Build the Traveler Alliance from Scratch

First, a foreign time traveler tells a time traveler that one of the strongest people in the main world of their world is a time traveler, and they already know that there are all the heavens and worlds, and they have to abide by the rule of seven days before joining the alliance. I have already told you this before. Is it necessary to write another piece of nonsense literature? Second, Sun Wukong in the main world killed most of the gods and Buddhas in heaven, and he was the one who killed the original Ziwei Emperor. As a result, there was a temple in the mortal world that wanted to steal the cassocks and set fire to it. Sun Wukong had to go to the previous Ziwei Emperor to borrow the treasure. Brother, this is setting off ordinary fire, not Samadhi True Fire, and Sun Wukong is so awesome that he is not necessarily afraid of Samadhi True Fire. What you wrote about borrowing treasures because of ordinary fire is really funny. There is no logic at all. I give up.

To be honest, it is quite understandable to fill a lot of original plots. Although it is the so-called unlimited flow taboo, it is like this after the inspiration is exhausted. It can be seen that the author's outline is incomplete and intermittent, and the ending has not been fully thought out. Maybe the author still has some good plots in mind, but hasn't written them yet, so it's overly plotted like this. Moreover, your book is an infinite stream plus an invincible stream. The invincible stream is the most difficult to write for this reason. There are no enemies and no crisis, which directly leads to no main line. The protagonist's purpose is just to seek enlightenment in a playful way, but the simple pursuit of enlightenment without anyone chasing him behind is too protracted, and the overall plot is bland. The title of your book is Building the Alliance of Travelers. Should there be occasional events to prompt the protagonist to speed up the pace of establishment and change the alliance system? And although the protagonist is invincible, there are some incidents that cannot be solved with great strength. For example, if there is a dispute or even a war between alliance members, but both sides are justified, you cannot suppress it ironically. To resolve the dispute, you can write a long paragraph, which can make the systems of various worlds collide and promote changes in the system. However, this tests logic and writing skills. After all, the collision of different worldviews on a large scale. The main purpose of the protagonist now is only to seek Tao, and there is no purpose such as revenge or avoiding pursuit in traditional novels. Is it possible to make the theme of the book "building an alliance" closely related to the protagonist's "path to seek Tao"? For example, the larger the alliance, the higher the cultivation level of the protagonist. Another example is to find some villains who are not as good as the protagonist, but can be on par with the protagonist in terms of power. After all, your protagonist is now the newborn Creator and Dimension Demon. The setting of newborn has been emphasized many times, and it seems to be very critical. I have said before that Iluvi is not as good as God, so that's it It doesn't destroy the overall feeling of the invincible flow, and it also creates a sense of crisis Of course, creating villains in the invincible flow is just a bad idea. In the end, it would be better to focus on group portraits. The protagonist's role must be reduced. Otherwise, if the protagonist's actions are limited, it will only be a Suwon plot. If there is no restriction on the actions, it will directly become a mechanical god. Infinite streaming traffic has begun to decline and the readership has become fixed. Today, it is really cool to find new ideas in this way, but I feel that there is not a complete enough idea to support the ideas. I still hope to improve the outline and add creativity to the story, rather than forcing the story to the creativity.

You can skip and read a lot. The main problem is that the assessment of time-travelers is too subjective. There is no objective evaluation system at all. Moreover, you write those alliance members as bullies. If you don't believe me, think about it carefully. If I say you can do it, you can do it. If you don't, you will be destroyed.

I haven't watched it since I got to Marvel, so if you don't believe it, please watch the follow-up. This is like a book about Uncle Nine that had to be inserted into My Date with a Zombie. It is as powerful as Dr. Chen's imagination but it still collapsed in Marvel.

If you want to be a god, then you can be a god, you can be behind the scenes, you can be a mortal, you can introduce so many different abilities, and in the end, you can experience mortal life and block your own abilities to tease these characters. Then all the nonsense you said in front of you is just water, and you still write about the Alliance of Travelers. Does it have anything to do with it? The writing style is patchwork, the gods are not like gods, the behind-the-scenes is not like behind-the-scenes, the mortals are not like mortals, they are pretentious and cannot write well, it is better to just stay in the village. The most annoying thing is that these abbreviations have nothing to do with the content of the book, and it is a waste of time to read more than 20 pictures 😰

Why do I feel like I spend money to buy a lot of water every day?

