This Lord Is Far Too Loyal

In this way, I have a suggestion for the author's next book. In the next book, the male protagonist travels to a female-channeled urban novel and obtains a criticism system. However, the male protagonist feels that the criticism of weapons is also criticism, and the system determines that there is nothing wrong with the protagonist's criticism.

It feels like it is mechanically copying the standard industrial process, so there is not much content to write about each point, and together it becomes a running account. The author still wants to think about how things that are integrated with the world view, such as magic and undead, can be more integrated with the industrialization process, rather than simply being replaced by early subordinates. Another aboriginal is not a fool. It's boring to always ask the protagonist to answer the standard answer. It is appropriate to give the supporting character some eureka moments, something that combines the whole point with magic. They may not be able to come up with the optimal solution right away, but the collision process is much better than the current running account.

Question: Why does an underage witch who was trained as a disposable soldier think like a normal adult person? Did the person who trained her educate the witch out of good intentions?

I feel that there is no need to write too many heroines, she can just use them as cows, horses and puppets. If I write too many princesses, I am afraid it will be very toxic.

The author's writing skills are not strong enough, and I can't stand it even if I read it in one sitting.

No matter how good my writing is at the beginning, there are so few updates.

I will simply share my thoughts. First, are the knights and mages in this continent so useless? Second, even if the Duke's troops are at most knights, right? Is there no great knight? There is also no introduction to the mage group and the archmage. How far is their magic range? Third, there is a seventh-level strong man in the book. How strong is this strong man? Fourth, the author should be majoring in science and engineering. He writes in detail about the manufacturing of weapons, but about the entire battlefield and the expansion of the territory, he writes very idealistically. Fifth, the idea seems to be a magical continent, but it is actually feudal Europe.

Well, the world should be unified soon. Or a night cavalry attack. . . Just like World War I. Night cavalry assault. An infantry battalion was killed. . . It became the last call of the cavalry unit. .

I feel a little overwhelmed when I see this cover, a little disloyal.

For a group of people who haven't had enough to eat for a long time, physical punishment will cause trouble. Just pick up the spiritual injection stick and hit them and that's it.