The Witcher: Liver Experience Begins with Biomodification

I really don't understand why it is always emphasized that the protagonist is a fool.

"The path of a wizard is like this. From the moment he begins to embark on the extraordinary journey, he is destined to break away from everything in the secular world. Sooner or later, his parents, brothers, and all relatives will leave him one by one." I don't understand. I wonder if the author still remembers this passage he wrote before. Since the protagonist wants to leave the secular world, he did not even choose to intervene in the death of his parents, what is he doing now? Inexplicably, I started to be nice to my niece. I thought that the previous conversation with my niece was just a small episode, but I didn't expect it to be a foreshadowing. It was helping to escape from the family, and it was helping to realize the dream. Next, it was time to help her become a wizard? The dangerous and important thousand-year bloody battle that was previously foreshadowed turned out to be a sideshow, and now I don't know which plot line it is involved in. I originally came here to read wizard novels about transforming creatures, but it ended up feeling like I was trying to sell someone else's meat. Now that the protagonist has moved to the time realm, that's fine. It's acceptable. But the arrangement of your plot is really difficult to evaluate, but since you want to write a plot about your niece, please write Better, at least write some good points. Now I can only see that this niece is very idealistic and has no matching will. She longed to become a knight, so she should know that becoming a knight is difficult, and it is even harder as a girl. As a result, she started crying when faced with a ridicule, and immediately changed her face with the help of the protagonist's deus ex machina. What is the difference between her and the SB who mocked her before? To put it mildly, she is independent. "To put it harshly, it's just a suicide attempt. It's because I've made enough arrangements. If it were anyone else who was so messy, I don't know what would happen." From this sentence, we can see that this niece is very reckless. She has no ideals and no arrangements and plans. She relies on the protagonist to arrange in advance. "Lilith was almost crying under the grid mask. She had never suffered such great humiliation. Tears were rolling in her eyes." There is also this paragraph, the co-authoring is really like flowers in a greenhouse. The feeling this niece gives me in summary is that she is naive, idealistic, reckless, and ignorant. I have not seen any advantages for the time being. Originally, she said that she wanted to be a female knight, which was considered ambitious. However, based on the current plot, she feels very naive, giving people the impression that she is playing a knight game for a noble lady. I generally don't like to write long reviews about novels. If I'm not satisfied, I'll just delete it. However, I basically followed this book from beginning to end. I still hope it can be better, so I'll say a little more. I hope that since the author wants to write about this niece, he can write some fragments that reflect her strengths, instead of letting the protagonist just be a nanny.