It's so boring, I feel like I could have written it clearly in three chapters, but just to make money, I just ended up with three chapters after another.

After reading eleven chapters, I still can't find anything interesting. To be honest, the protagonist traveled through the foggy space, conducted some experiments, and conducted experiments on tigers. It's not interesting. You can just summarize it in one sentence, or flashback and recall it in subsequent chapters. Why is it so attractive when you write this at the beginning? After reading the beginning, you no longer want to read it. No matter how exciting your subsequent alliances are, it's useless.

I discovered a pattern. As long as there are enough subscriptions, the author will have more or less problems.

I've been drinking recently. I've been raising it for so long and I haven't had any orgasms at all. If you want to finish it, just finish it. Don't waste the word count every day.

At least I can still drink the water. You're just wasting my time and money.

That's a good decision. If I had known I wouldn't have given you a monthly pass. It's just torture.

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Slightly poisonous. Names like Hokage's skills often appear. It loses the power of a time traveler. Just looking at it makes people want to abandon the book.

What kind of system is installed on this? It's so boring to watch.

The recent chapters of Qing Yu Nian are not good to watch, I skipped them all 😒 Please @ me when you finish Qing Yu Nian, thank you bro 😥

It's better to give the name of the force to Tianting. It's too low. It has a strong aboriginal smell of feudal bureaucracy in an agricultural society. You can smell it from afar, and you feel like you're about to be killed. Backwardness, ignorance, slavery, conservatism, stagnant water, despair, a mixture of all the negative aspects of the feudal dynasty, it is uncomfortable not to get rid of it.

What I am speechless about is that if a new time traveler joins the alliance and gets to know each other, you can make fun of her at will. Why don't you go and investigate? They are trying to save the world, but you move the Ultraman stone statue and turn her into a dog. Do you think you are being humorous? Grass.

Even though I've ordered it all, I still want to say that the content from the beginning to Chapter 16 of Mountain God is extremely poisonous. This plot arrangement is meaningless. A lot of words are spent describing the ignorant villagers, hunters, and temple blessings, but then none of them are used later. Obviously write the general function of the cheat in the first two chapters, and then break into the plot of the time traveler in the third chapter. You have to grind out a bunch of strange plots that have nothing to do with your theme and the main plot. It's like a book about upgrading. Everyone read the introduction and said that violent upgrades are waiting for you to upgrade. As a result, you are stuck at level 99 with nearly 50,000 words of experience. You fought a pink stuffed rabbit turn-based 99 times and still missed each other. The flowers have all faded. Is this what you want to do in a fast-paced online novel? It's chapter 200 now, where is your Orion? Where is your Orion sister? Where is your mountain god? Where is your ignorant little mountain village? Have you used it later? How can you write 16 chapters and more than 30,000 words without any use? The next Xiuchundao also vomited blood until the time traveler appeared. The pen and ink repeatedly jump around the protagonist of the original work, reflecting the feeling of a mother-in-law who wants to break away from the main plot but is hesitant. It's already 200 chapters, why don't you look at the large section of indigenous martial arts descriptions you wasted in Xiuchundao. Does it have any significance for the Heavenly Crossing Alliance that is now getting better? It was only from the beginning of the second world that I finally started writing. Although there were many minor flaws, such as a hammer in the east and a mallet in the west, it finally returned to the main selling point that many time travelers had cheated on. Fortunately, my poison resistance is higher than the early stage. Not many people have written about this idea of ​​wearing more clothes, it's very rare. The idea itself is gimmicky. The author has been able to write it so far, and it is worth the price.

