on Li Xiaoyue! Either decide on the heroine early, or talk less about women! And time passes so slowly in the article

I have become a licker. Is it necessary? The contrast between the previous and later articles is so huge. Speechless. Removed from shelves

First of all, the author's writing style is pretty good among online articles, and this is also the most important aspect that attracts me. Writing style does not mean how many gorgeous words you use or how many mysterious buttons you make, but the ability to tell stories in the most plain language, just like the classmates on the upper bunk of the dormitory showing off their exaggerated experiences in picking up girls, like the old man on the street recalling the vicissitudes of the past and telling the story to make the listener feel comfortable. The author did a pretty good job in this regard, at least he didn't keep me reading until now. The second is the character design. I feel like the author has struggled with the character of the protagonist. I don't know if I'm right. At first, the author wanted to create the image of a behind-the-scenes boss and hermit who had gone through hardships and returned to his fields to laugh at the ups and downs. Later, he gradually let the boss return to the world, and there were also some tangled plots. Maybe it was to better fit the readers' thinking. In fact, think about it with your toes, if you and I get such an opportunity, our power, status, beauty and beauty are like floating clouds, and we have both immortality and extraordinary abilities, and we don't care what the dust does. This is just like we are playing a stand-alone game that can be deleted at any time. Do you care whether the character you control eating garlic will have a bad impression on the opposite NPC or whether eating garlic will increase the attack by 100? Of course, this metaphor is inappropriate. What I mainly want to say is that people who have this kind of opportunity are more eager to obtain a kind of emotional value just like playing games. I give 2 billion to the person who cares about me so that she can obtain satisfaction and joy, and I obtain positive emotional value from your satisfaction and joy. This is enough. You love me, I give you feedback, you get satisfaction, and I get positive feedback from your satisfaction. Isn't that the purpose of the game? So, the author's initial idea was correct. Of course, I don't know if I can get feedback from other readers on subscriptions, haha. The last thing is the plot. It feels like the author has deleted or changed the outline, or there is no outline at all. I think it's better to write according to your established ideas. It's impossible to satisfy the taste of all readers. Most people still read silently. The writing is decent, the characters are unique, and the plot is not boring. It is a good book, and there will always be people who like it. Personally, I will continue to subscribe for now, the writing is good, keep it up!

Are there really people who are still lying flat on the system? I'm talking about the kind that makes life better, not the same as before without the system.

It can only be said that before the facial mask patent came out, the writing was in line with the astronomical lines of film and television, and it had a high-quality appearance. After that, people didn't have much desire to read it. See you in the next book.

I haven't watched this TV series very much, so I know that the part between Wang Xiao and Cherry is okay, and then the song they sang is the annoying song that the couple sang at the barbecue stall when they lost their jobs. Other than that, I only watched this TV series and didn't watch anything else.

Everything else is okay, except that the protagonist and Li Xiaoyue feel inexplicably disconnected from each other.

Looking at Shen Lei and Xie Meilan in Mortal Song, all I saw was that the screenwriter was using the life of a 30-year-old North drifter couple to fit into his setting. The problem is that you have to figure out what you are setting? A civil servant in a ministry who graduated from Peking University, and a financial practitioner who graduated in 1985 and worked in a financial company for ten years. The former can get to the right position by working through seniority, while the latter has an annual salary of at least 500,000 to 600,000 yuan. So this TV series is too awkward to watch.

After watching the first world, I originally thought that the protagonist and Li Xiaoyue would have a beautiful love. After getting married, the author insisted on opening a harem for the protagonist, which was quite disgusting. In the face of a world of gold-worshiping girls with erroneous views, having a harem is easy. But in the face of pure love, having a harem is disgusting.

Why do novels like this always like to travel back in time and become the original characters?

It's a bit sudden, wish you well! Let's talk about it when I open a new book!

The plot design is a bit awkward, but everything else is fine

Too many modern people take money too seriously, and power is king.

To be honest, because it is difficult to coax, this chapter is fully booked and the monthly tickets are given. I hope the author can update more recent popular dramas.

I am so hung up that I have no desire to continue reading.

It's okay, I can keep watching. It hangs a bit frequently, and it has not been developed much. It feels a bit cumbersome. It would be nice to make it simple and clear. In another world, just change your name. It's always Su Yi's. It looks so awkward.

Talent time travel and let others loose their dogs

The world you chose is really hard to describe. Maybe I can't keep up with the times? Is the recent world really very beautiful? I haven't paid much attention to it. Do you have any brothers who have watched it? Is it worth replenishing it?