Three Kingdoms: Investing in Liu Xuande, the Greatest Achiever of All

The protagonist wakes up after transmigrating and immediately asks where his soda and phone are. He frequently uses the word "damn" in his speech, which perfectly fits the stereotype of a keyboard warrior.

Having read up to chapter 80, I have to say the protagonist is a complete waste. He knows everything about Liu Bei's rise to power, but for some reason, it's like reading a vernacular version of Romance of the Three Kingdoms. Why don't you just add a main character, Liu Feng, and incidentally bring in Liu Bei? Why don't I just read Romance of the Three Kingdoms? It's somewhat interesting, but not much.

Um, why does he look like a good-for-nothing? Didn't he learn archery from a young age? How come he misses every single shot? Also, what about his younger siblings?

Reading aloud is crucial; it's key to getting recommended and affects the book's success and future. Historical fiction is very popular now, and my previous book had some shortcomings for various reasons. You should be able to see the effort I put into this one. 😢

The story was already slow-paced, and subscribing so early made it less appealing. There were no famous generals or civil officials, and they were fixated on a soldier's perspective. The main problem was the rapid release; once it was officially released, it should at least have a general's perspective.

The first three chapters are pretty awful... This whole "adopting a first teacher" thing is like a joke. A peasant family comes along and immediately demands the books the teacher reads, that the student can recognize them, and even read a few lines, and then the teacher happily accepts the student... It's insane... On the one hand, how did you learn to read if you've never been to school?

Isn't your siege strategy a bit too hasty? You just surround the city and do nothing, and Fanyang falls in ten days? No, why?

Investing in Liu Bei is fine, but the main character seems really useless. Knowing that in chaotic times, one is neither good at martial arts nor at literature, and thus neither develops power nor accumulates wealth for fear of being targeted, the question arises: Why did you travel back in time so early? Trying to reach the word count?

The main problem is the lack of pacing. If your writing style is poor, you try to compensate with shortcuts; otherwise, you can't adjust the pacing, and the writing issues will become more apparent.

Eighty chapters already, what's the protagonist's role? Isn't this just the beginning of Romance of the Three Kingdoms?