It can be seen that the author wants to write a fantasy magical world similar to Harry Potter style. It can be seen from the design and item performance of some magic plants. It also incorporates the characteristics of traditional wizarding literature, but the fusion effect is very average. Harry Potter is a children's book with a style of relaxed adventure mixed with some humorous narratives, while Qidian's wizarding novels are in a magical reality style, where power is supreme and wizards pursue the truth. (1) Suggestion: The protagonist and companions written by the author are obviously innocent and kind-hearted, and even stupid. Considering their age, I can understand it, but 80% of the public readers cannot accept it, so I suggest improvements. (2) Suggestion: There are too many descriptions of the appearance of characters unrelated to the plot. It is best to delete them all. The descriptions of landscapes and buildings are okay, but there are still too many. It is recommended to delete 50%. (3) Suggestion: The tradition of Qidian wizarding literature has a cruel core. While you emphasize the sophistication of human nature, you also imply that this perception is wrong, but 99% of the people around you show this trait. The sense of contradiction is too strong, and the reading performance is reduced by 50%. (4) Suggestions: The plot arrangement is unreasonable. The protagonist's status as a serf is despised by the apprentices. With the characteristics of honesty and resignation, it is actually okay, at least on the qualified line. But in wizard novels, what readers want to see is a wise and calm protagonist, and the plot starts with the soul crystal, temporarily breaking through the halo, and paying for one's own greed. You should use magic or wisdom to solve problems and show a sense of control! It would be more reasonable to arrange the conflict between the fire dragon and the dark wizard later, after all, the latter time is a real life and death crisis. (5) Suggestion: The manor dinner was like a poor-quality moldy cake. Once again, human accidents and private goods made by choice over effort were mentioned. This concept is fundamentally inconsistent with the tone of wizarding literature. In addition, for this traitor enemy, the character you gave him is crazy and extreme. If he dares to kill people in the white wizard's territory, it would be more reasonable for him to attack and kill you directly. (6) Suggestion: The concept of pure blood is inconsistent with the starting point wizard novel. Wizards pursue individuality and truth, and pursue equal exchange. The second-generation character design you applied is like the brainless second-generation in Xiaobai's fantasy novel, which leads to poor reading experience. (7) Suggestion: You actually have a more relaxed writing style, and those paragraphs look more comfortable and smooth. You should focus on learning and research, and design more interesting magical plants and creatures. Your theme is biological modification, so you should focus on this aspect. One fire dragon is far from enough, and the latest knowledge involving the three systems is too complicated, so the establishment should be streamlined. Write down the improvements you get every time you do daily experiments. In the early stage, you will use magic pets as the main means of combat, and in the middle and later stages, you will carry out human body transformation. (8) Suggestions: This is a small problem. For example, the name of the wizard faction can be more in line with the background. The refining system is too abstract and is not as good as the blood system, enhancement system, life system, etc. In terms of spells, you can add unique spells of the biological modification school, such as biological distortion, flesh and blood splitting, eyeball guard... And so on. The content continues to be enriched and expanded. There is a common problem in fantasy backgrounds where people's names are difficult to remember. Plot characters can be designed to have more physical characteristics, give them nicknames, or have some impressive characteristics, which can be praised or criticized. (9) Suggestion: If the plot involving characters is a piece of shit, you can write a warm little story about a magic pet to expand the story line, which is more suitable for your writing style. Either the warmth and relaxation can be carried out to the end, or the cruelty and darkness can be carried out to the end. You are caught in the middle, which is really a contradiction. Finally, rewrite it, design the outline carefully, and hopefully it will be a good one.

Poison is not an ordinary poison. It is a biological modification that was promised, and the result is that the pure wizard upgrades the article. The character set up at the beginning is so stupid. Doesn't the author know that many readers are tired of being stupid? The introduction also said that the protagonist was prudent and prudent, but in the end he decisively left the safety circle to give away a gem. I thought the protagonist had some backup plan to escape, but it turned out that he suddenly awakened when he was about to die. Is this what you call prudent and prudent?

The title of this book starts with biomodification. I came to read this book because of the biomodification point. However, except for adding a pair of bat wings to the lizard when I was not an apprentice at the beginning, which is the so-called biomodification, the so-called biomodification is no longer mentioned later, and it becomes an ordinary wizard novel. I really don't understand it. The idea of ​​biomodification is obviously good, why not think of some creative ideas for biomodification? I guess it was the studio asking again. I originally had high expectations for this book, but then the more I read, the less interesting it became. It's a pity.

This kind of bio-modification wizard should transform himself and add all kinds of weird and weird things to his body to make it interesting. The cool thing is that the things he combines together are unexpectedly strange and powerful. This is interesting. You have to have a big imagination, the author.

Poisonous, that's all I can say. After reading the introduction, I thought it was a wizard transforming the legion to conquer the world, but I didn't expect it to be a mess. The protagonist learned a bunch of things and all kinds of full-level knowledge, and then practiced like shit and made a knight career plan. The so-called transformation did not show any nerves from the beginning to the end.

I thought I had found a good novel, but it turned out to be a good one. Then Aiwei popped up, forcing the protagonist to run around, wasting time and money, bye bye.

