As a Pirate, I Join the Straw Hats as a Celestial Dragon.

It's a complete nonsense. The Celestial Dragons can be written as either blond or low-blooded, but they are also talented. The hair color of the Shampoo family and Don Quixote who saved Shirahoshi was eaten by you, right?

There are a lot of poisonous points in the first three chapters. First, hair color is used to determine the purity of blood, and then the power given by the system is mixed. Does the protagonist introduce his name by his Japanese name? I wonder if the world of One Piece doesn't need to have a Japanese name to suit the era, right?

It's both the Hokage and the Shinigami... A routine that is so old that I don't even want to see it.

It's very well written, don't write it next time. It's poisonous at the beginning, I can't stand it

Betray your own class at the beginning? Heretics are the ones who deserve to be damned. The Celestial Dragons won't let you live past one episode. You're politically correct. The name of this book is really illiterate. Doflamingo's family must die if you refer to it.

The world has suddenly changed since Paradise Island. What are you writing about?

But what I can't understand is the chaotic power system, and I have no desire to see it. The first three chapters have not passed, and the timing of joining is also very strange.

I can't understand your book from the beginning. Do you really think it's reasonable for the Celestial Dragons to join the Straw Hats? Even if your moral bottom line is very high, all you have to do is change a little bit in Mariejoia. Or you can become a pirate. You only have these two choices. No. People can tolerate you, but no one can tolerate you as a Celestial Dragon. You have betrayed the World Government, and the World Government cannot tolerate you. Doflamingo has a secret and he has to be Kaido's dog. What do you have? If you really have it but don't have the strength to keep it, then you have to die.

The introduction is simply changed to say that as a noble, I just have to beg for food, and I am still a nanny.

This question is about getting rid of the poison. How can a Celestial Dragon (except Shanks) live a life of debauchery, drinking ponds, and meat forests? To be a pirate? ? Okay, even if you want to be a pirate and go to Straw Hat... That's crazy... So the Celestial Dragons become pirates + drink with the ship ≈ persuade them to quit

There's nothing else to say, it's fine as a hobby. Do you feel the pain of writing novels now? The story you imagined may be wonderful, but when you narrate it into words, you will find that there are various problems. Writing really requires talent and training, otherwise it will be difficult for poor words to carry passionate emotions, and it will not be able to immerse readers in your fantasy world.

Seeing it is the same as not seeing it. Basically nothing has changed.

A 550,000-word pirate fanfic doesn't even have 1,000 collections? Then write an egg! ! 300,000 Yuan on the shelves just for full attendance?

This title feels like my father Zhang Erhe

With the boat flow, or with the Straw Hats...

The last punctuation mark is not written. Can you imagine how perfunctory the author's writing attitude is?

I was confused when I saw the plot after being slapped by a bear. I really didn't understand what it was about.

You are already a Celestial Dragon, and you don't know how to survive?

Cheers, author, I hope the next one will be better

Now it's updated to 6. One Piece fan didn't expect to run into Douluo now.

It's terrible to go to other worlds. It feels like there are too few scenes in the Pirate World!

Hello everyone, this is Cai Cai. To be honest, Cai Cai has read a lot of One Piece fanfics, but she is not very satisfied with them, so she wants to write her own. It cannot satisfy everyone, but those who like it can read it. If you don't like it or feel that you have stepped on something wrong, just go back and find what you are used to reading. No need to leave me a comment Readers' opinions, Cai Cai will read it, if there is any If something is wrong, you are welcome to correct me. Of course, if it is the setting of the protagonist, etc., Cai Cai cannot change it. Readers can just return it. This book is a work that Cai Cai insists on writing. It is not enough for outsiders. I just hope for more encouragement. The author has a glass heart and cannot bear blows. In order for Cai Cai to continue to create, some unreasonable negative reviews will be deleted by Cai Cai. No wonder!