The more I read the recent chapters, the more I felt dissatisfied. I always felt that the behavior of these characters was a bit strange. Only today did I understand why they were so arrogant. Everyone obviously does not have the capital, but is so arrogant that everyone except the time travelers does not pay attention to them. For those worlds, they are just a petri dish for time travellers. There is only one purpose in entering a world, to find the time travellers. The protagonist is strong enough and doesn't care about those worlds, but why should the others? They enter those worlds to become stronger and go home, and finding fellow villagers is just incidental, so why incidentally became the main purpose? This makes them look stupid and arrogant. Moreover, aside from the plot of the novel, from the author's perspective, I don't know what the author's thoughts are now. Writing a Zhutianliu novel actually does not focus on the interaction between the time traveler and different worlds, but instead makes the search for the time traveler the main content. I really don't understand it.

I don't quite understand what the protagonist's motivation is for forming the alliance of time travellers. As an invincible being, he gives power to new time travelers for free and allows this power to flow among the time travellers. However, the protagonist has no benefits as the organizer, cannot increase his power, and has no purpose. Helping others for the sake of helping others is really unclear.

If you continue to engage in reincarnation or something, just unsubscribe. I don't understand why so many people like to create a trumpet account and then go through the known plot again. It's numb.

Seeing that I haven't posted anything yet, I couldn't help but say a few words. The plots in these pictures are really unreasonable. Several time travelers came up and stared at the son-in-law protagonist. They didn't find the other time traveler, so they directly identified themselves first. What kind of assessment is this? . . At least you need to find them all and observe them for a while before comparing them. It was also said that King Qin was punished because he had offended the members of the alliance. He really couldn't complain. It smelled of forced pretentiousness. Reading it really made people dislike the time and space travelers in the alliance. Third, the reason why King Qin is not allowed to join the alliance is because he took action against the son-in-law and lost the three views of a modern person. Ask yourself, of those who have joined the alliance now, how many of them still have the three views of modern people? Isn't it like an advanced life form? People in other worlds are not human beings, they are just tools. Is this really the three views of modern people? Above.

It seemed a bit interesting at first, but the more I read, the less interesting it becomes. The protagonist is invincible, a dimensional demon, traveling through various worlds, and there are time travelers in each world. The protagonist just has enough to eat and nothing to do, and goes around to help others. He also established an alliance of Laoshizi time travellers. Reading a book seems to be of no use, but in fact it is of no use. At first I thought I had discovered this fairy grass, but the more I looked at it, the more boring I became...

I can't stand it after reading thirty chapters! Older people just find this book funny.

Let me talk about my personal views on the three stages of this book, Fascinating - slightly mediocre - nothing new (Zhetian) I have not read the original work of Zhetian, but I have read many other astronomical novels, which also describe the world of Zhetian, so I know a little about the background of (Zhetian). Every book of Zhu Tianwen cannot escape the fate of becoming the nanny of the protagonist group in the end. With the advantage of knowing the plot, he pretends to be an expert and helps the protagonist group make plans and explain various problems. You can still take a look at the first few worlds, but when it comes to Zhetian, you really can't stand it at all. Basically, after reading these few pictures, you can guess the plot behind it and there is nothing new. Every time I get to this moment, I always think of Dr. Chen (let's go over it again! I'm tired). Since then, this book has been completely the same as other astronomical articles in my heart.

Why didn't you learn a lesson? Writing about Panlong was boycotted. The foundation finally regained some reputation and went to Zhetian again. Zhu Tianwen is not suitable for writing about these worlds. Those who like the original work will be dissatisfied and make random changes, while those who don't like the original work will not be able to understand it.

It's dozens of chapters and I'm still playing it here at Jinyiwei. It's too long, and Rebellion is boring.

They are too poisonous, and I don't understand why they want to help the time-travelers. They are so conceited, they will not give in to the protagonist, and they will backstab the protagonist in the end.

How to put it this way, the protagonist is neither arrogant nor humble, but he is not considered a fun person, and he is not very qualified yet. However, the author insists on improving the protagonist's quality, which makes it a bit fragmented. Moreover, the so-called moral character of those who traveled through time is just like that, but their characters are basically the same as the protagonist. They are all fun people. There is nothing new. There is basically no exchanges between countries and wearing vests written in the introduction. To sum up: basically all time-travelers only know how to be reckless, but if they call the protagonist to be reckless, they will basically only increase their level and have no experience.