The setting that wizard apprentices can quickly recover their spiritual power by practicing the Knight Breathing Technique is so nonsense. Are other wizard apprentices and official wizards stupid? For such a simple thing, even the so-called noble apprentices have never practiced the Knight's Breathing Technique before? You must know that the protagonist's Knight Breathing Technique itself was obtained from a wizard apprentice... This setting is too poisonous, I will leave first

It doesn't matter that the original owner was called a fool by his friends. Why is it that the protagonist is still called a fool after traveling through time? After passing the test, he is still called a fool. Is he sick? Would you like the author to let you go? I call you a little fool every day, whether it is with good intentions or ill intentions. Doesn't your IQ increase after traveling through time? Is the original owner a fool? Is the protagonist still a fool?

He is always fucking learning and getting stronger, but whenever he encounters an enemy, he always lets him go or cannot defeat him. He never solves the enemy neatly and neatly. He is always on the weak side. No matter how strong he becomes, there is always someone stronger than him. Others want to kill him, but he feels that he can negotiate amicably with others and live together. Others want to kill him, but he feels that there is still a need for both parties to coexist. When someone wants to kill him, he suddenly becomes stronger and fights back, then he chokes a big fart, and then the enemy runs away, and the enemy runs away again, it's always like this. His enemy is too happy because he is a pacifist. The purpose of getting stronger all the time is for peace. No matter how others hurt him. He can't protect anything. Nothing can be done. Why don't such people die? Why does he exist?

The plug-ins of the immortal version, the world background of the dark wizard, the skill description of the martial arts system, the learning environment of Hogwarts, plus the third-rate protagonist, combine to create this book. First, the cheat version of the immortal version refers to the protagonist's golden finger, which is the proficiency panel. It began to appear in the immortal novels, and is now mostly used in Gou Daoliu's immortal novels. Second, the background of the world of dark wizards. The wizard college where the protagonist is located, including the region, is in line with the description of dark wizards such as the Wizarding Era. The entire environment and world background are written according to the world background of the Wizarding Era. In fact, they are wizards who pursue equal trade in knowledge. Third, the improvement of skills within the martial arts system. At least in the wizarding world that I know, Li's wizards are basically like mad scientists. Knowledge is something you know or don't know. Just like chemistry, if you know how to make gunpowder, then you can make it, or the production fails. Do you know that there are levels of gunpowder? Are they divided into beginner, proficient and proficient? This is a description of the proficiency panel in the martial arts system. Fourth, the learning environment of Hogwarts. The protagonist is in the college where the classmates are friendly. They have two or three friends and learn knowledge together, just like the college learning atmosphere in Hogwarts. Fifth, the third-rate protagonist, who was formerly a serf, was betrayed and died by the person he trusted most. The protagonist was able to travel through time, but in the end he still did not learn his lesson. He was a second- and third-level friend, and showed himself as he was told. He trusted others too much and had no sense of crisis. He was full of academic style. However, in fact, he was a dark wizard with a background environment setting, just like a sheep mixed into a group of wolves. Then the sheep became cold. The protagonist traveled through time and became a cow with no power. In fact, mentally, he was a buffalo waiting to be slaughtered. Finally, every aspect is very good, and together they are like a book with four different features

Damn it, I read it, and it took me more than ten chapters to remember to look at the label of this book 🤔. I immediately burst into tears. It turned out that I was pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. No wonder it made me feel chest tight, short of breath, and dizzy after reading more than ten chapters. Can't the starting point really be a filtering function to click out the tags you don't like to see?

A big, knowledgeable man who pretends to be a sword-wielding knight. The introduction is all lies. A family of wizards fights. The protagonist is in trouble for a woman. It's so low. Even someone kills him at the beginning of the time travel. The plot is cliche. A wizard novel is written as a pretentious college novel.

