Mystery: the Goblin with the Lamp

The setting looks so uncomfortable, I feel like the author didn't read the information carefully. The Goblin is the Painter Path and the Gate Path is the adjacent sequence (High Dimensional Overlooker). Why is it that the Night Watchman and the Secret Peeper (I don't know where the name comes from and I'm thinking too much about the way to the night) go to the Secret Wilderness (Wildness of Knowledge).       ，               ，，8 Why did Audrey agree to the protagonist being present when she was interviewed to join the Psychological Alchemy Society? Why is there Alicia in the end! ! ! Author, are you a top skewer? Was it the maid or Audrey who introduced him to his father personally? Was it because he was afraid that Earl Hall wouldn't see any suspense?          ，          ，

There are too many dialogues in the whole text. It can be seen that the author wants to use dialogue to express the emotions of the characters, but it is too long and messy. It is better to intersperse details and dialogue. The daily writing is good, and it feels okay if it is refreshing. I also like Ellie, but is the person simulated by the authority really him? Just friends, the heroine is not as good as Xiao Huang or Audrey. Finally, come on the author.

I thought it was quite interesting, and I also liked the interaction with Miss Justice, but I'm sorry, I really don't like to see women's clothing. I don't say I hate it or hate it. It's not that exaggerated, but I definitely resist it. I'm not the audience for this.

I don't know why, but I hate that Alicia so much. My body temperature rises just by looking at it. I'd better reduce the number of conversations 🥵

Goblins are the sequence of high-dimensional overlookers 🙂

Why are there so many dialogues? What the hell is a night watchman showing up? Is the protagonist schizophrenic? Everyone's opinion of women's clothing is normal, but you have normalized it, and it can be said to be fun only once. There is nothing to say about women's clothing every day, and you can't feel the B character at all later, and the protagonist suddenly no longer looks handsome. Moreover, the image of Audrey was changed to a fun-loving person who is a little carried away and does not know what is good or bad. Isn't it the lovely Miss Diamond that everyone likes. If you change it like this, the original author of "The Circle of Fate" will be scolded if it affects their image. You've changed to something unpleasant again. When the protagonist arrived in Tingen, his personality suddenly shone brightly again, and he wanted to protect mankind. What happened to md suddenly happened like this, and nothing changed, and after the change, the protagonist didn't look for anything, and ended up quarreling with the possible sage instead of Emilia. It's a long conversation, am I watching your protagonist chatting with Emilia? Am I part of the author's play?

The writing gets worse and worse, talking to the system, transsexual women's clothing, all meaningless plots, magic snakes

It doesn't matter if I change my body and play tricks, but if I keep changing my body to play ambiguous and flirtatious roles, I no longer feel sick but disgusted.

The only sex change is too toxic, and crotch literature is not compatible with mystery.

I like it so much and suggest writing bbb fanfics

It was fine at first, and women's clothing was acceptable. But when the system transformed into Alicia, it was very messy, and it was still writing destiny.

It's so annoying. You don't really think it's interesting to join a long conversation, do you?

What is this about? It only took a few pictures and it went viral. Suddenly, it started talking to humans and machines in several pictures.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I feel like Pigfoot is like a fool!

I think the beginning is okay, but I can't stand the scene where I dress up as a woman, and the setting of Audrey falling in love with the protagonist is also very unfamiliar, and I can't stand it.

I feel that the character after disguising as a woman is a bit inappropriate for this book. It is too warm and has no strong feeling. The God of Fun is just like that and does not fit the image of God. The world view and background are colder and more rational. It attracted me in the first few chapters. After disguising as a woman, I feel that it has plummeted. It is a big psychological gap for me. I wonder if I can change it and change to a separate female form. It feels numb now. It's a pity. Goodbye.

Changing into a single person, changing into a couple, or changing into a married woman is all acceptable But... Large segments of meaningless dialogue and inner thoughts are very uncomfortable Can you find something for the protagonist to do? Don't stick with Audrey and then stick with Mary at the same time and then the two pieces are gone

The author's sexual quirks and attributes are 100% abnormal and definitely belong to Shou!

What the hell is that fairy lady? How come she has the characteristics of a hypnotist? The writing is a bit confusing.

Like a big colander. . . Just follow the low-sequence secret knowledge

Author, I don't know if you will see it, but I still want to ask, after you finish writing it and send it out, will you click on the starting point and read it yourself as a reader?

All kinds of creativity can be a double-edged sword, with both advantages and disadvantages.