Start with the Advent of Fantasy

That's the beginning. Meaningless

I had a bad feeling when I saw him practicing boxing in the park, and he was discovered.

The routines of ancient online novels are completely unlike those of authors who have written three million words of fine novels. At the beginning of Chapter 27, it was said that there are extraordinary beings to hide in reality, and then he went crazy and ran to the park to practice boxing. Suddenly everyone the protagonist knew was an extraordinary person. I also happened to "encounter" an old grandfather with an unusual identity.

The plot after going to the park in the main world is vulgar and bloody.

The author is not suitable for writing about the fictional real world. The writing is so bad that it is too late to stop now. The fictional reality can only be written about the early stage of recovery and the protagonist must be the first group of people to discover the recovery. It is too difficult to write about the middle and late stages. Delete the previous chapters and concentrate on writing the dungeon, and don't touch the main world.

The plot after the park is no different than a piece of shit. When I entered the comment section, I found that I was not the only one who felt this way. There is such a big gap between the previous and the previous books that it is impossible to tell that they are the same book.

From my point of view, the reason why the League of Travelers is good-looking is because of the whimsical ideas of power in those dungeon worlds and the different attitudes of time-travelers towards the plot. Another point is that the speed of world switching always brings a sense of freshness to readers. There are far fewer readers today than in previous years who have the patience to watch you "describe an imaginary, extraordinary world hidden in the ordinary world bit by bit." I understand that a good plot needs to be foreshadowed, or you want to write a different story, but this is too difficult, and it will either fail or be cliché, taking the dross and discarding the essence. I don't know about others, but if this book really takes this route, it will be difficult to retain my love for this book.

After contacting the official, the plot was just a mess, both witty and frustrating.

First, the author can delete the bad reviews. If I hadn't been on duty today, it would have been really boring. I wouldn't have read the novels that usually have so many bad reviews, but I actually felt pretty good after reading them. Second, it is enough for Infinite Streaming to focus on Infinite Streaming. In the real world, you just pretend to be cool occasionally. Once you write about the real world, it is easy to fall into clichés. Third, the way the copy is embedded into the story background and extra world is very good, and it is recommended to keep it in the future.

I haven't published a new book in so long. I thought you ran away.

All I can say is that it's not as good as the previous novel.

Just come over and take a look in two or three days. It's like opening a new book. Everyone thought you ran away 😰

🙂🙂 Boss, stop writing, it's over, write the sequel after the first one

I can't honestly write infinitely, it's so bad, I'm convinced

You should write less about the main world, it's far behind compared to the dungeon.

If I had come across this novel ten years ago, I would have said it had platinum status, but now it is 2024 and all I can say is that I am looking forward to your next book.

When I saw the protagonist, I subconsciously thought it was Lin Zhongtian's trumpet 🙂

No news? Is the author planning to give up writing the book?

You are one of the few that I have been reading continuously, and I am still looking forward to the follow-up plot.

Fortunately, I haven't subscribed. Now if a new book is released and has not been updated for more than a month, I won't subscribe.

I still like this invincible protagonist

The previous book ranked among the top 10 in the world that was completed this year. Come on, the author is optimistic about you and will update soon.

The front was okay, but it was a pity that Fan Xian felt too licky. Who is the protagonist? Fan Xian's Wu Zhu~~~~

Let's talk about it, I'll wait for you to open a new book.

This book may not have been well thought out. I think a similar writing style and setting like The League of Travelers is very good. It has its own understanding of the original plot and clever dramatic conflicts, and it also has the refreshing feeling of Invincible. The key is that it is very down-to-earth, and the designed system and plot are not complicated. These are just some of my suggestions. After all, every author has what he is good at and what he is not good at. Using strengths and avoiding weaknesses is definitely the best solution.

After reading "The Alliance" from a certain letter, I came to Qidian to catch up on the new book, but you cut it 😥

The classics are discontinued, and I can't continue writing Harry Potter. In fact, we should just end the world. Just write about cheating in the next world. Must add Harry Potter.

Where does this book cut the next new book?

Cut? ? ? ? What about the new book? ? ?

Author: I am also an old fan. Do you want to stay longer or give up? Please come out and say something 😡