This level is so high. Alas, your enemy was practicing at the same time as you. It turned out that your enemy became a high apprentice early in the morning. What happened? You told people that thirty years are in the east of Hedong and thirty years are in Hexi. Well, after three years, you were finally promoted to a middle apprentice. It's amazing👍

It's okay to scratch your head and hair all the time. You can create a character as the protagonist, but the protagonist obviously has the proficiency golden finger, but he is not meticulous enough. The proficiency is a golden finger that can be certified forever. He is not strict in developing in the early stage, but he actually takes risks for the soul crystal, and let that person A fire dragon lizard breaks through at the last moment. This is a wizard novel, not a fantasy novel, and it will be the same after that. You won't be wary at all when you meet people 😥😥😥 So it's difficult, the protagonist's character does not match Goldfinger's.

Don't just modify ordinary animals into existing creatures, be a little innovative

Every two or three paragraphs emphasize that the protagonist is an honest serf and too mentally retarded.

The poison was withdrawn before payment was made. The protagonist kept emphasizing his identity as a serf. The protagonist got first place in the test. He also kept saying that the protagonist was a serf and very stupid from the perspective of others. The most outrageous thing is that the protagonist's entire process of solving the dark wizard's apprentice was known to several formal wizards, and they all thought that the protagonist performed very well. Then, because the protagonist was from a commoner family (non-wizard family), the attitude of these formal wizards changed. If the author had his own settings, such as the talent gap, and later said that the protagonist was born as a serf and now performs well because he is interested in wizard knowledge and works hard, he will definitely fall into depravity later (it is stated in the original text). This is really funny.

Either the author's thinking logic is different from that of ordinary people and he is not a normal human being, or the AI ​​wrote it and then posted it with some random polishing, or posted it without any polishing at all.

{"NickName":"Book Friends 20240813100550057","UserId":453108994} Good luck to the author. I think the writing is really good. I started at nine o'clock last night. Until now, I really like this book. Come on, update it. I want to see the protagonist go back and kill those pure-blooded people and find Ivy as an absolute strong man. Come on 😍😍

What was written? Chapter 24 will be released after it is released. Where is your dragon? Isn't it very well written? Just let it go. What are you doing? Don't say anything. For the sake of psychological progress, if you are sure, why are you writing about such difficulties and dangers

I have never quite understood which successful novel is the source of this kind of vomiting after the first murder and fear when fighting monsters for the first time. Can anyone give me some advice? Even if he can't be like Su Xiao who can kill decisively and risk his life like Su Xiao, he should still have a stronger heart than the readers who read the book, right? After all, I have been in a different world for many years, and the person who traveled through time is still an office worker. It can't be all smooth sailing in the workplace, right? Judging from the early performance of this protagonist, he has no charm at all, and he can only be a loser in the workplace. Every unit is involved in factional struggles. You have to know how to read the atmosphere and intrigue, right? To be honest, once all readers have the mentality of having sex with me, or fighting crickets in a jar, I feel that this book will not go far.

I said it looks good. Why haven't I put it on the bookshelf several times? I thought it was a new book this time. After reading a few, I found that I think I have read it. The protagonist is like a fool. He is not pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. Even if you want to write a story about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, you have to have some narration and other explanations. There is nothing, just a pure fool. That's it. If you are dissatisfied, I recommend everyone to read it. I will comment in two words, fool.

What kind of bullshit protagonist is this? Deliberately portraying the protagonist as a fool? What's wrong

Excellent intelligence and rich social experience can produce such excellent works. The people who understand this book are extraordinary. They must all have the same excellent intelligence and rich social experience as the author.

Stupid plot. The chapters that haven't been paid for are just a bunch of stupid plots. I really admire him for being able to get out of the paid period.

Idiot protagonist who often pulls his hair and doesn't know what he is doing

Even if you don't know how to write a book at the beginning, you can write according to other people's routines. If you write enough, someone will read it.

The first one is a vine-based witchcraft, and the second part turns into a dark chain.