This Lord Is Too Loyal

In this way, I have a suggestion for the author's next book. In the next book, the male protagonist travels to a female-channeled urban novel and obtains a criticism system. However, the male protagonist feels that the criticism of weapons is also criticism, and the system determines that there is nothing wrong with the protagonist's criticism.

It feels like it is mechanically copying the standard industrial process, so there is not much content to write about each point, and together it becomes a running account. The author still wants to think about how things that are integrated with the world view, such as magic and undead, can be more integrated with the industrialization process, rather than simply being replaced by early subordinates. Another aboriginal is not a fool. It's boring to always ask the protagonist to answer the standard answer. It is appropriate to give the supporting character some eureka moments, something that combines the whole point with magic. They may not be able to come up with the optimal solution right away, but the collision process is much better than the current running account.

Question: Why does an underage witch who was trained as a disposable soldier think like a normal adult person? Did the person who trained her educate the witch out of good intentions?

I feel that there is no need to write too many heroines, she can just use them as cows, horses and puppets. If I write too many princesses, I am afraid it will be very toxic.

The author's writing skills are not strong enough, and I can't stand it even if I read it in one sitting.

No matter how good my writing is at the beginning, there are so few updates.

I will simply share my thoughts. First, are the knights and mages in this continent so useless? Second, even if the Duke's troops are at most knights, right? Is there no great knight? There is also no introduction to the mage group and the archmage. How far is their magic range? Third, there is a seventh-level strong man in the book. How strong is this strong man? Fourth, the author should be majoring in science and engineering. He writes in detail about the manufacturing of weapons, but about the entire battlefield and the expansion of the territory, he writes very idealistically. Fifth, the idea seems to be a magical continent, but it is actually feudal Europe.

Well, the world should be unified soon. Or a night cavalry attack. . . Just like World War I. Night cavalry assault. An infantry battalion was killed. . . It became the last call of the cavalry unit. .

I feel a little overwhelmed when I see this cover, a little disloyal.

For a group of people who haven't had enough to eat for a long time, physical punishment will cause trouble. Just pick up the spiritual injection stick and hit them and that's it.

It's pretty good. It can be said that the author has written a very standard model lord farming novel. Basically there is no poisonous point, but some plots are a bit boring. I hope it will continue to be good.

When I read the introduction, I thought it was about one person's power that could overturn the world. After reading three chapters, I found out that it was about stacking technology.

Generally speaking, it gives me a feeling of being eager for success but getting half the result with half the effort. I stopped looking at the Skeleton Tide. Among other things, there is a problem with the muskets and artillery mandarin duck formation. These three are human special attacks. The muskets and artillery are okay. Once the scale is large enough, they can hit anyone. The problem Five guns and one cannon are more intimidating than lethal. If you have all the guns and artillery, why don't you think about how to make powerful explosive charges? The Yuanyang Formation is even more problematic. It is used to fight unarmored human units. It is better to use it to fight undead units than to build two more shield soldiers to resist the line.

Apart from the goddess and the protagonist, there is nothing extraordinary. Really good

If it didn't reflect the plot of the goddess standing behind the protagonist, the Holy See would be wiped out so quickly. It would be so heart-wrenching to do something like that.

I hope the military uniforms behind are German military uniforms. I will vote twice a month.

Isn't this a hand-operated Gatling?

It's from the cover, it's not the Dharma Ring or even has nothing to do with it, I'm a little disappointed

It's been 3 days! Three days! Three days!

The same old routine has no depth and no fun. A newbie but not a novice.

There is no need to use an assault rifle in one step. Full-automatic ammunition with full power cannot be suppressed by humans. In this case, a semi-automatic is enough. There is no need to use a gas-operated bolt. The entire lever rifle will do. Even if you dislike the poor environmental adaptability of the lever rifle, you can also use a pump-action rifle. If you are lazy, you can use a mid-fold type. Okay, and the combat distance of modern light infantry is basically about two to three hundred meters. Full-power ammunition can indeed hit 500 meters, which is good, but you don't have a mirror, and soldiers can't see people 500 meters away. You can't have eagle eyes per person. The author can look at the principle of the Maxim machine gun in World War I. Also, why not get mortars? If that thing is distributed to infantry, it will really be a dimensionality reduction attack.

It should have been cut(ﾒ｀ﾛ´)/🔪

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Periodic corpse fraud, you might as well just cut it off

The rhythm of the plot feels very strange. It's okay for a novel but not amazing enough.

Okay, that's so slow, so slow, I'll rub it

The writing is quite good, but it keeps updating intermittently for several days.

I don't want to read the status updates from February 14th to now. It would be even more uncomfortable if you cut it.

The biggest problem with this book is the update

Okay